中考英语作文高分模板

1、 中考英语作文高分模板高分作文“十字诀”一、结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结二、要点：全，围绕中心三、逻辑：逻辑词递进：first, second, third, finally; first of all, in addition/whats more/ more over(都是另外的意思), in a word/all in all(表示总结); last but not least(最后但同样重要的是)转折：but, yet, however等因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, t

2、hus, therefore, as a result, so that, so/such.that.总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary四、语法：硬性要求，如人称、时态、语态、从句、单复数等问题五、亮点：高级词汇和加分句型1. 表达不同观点看法的句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Different people have different ideas/opinio

3、ns on this problem. 关于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点 = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人认为做某事是的 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Some of them are against the idea that it is 他们中有些人反对的想法 = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that(观点一或二). It is not on

4、ly because, but also because All in all, the more., the more.2. 解决问题的句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT In recent days, we have to face a problem-_, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我们不得不面临一个问题：_, 这个问题变得越来越严重； = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Faced with., we should take a series of effective measures to d

5、eal with the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一). For another, (解决方法二). Finally, (解决方法三). = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better. 我相信如果每个人都能对做出贡献，这个.将会变得越来越好。3. 说明原因句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT The reason for this are as follows. 这一点的

6、几种原因如下 = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT For one reason is that For another reason is that 一个原因是, 另一个原因是 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT On the one hand, ; On the other hand, 一方面，另一方面4. 说明利弊型句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvan

7、tages in.(题目议题). = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常来说，人们相信有如下几点优势。 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一；In addition, 缺点二. =

8、 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In that case, we will make a better use of 总之，我们应该尽力充分利用其优势，同时减少缺点。如果那样的话，我们将能更好的利用5. 正反观点式句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Recently we have had a discussion about whether we s

9、hould Our opinions are divided on this topic. (导入，观点有分歧) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出2-3个理由) However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点). Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more.In a

10、ddition.(列出2-3个反对理由) = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms, so I support it. (个人观点)6. 个人观点论述句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for this are as follo

11、ws. (亮明自己的观点） = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT First of all SecondlyBesides (列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由) = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT In conclusion, I believe that (总结，构成总分总结构)7. 提出建议类句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Im so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in in you last last letter(背景介绍). As far as I am concerned, it wou

12、ld be wise to take the following suggestions. (导入下文) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT To begin with, Id like to suggest that you should Because it can In add

13、ition, if I were you, I would This is a good way of Whats more, you are supposed to Only then you will(列举建议内容以及理由) = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. (表达愿望)8. 表达活动邀请类句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I know that you are i

14、nterested in And I am writing to invite you to take part in (背景介绍，提出邀请) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT There is an activity about(活动名称), which will be held (活动地点). It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on July 1st(时间) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, will be put on. (活动内容). = 3 * GB3 * MERG

15、EFORMAT Come and join us! I think well have a great time. (再次提出邀请) = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)9. 表达求助类句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT (背景介绍). I find it is quite hard to (提出问题). Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/ give me a hand

16、. (表达目的) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Im faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with Whats more What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you can help me with these difficult

17、ies. I really appreciate it if you could help me.10. 表达感谢类句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多亏） Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Without your help, its impossible for me to. (没有你的帮助，对我来视说是不可能的) Without your help, its

18、impossible for me to get such good grades. = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的帮助使得我做某事成为可能。)Your help makes it possible for me to change myself. 中考英语作文范文必备1. 【低碳生活-环保】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述

19、自己的“低碳生活”。My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always

20、 turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.2. 【朋友-社交】每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我”。请你以Friends为题，写一

21、篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。FriendsWhat are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Dont forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is h

22、ard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You cant walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.3. 【是否应该帮助陌生人-社会现象】最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，

23、你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions.Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,

24、 and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, its hard to imagine what our world will be like.However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us troubl

