读后续写之巧克力的故事 讲义-高三英语写作专项

1、巧克力的故事It took place in a teachers family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school, when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off. What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common de

2、coration but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mothers favourite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place. （Ben 打破花瓶）As the mother herself dusted the vas

3、e every day, she naturally noticed the cracks（裂纹）that evening. To her surprise, the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase. Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbours cat jumped in from the window and he couldnt drive it a

4、way no matter how hard he tried. It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was quite clear that her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned. However, in the face of her sons nervou

5、s eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members. Bens mother remained calm. She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to the study at once

6、. The boy thought he would now be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mothers face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter, s

7、he took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.第一段 The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!”大思路：1、坏态度一恼羞成怒+否认2.妈妈继续给巧克力+优点小思路：1 .羞耻生气，否认 普通： Ben felt very ashamed and angry and he said ：“mom believe me I did not break the vase升级1:羞耻-脸红 生气-跺脚H

8、e felt so ashamed that his face got flash but he still denied what he had done , stamping in angero升级2：独立主格（with+n+非谓语）With his face getting flashed that he denied what he had done ,stamping in anger.升级3 :万金油：1 .sb be overwhelmed by a feeling of+情感名词，表示某种感情. A feeling of +XX welled up inside sbHe wa

9、s overwhelmed by a feeling of anger and shame,but he still denied what he had done .A feeling of anger and shame welled up inside him,but he still denied what he had done.升级4：形容词做状语Angry and ashamed as he felt ,he denied everything he dido.妈妈给第二课巧克力，说repair work很好his mother ignored his words and del

10、ivered another chocolate to him ,saying that XX his mother ignored his words and delivered another chocolate to him , saying:”his mother ignored his words and delivered another chocolate to him, saying in a soft voicethis chocolate is for your good repair work.害怕，不安he felt so frightened that his pal

11、ms are sweaty and his legs trembling, but he said in a tumbling voice :believe me, mom ,it was a cat that broken the vase . Not me.”With his palms sweating and his legs trembling, he said in a trembling voice :beli eve me, mom ,it was a cat that broken the vase . Not me.”A feeling of fright and unea

12、siness welled up inside him , he said in a tumbling voice :believe me, mom ,it was a cat that broken the vase . Not me.”Quite frighted and unesay as hefelt ,he said in a trembling voice :believe me, mom ,it was a cat thatbroken the vase . Not me.”妈妈给第三课巧克力，说Mom interrupted him,handed the third one t

13、o him and said patiently J this chocalate is used to praise you for your courage to come to the study.第二段 Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared. 大思路：1.认错2.妈妈开心+继续给3.升华主题一大道理-honesty-妈妈的话小思路：1.意识到错误，成认错误并且向妈妈抱歉After he realizing his mistake , he admitted his mistake and

14、apologized to his mother Realizing his mistake , he lowered his head , admitted his mistake for lying and breaking the vase,and sincerely apologized to his mother.妈妈感到很开心，并且给了他剩下的巧克力.妈妈说的话：大道理开心 ： wild with joy , his mom sent the rest of the chocolates to him ,what matters most is your honesty and you deserve the reward i give you.小男孩也非常开心、小男孩明白了Hearing that, a gentle smile spread over his