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1、少喊口号，多说实话论新闻联播对雅思考生写作成绩的影响1Topic: Some people think that secondary school students should study international news as a school subject, but others argue that it would be a waste of valuable school time. What is your opinion on the issue?With cooperation among countries getting closer, schools are co

2、nsidering including international news in secondary students curriculum. However, some are against the idea, insisting that it is simply a waste of time. As far as I am concerned, the benefits of having international news as a subject outweigh its side effects.2To begin with, international news enab

3、les students to expand their outlook as well as arouse their awareness towards different cultures, since it almost covers every aspect of peoples daily lives, varying from politics to economy, and even to fashion or superstar gossip. In addition, learning news reports benefits teenagers in developin

4、g their critical thinking abilities and analytical skills. Last but not the least, being exposed to news reports often allows adolescents to enhance their sensitivity and the ability to pick up useful information, which will gain themselves competitive advantage over their counterparts in this infor

5、mation age.3However, although knowledge of international news has certain merits, its side effects should never be ignored. For instance, there are many negative reports regarding war, violence and crime, which may impose negative effects on youngsters psychological wellbeing. Whats worse, false or

6、incomplete coverage misleads teenagers in their judgments and opinions on the world around them. Additionally, one more subject means that students have to spend more time and concentration, which increases the burden on students. They already have so heavy workloads.4To summarize, it is reasonable

7、that secondary school students study international news, as long as schools and teachers choose suitable content and arrange appropriate workloads.5换句话说In other words这是很有效的重复表达方式，可以将前一句做出更多解释。但是一定要记住，前一句话必须有很好的总结能力和语法能力。1). The availability of a decent job and a satisfying salary is frequently subje

8、ct to the academic achievement that one has accomplished. In other words, large companies, like IBM or Apple, normally set minimum requirements for applicants in terms of their educational qualification. 2). Parents play a vital part in the early year education of their children. In other words, edu

9、cating children to understand the importance of obeying rules and respecting others always begins in the home. 63). The availability of other forms of alternative energies is strictly subject to local conditions in terms of geograph and climate. In other words, construction of a wind farm would not

10、be possible unless the average wind strength remains at a certain level throughout a year. 4). 老年人比例的增加会带来养老的巨大压力。换句话说就是，老年人更容易被各种疾病袭击，所以政府不得不花更多的钱修建医院，雇佣医生来照顾这些高等公民。7使用介词By来对前一句话进行进一步的解释，前一句话也尽可能写出书面的水平阅读中应该尽可能积累1). The employment of robots enables factories and manufacturers to substantially cut t

11、heir costs on production. By replacing human workers with automatic machine staff, owners of enterprises are no longer concerned with problems associated with salaries, insurances and pensions. 2). The choice to be involved in a study-abroad program allows young adults to experience personal and aca

12、demic growth. By leaving their comfort zone, on the one hand, young people expose themselves to various problems and difficulties that they have never been faced with.83). 消费当地生产的食物对环境是有好处的。通过减少食物产品的运输，化石燃料的消耗能够被减少，这对环境是有巨大贡献的。9使用For people who.的结构来解释前一句话的具体对象，而不是空洞地覆盖所有人。1). The choice to have a me

13、al at a fast food restaurant allows people to save their time for more important things. For people who are most concerned about their working efficiency, eating a fast food meal takes the minimal amount of time that is considerably less than the time spent sitting at a traditional restaurant or pre

14、paring food at home. 2). International charitable assistance is vitally important. For people who live in a country where food production is far from enough or civil war has never stopped, donation from other countries turns out to be the only life saving action. 103). 天赋在通往成功的路上扮演了重要的角色。对于那些为了奥运会或者

15、洲际比赛冠军的运动员来说，是否有天赋比每天艰苦的训练要重要的多。虽然有天赋的选手不一定会世界知名，但是没有天生能力的人是很难脱颖而出的。11通过切换前后两句话的同一个单词词性，可以得到很好的连贯写作能力。1). A considerable proportion of elderly people are relatively illiterate in the use of high technology, such as connecting mobile devices to the Internet or searching and downloading what they need. Their illiteracy in modern way of reading makes the existence of traditional libraries really necessary.2). More and more countries choose to research and develop the use of nuclear energy. This choice is basically related to the fact that nuclear energ