初中英语 沪教牛津版 9B U1 Writing：A famous travel writer 课件

1、Period 5WritingA famous travel writerModule 1 Explorations and exchangesUnit 1Great explorations深圳市罗湖区翠园东晓中学 Nancy 倪桃英2Do you remember these great explorers ?Lead inZheng HeZheng Hes voyages down the Western SeasChristopher ColumbusChristopher Columbuss discovery of AmericaZhang QianZhang Qians open

2、ing up of the ancient Silk Road and touring in the Western regionsMarco Polos voyage in ChinaMarco PoloHave you ever seen such travel notes? James Turner is a famous travel writer. A reporter Kate interviewed him. Here is part of an interview with him. Work in pairs to match the answers with the que

3、stions. Write the letters in the boxes. (P 11)Pre-writingHere is Kates notes In London in 1970.My father was a cook and my mother was a writer.Im following the route that was taken by Marco Polo. Im plannning to write a book about him and his journeyI usually write while I am traveling, so my first

4、book started from the notes I took.At first, I got a job at a travel company. However I wanted to explore the world myself. Then I went to China to teach English. From there I explored the rest of Asia.I like to write about the places I visit. I often compare their cultures with my own. It helps me

5、learn more about the world.JameshisWork on your own. Write an article about James Turner in three paragraphs. Use Jamess answers and the outline below to help you.James Turner a famous travel writerHis personal informationJames Turner is a famous travel writer. He was born_.His experiences after he

6、left schoolWhen James left school, he _.His booksHe usually writes while he is travelling, so _. James TurnerJames Turner is a famous travel writer. He was born in London in 1970. His father was a cook, and his mother was a writer. When James left school, he got a job at a travel company. However, h

7、e was so eager to explore the world that he left the job and went to China to teach English. From there he explored the rest of Asia.He usually writes while he is travelling, so his first book started from the notes he took. He likes to write about the places he visits. He often compares their cultu

8、res with his own. It helps him learn more about the world. He is planning to write a book about Marco Polo and his journey.TitleHis personal infermationHis experiences after he left schoolHis booksHow to write a famous travel writerWho is he?个人信息徐 霞 客：出生于1587年，明代，幼年好学。生平经历考察了我国大江南北21省，发现了许多奇山秀水。.著作写

9、下了徐霞客游记（Travels of Xu Xiake).写作要求：1. 不得出现真实的校名和人名2. 80词左右参考词汇：geographer地理学家 make a great contribution to做出巨大贡献_ WritingA famous travel writerAbout Xu XiakeWhat is a perfect writing? a good structure key points good sentences linking words no errors good handwriting a good structure key points good

10、sentences linking words no errors good handwritingPersonalinformationExperiencesHis bookWriters ideasBeginningBodyEnding主要的语言错误 Main language errors名词的单复数问题 动词的时态以及非谓语形式问题 形容词和副词的问题冠词的问题介词的问题主谓不一致问题 主要的语言错误 Main language errors名词的单复数问题 动词的时态以及非谓语形式问题 形容词和副词的问题冠词的问题介词的问题主谓不一致问题 had hadincludesbrought usEvaluate the articlePost-writing :15-13分，语言正确无误，表达得体，行文流畅，要点齐全。12-10分，内容较完整，表达较流畅，意思较连贯，但有少量错误。9-7分，意思表达尚清楚，但有一些错误。6-4分，部分意思表达尚清楚，但有较多错误。3-0分，能写出与文章相关的词，但不能表达完整的意思。Evaluate the articlePost-writing 15-13分，语言正确无误