2023年高考英语复习讲练测第20讲 短文改错（练）（全国通用解析版）

1、2023年高考英语复习讲练测第20讲短文改错（练）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（-）、My friend travels to many places when she was young. But she cant drive it now

2、 due to a problem with her hand. On the phone she said she wanted to go and see the gardens with full blooms. So we drove to the garden on the side of the mountain and spent a happier day there.After see the beautiful flowers, we had tea and snacks together on benches overlooking the wide mountain a

3、nd sky landscape.It was lovely to listen for her talk about her school life. At school she had subjects such as cooking, baking, or crafting. She was delighted to talk and what delighted I was to hear about her colorfully life!【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和朋友边喝下午茶，边聊天，边欣赏美景的经历。. travels travelled【解析】考查动词。句

4、意：我的朋友年轻时去过很多地方。句中描述的是过去发生的 事实，应该使用一般过去时。故将travels改为travelled。.it【解析】删除考查代词。句意：但她现在不能开车了，因为她的手有问题。句中drive此处为不及物动 词，意为“开车”，后不需要接宾语。故将it删除。gardens garden【解析】考查名词。句意：她在 里说她想去看那些开满鲜花的花园。句中garden 表示的是单数，故将gardens改为garden。happier-happy【解析】考查形容词。句意：于是我们开车去了山边的花园，在那里度过了快乐的一天。 此处没有表达出比拟级，使用形容词原级对day进行修饰。故将ha

5、ppier改为happy。see-seeing【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：看完美丽的花朵后，我们一起坐在长凳上喝茶、吃点心， 俯瞰着宽阔的山川和天空。句中after为介词，后接动名词作宾语。故将see改为seeing。benches前加the【解析】考查冠词。句意：同上。句中on the benches为固定搭配，意为在长椅上”。 故在benches前加the。forto【解析】考查介词。句意:听她讲她的学校生活真是太好了。句中listent。为固定搭配，故将for 改为tOo8.or- and【解析】考查连词。句意:在学校里，她有烹饪、烘焙和手工制作等科目。此处表示并列关系， 故将or改为

6、ando.what-how【解析】考查感叹句。句意：她很高兴交谈，我是多么高兴听到她丰富多彩的生活！句中是 对delighted形容词进行感叹，应该使用how。故将what改为how。.colorfullycolorful【解析】考查形容词。句意：同上。应该使用形容词修饰名词，作定语。故将colorfully 改为 colorful o（二）、I think there should be a specially festival for teenagers in China calling Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most te

7、enagers in China are bring up as the only child in the family. Usually given too much care and attention, and they are likely to take everything for granted. In Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to do voluntary works wherever they are needed. They may help to raise money for those whi

8、ch suffer from a serious disease, go to a nursing home to do what is good for the elderly or collecting books for children in poor areas. The more voluntary work they do, more considerate and responsible you will be.【语篇解读】这是一篇应用文。作者建议在中国设立青少年志愿者日，并给出了设立这一节日的理由。 1.speciallyspecial【解析】考查形容词。句意：我认为中国应该

9、为青少年设立一个特殊的节日，叫做青少 年志愿者日。根据句中的名词festival可知，应该用形容词来修饰festival,所以要用过去分词作定语。故 将 specially 改为 special o.callingcalled【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：我认为中国应该为青少年设立一个特殊的节日，叫做青 少年志愿者日。根据句意可知，这一节日被称作青少年志愿日，所以动词call和前面被修饰的名词festival 之间是被动关系。故将calling改为calledo.bringbrought【解析】考查被动语态。句意：众所周知，在中国，大多数青少年是作为独生子女被抚养 长大的。根据句意可知，大多数

10、青少年是作为独生子女被抚养长大的，所以句中应该用被动语态。故将bring 改为 brought o4,删除and【解析】考查连词。句意：通常被给予太多的照顾和关注，他们很可能认为一切都是理所当然 的。分析句子可知，逗号前的局部“usually given too much care and attention”是过去分词作状语，逗号后的 局部”they are likely to take everything for granted.”是句子，二者不是并列关系。故将and删除。n-On【解析】考查介词。句意：在青少年志愿者日，青少年被鼓励去任何需要他们的地方做志愿者工 作。英语中具体到某一天