25、e.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.4.【对我

26、影响最深的人-人物介绍】 学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点：1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁;2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们;3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作;4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5. 我希望 The Person Who Has Influenced Me MostMy mother is the person who has influenced m

27、e most.She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she cant be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good do

28、ctor.I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. Shed better have more time to relax herself.5.【如何与父母保持良好的关系-家庭教育】某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;

29、2. 你对这些问题的看法;3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They dont allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my pa

30、rents dont quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they dont allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I stud

31、y hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.6.【安全演讲】为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe

32、? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our h

33、ealth. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first !7.【关于阅读】你喜欢阅读吗?请你以 “ReadingA good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。内容包括：1. 你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等)。2. 阅读带给你什么益处(至少两点)。3. 号召大家都读书。ReadingA good HabitReading is a very good ha

34、bit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some

35、 of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since readin

36、g can benefits us a lot, its time for us to have our good reading habit now!8.【养成良好的生活和学习习惯】养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数80-100左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。A Good Habit, a Successful School LifeA habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that

37、is hard to stop doing.In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet.Also, its necessary for us to exercise a lot.And we should learn to make good use of our time.In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson.In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully.Besides, its important f

38、or us to do our homework on our own.In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills.We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.9.【文明行为】为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写

39、一篇短文。(以上背景内容无需表述)短文要点如下：1.学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话;2.礼貌待人，热心助人;3.遵守交通规则;不在公共场所喧哗;不乱扔垃圾;4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。How to behave wellBehaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.As a student, I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty word

40、s. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally，learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.10.【关于梦想】每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的?你

41、的中国梦是什么呢?为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢?假设你叫李红(Li Hong),请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。My DreamEveryone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My

42、names Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I wont give it up , I must get it over .Im sure its very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, o

43、thers are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.11.【与他人相处】当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others?”为题，写一篇英语短文。讨论结果1.尊重他人；2.学会沟通；3.乐于助人；4我的建议How to get on well with othersAs w

44、e all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.

45、Whats more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.12.【饮食文化】在不同的地方有不同的风俗习惯，饮食文化很重要。中国的饮食文化不同于西方。请你谈谈中国的三餐，以“when you in China, do as

46、 the Chinese do!” 为题写一篇短文。When in China, do as the Chinese doMeals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West.In China, lunch is usually served around 12 oclock.As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West.Chopsticks are used to eat most food.Generally, f

47、or dinner, there will be lots of different dishes, not just three courses.Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so its a good topic during a meal.The golden rule is: when youre in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!13.【传统节日-春节】近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以“The Spring F

48、estival”为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。The Spring FestivalThe Spring Festival is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It is on the first day of the lunar year.People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate

49、 their homes. On Chinese New Years Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky mo

50、ney from them.14.【谈论ipad使用利弊】假如你是李华,是一名初中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇短文,谈谈中学生使用iPad的利弊。短文内容必须包括以下几点:1. 使用iPad对学习的好处;2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响;3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。Is iPad good or bad for middle school studentsIm a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many studen

51、ts have iPads and they think its a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and li

52、sten to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to stud

53、y, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.15.【感谢】三年的初中生活即将结束,静坐在考场中的你,一定会思绪万千。三年来,你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩,这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励,还有现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you,my.”为题写一篇英语短文。Thank

54、 you,My English teacherI should say “thank you”to my English teacher.Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. Hes kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that w

55、e know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.I will remember him forever.16.【关于网购】随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物

56、的文章。优点：1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。2. 价格通常比较便宜。3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。缺点：1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Ju

57、st by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two

58、sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.17.【保护野生动物】2020年，一种新型冠状病毒 (novel coronavirus ) 在全球蔓延。据传，这种病毒是从野生动物传染给人类。假定你是李华，今天你班召开了“敬畏自然，保护野生动物”的主题班会，此次活动让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。班会后，你打算写一份英文倡议书投给你校英文校报，以此号召全校同学行动起来，为保护野生动物而努力。Wild animals are our friends. We live on