牛津深圳版九年级下册英语课件 Unit 6 课时5 Writing

1、课时5 Writing Unit 6 Caring for your health本单元的话题为“健康问题和建议”，该话题常见的命题方式为要求学生学会描述现实生活中的健康问题，并给出解决问题的方案。牛津沪教版九年级下pressure, short-sighted, habit, snack, healthy单 词： get fatter and fatter, relax themselves, make a balance, study habits, do exercise短 语： 1. They have too much homework to do.2. I think they n

2、eed to find time to relax themselves.3. Whats more, 8 percent of the students get fatter and fatter.句 型：最近，你们学校就学生的健康状况做了问卷调查，下面是调查中发现的主要问题及其成因。请你根据表格中的内容提示用英语写一篇短文，对此次问卷调查的结果作一点儿说明。要求：1. 80 词以上（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 须补充完整表格中未给出的内容；3. 可适当发挥。参考词汇：short-sighted 近视的Recently, our school has done a survey a

3、bout the students health. Here are the main problems.问题成因建议压力太大(75%)作业太多，没有足够的时间做自己喜欢的事情找时间放松眼睛近视(65%)学习习惯不好，看电视太多变胖(8%)【审题指导】体裁说明文人称问卷调查以第三人称为主，谈论自己观点用第一人称时态提建议以一般现在时为主【思路构建】Recently, our school has done a survey about the students health. Here are the main problems. 75 percent of the students are

4、under too much pressure. They have too much homework to do and dont have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax themselves and try to make a balance between study and rest. 【范文赏析】65 percent of the students watch too much TV in their daily life, and they also

5、 dont have good study habits, so they are short-sighted. I think they should do homework or read books in a correct way, and spend less time on TV or cellphones. Whats more, 8 percent of the students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly do exercise. In my opinion, its bet

6、ter for them to have more healthy food and do exercise every day.In a word, its important for you to have a healthy living habit. 点评：本篇作文用三段式的写法，第一段，先描述情况，引出话题；第二段，具体写有哪些问题，以及提出的建议；第三段，总结要养成良好的生活习惯。本文时态以一般现在时为主，使用了一些高级词汇、短语和句型， 如under too much pressure, relax themselves, make a balance between study

7、 and rest, spend less time on, get fatter and fatter 等提高了文章档次。Whats more, In my opinion 的使用使文章表达自然、流畅。现在，有的同学不吃早饭就去上学。请针对这种现象写一篇短文。内容：1学生不吃早饭的原因；2不吃早饭对学生的影响（至少两个方面）；3你认为应该如何合理安排早餐？要求：80-100 词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Some of us go to school without having breakfast._Some of us go to school without having breakf

8、ast. One reason is that they may not feel like eating anything early in the morning. Another reason could be that they dont think the food is delicious.But going to school without eating breakfast has some bad effects on them. If they dont have breakfast, theyll get hungry during the classes, so they wont listen to the teacher carefully. _Even worse, itll be bad for their health. A growing child needs enough nutrition.Breakfast provides the energy our body needs. I really hope everyone can