11、要用介词。n。故将In改为On。.works-work【解析】考查名词。句意：在青少年志愿者日，青少年被鼓励去任何需要他们的地方做志愿 者工作。work翻译为“工作”时是不可数名词。故将works改为work。.whichwhose【解析】考查定语从句。句意：他们可以帮助那些患有严重疾病的人筹集资金，去养老院 做对老人有益的事或为贫困地区的儿童收集书籍。此处是考查定语从句，先行词those的意思是“那些人”, 所以关系代词要用who,且在从句中作主语故将which改为whoc.collectingcollect【解析】考查动词。句意：他们可以帮助那些患有严重疾病的人筹集资金，去养老院做 对老人

12、有益的事或为贫困地区的儿童收集书籍。根据句中的连词or可知，or后面的动词和前面的动词raise 和go并列的，所以collect应该用动词原形。故将collecting改为collecto.在第二more前加the【解析】考查固定句型。句意：他们做的志愿工作越多，他们就会越体贴和负责。 根据前面的the more可知，此处是考查固定句型“The more., the more故在第二个more前加the。.youthey【解析】考查代词。句意：他们做的志愿工作越多，他们就会越体贴和负责。根据前面的 句子“The more voluntary work they do”可知，后半句的主语也应该

13、是theyo故将you改为theyo（三）、Dear Li Hua,Im writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you ask about in the last e-mail.Edinburgh, located in the southeast of Scotland, was the capital city of Scotland as well as their political and cultural center. It covers a area of 264 square kilometers with o

14、nly a small population 1. 33 million. With the airport lain in the center of the city, it is convenient for people to go around. Close to the seaside, Edinburgh has a mild climate, that makes it one of the most popular tourism city in the UK. It also has absolute splendid ancient architecture, like

15、the Edinburgh Castle.I will be happy to guide you around our city if you will come here.Yours,Harry 【语篇解读】本文是一篇应用文。文章是一封书信。文章主要介绍了苏格兰东南部城市爱丁堡。.ask- asked【解析】考查时态。句意：我写信是想告诉你你在上一封邮件中问的关于爱丁堡的事情。句 子是含有定语从句的复合句。根据in the last e-mail可知从句的动作发生在过去，从句的时态为一般过去 时，要用ask的过去式askedo故将ask改为askedo.was is【解析】考查时态。句意：

16、爱丁堡位于苏格兰东南部，是苏格兰的首都，也是苏格兰的政治、 文化中心。根据分析这里讲述的是客观事实，句子为主系表结构，且时态为一般现在时，句子主语为 Edinburgh,单数概念，be动词用is。故将was改为is。.their-its【解析】考查代词。句意：爱丁堡位于苏格兰东南部，是苏格兰的首都，也是苏格兰的政治和 文化中心。这里代指“苏格兰的“，用形容词性物主代词its修饰名词center。故将their改为its。.a-an【解析】考查冠词。句意：它的面积为264平方公里，人口只有133万。area以元音音素开头， 所以用不定冠词an。这里使用固定搭配covers an area of表

17、示“占地故将a改为an。.population后加of【解析】考查介词。句意：它的面积为264平方公里，人口只有133万。这里使用“with a population of +基数词”的结构，表示“有人口”。故在population后加of。61ain - lying【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：由于机场位于市中心，人们出行很方便。根据分析这里是with 的复合结构，且lie与逻辑主语the aii-port为主动关系，所以用现在分词lying作宾补。故将lain改为 lyingo.that - which【解析】考查定语从句。句意：爱丁堡靠近海边，气候温和，这使它成为英国最受欢迎的旅 游城市

18、之一。根据分析句子是含有非限制性定语从句的复合句。先行词为a mild climate,指物，且非限定 性定语从句中缺主语，所以关系代词whicho故将that改为whicho.city-cities【解析】考查名词的数。句意：爱丁堡靠近海边，气候温和，这使它成为英国最受欢迎的旅 游城市之一。这里使用固定搭配“one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”表示“最之一。city是可 数名词，所以这里用其复数形式citieso故将city改为citieso.absolute absolutely【解析】考查副词。句意：它也有非常壮观的古代建筑，比方爱丁堡城堡。修饰形 容词splendid可用

19、副词作状语，这里表示“绝对壮丽的“，所以用副词absolutely“绝对地”。故将absolute改 为 absolutelyo.删去come前的will【解析】考查时态。句意：如果你来这里，我很乐意带你游览我们的城市。根据 分析句子含有if引导的条件状语从句，遵循“主将从现”的原那么，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时， 所以这里要删去willo故删去come前的wilL（四）、One day, my teacher told me some exciting news. I was one of the students whom had the chance to play the pi

20、ano in the concert. Heard this, I filled up of a mix of excitement and horror. In order to perfect my piece, I practiced hard than before. The big day arrived. When it was my turn to play, and I felt a little terrifying. But I slowly make my way up to the stage. With a few mistake made during the pe

21、rformance, I finished the whole piece. It was my first time perform in public, and I realized that the most important thing are to be confident and take action when we do everything.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者第一次在舞台上演奏钢琴的过程和感悟。 l.whomwho/that【解析】考查定语从句。句意：我是有机会在音乐会上弹钢琴的学生之一。句子含有一 个定语从句，先行词为。ne of the stu

22、dents,且在限制性定语从句中作主语，指人，所以用关系代词that或 who引导定语从句。故whom改为who/thato. Heard-Hearing【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：听了这话，我心中充满了兴奋和恐惧。非谓语动词hear 和逻辑主语I之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作状语，首字母大写。故将Heard改为Hearing。.of-with【解析】考查介词。句意:听了这话，我心中充满了兴奋和恐惧。fillup with意为“充满。是固 定搭配。故将of改为with。.hard harder【解析】考查副词的比拟级。句意：为了完善我的作品，我比以前更努力地练习。结合句 中的“than b

23、efore”，所以副词hard用比拟级。故将hard改为hardero.terrifying-terrified【解析】考查形容词。句意：轮到我演出的时候，我觉得有点害怕。主语是人I,表 示“人感到有点害怕”，应该用修饰人的V-ed的形容词terrified作表语。V-ing常用来修饰物，terrifying指“令 人害怕的故将terrifying改为terrifiedo. make-made【解析】考查时态。句意：但我慢慢地走上了舞台。描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时态， 动词make使用过去式。故make改为made。.mistakemistakes【解析】考查名词的数。句意：演奏中出现了

24、一些错误，但是我完成了整首曲子。mistake 为可数名词，前面有a few,后接复数名词mistakeso故将mistake改为mistakeso.在perform前加to【解析】考查固定句型。句意：这是我第一次公开演出，我意识到最重要的是要有信 心，在我们做任何事情时都要采取行动。it is/was sb5s first time to do sth.,意为“某人第一次干某事”,是固 定句型。故在perform前加to。.areis【解析】考查时态和主谓一致。句意：这是我第一次公开演出，我意识到最重要的是要有信心， 在我们做任何事情时都要采取行动。句中含有that引导的宾语从句，结合时间状

25、语从句中的“we do everything”可知陈述事实用一般现在ET寸，主语the most important thing是单数概念，系动词使用is。故将are 改为iso.something 一 any thing【解析】考查不定代词。句意：这是我第一次公开演出，我意识到最重要的是要有 信心，在我们做任何事情时都要采取行动。结合句意可知表示“任何事情”应该用不定代词anything,而不 是 something （某事）。故将 something 改为 anythingo（五）、On the cold morning, my brother suddenly became uncons

26、cious. He then rushed to hospital and it turned out that she had a severe brain disease. When he finally came back home, we did that most families would do. We tried to help him as many as we could. One afternoon, he was at home alone for a few hours. When we returned, all the furnitures in his bedroom had been rearranged. My mom asks in surprise, Who did that?” My brother replied delighted, Me. At that moment, we were all greatly amazed at that he had recovered a lot and had the strength to moving things.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者的弟弟一次患病之后，终于恢复体力能够做家务的