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1、评分标准：结构清晰、衔接得当、段落内统一。论证有力、方式多样(du yn)、有事实细节。句式多样、词汇丰富、无语法错误。共十三页 With the development of education, more and more subjects have come out. Some people suggest that it is more beneficial for students to choose the subjects which are associated with their ideal job than the subjects they like. I agree

2、with it because it actaully has several advantages. 共十三页 First of all, the subject that prepare for your future job always can give your more energy. You can only be longing for success when you know your direction. For instance, my brother choosed business because he wants to be a business man. He

3、worked harder than his classmates and participated a lot of school activities that about business. Although he got many taskes to do, he told me that he felt more energetic than others since he knew what he had done could pay off when he begins his career. Now he is running a famous corporation and

4、he really feels thankful because he made the right decision. So these subjects foster us to work harder and gain more power.共十三页 Second, these subjects really save your time after graduating. For instance, there was a survey about the univrsity subject and students future life. It showed us that stu

5、dents who choosed the subject they liked could get better transcripts than others. However, to our amazement, the students who choosed the subject similar with their future jobs were more outstanding than others after graduating. One of a student complained that after he left universities, he could

6、not find satisfied jobs so he just squander his time and money playing and shopping. It really wastes time. However, well-prepared students can always find jobs quickly, know the society and get more time to complish their dreams.共十三页 Admittedly, choosing the subjects they like can make students hap

7、py and relaxed. For instance, my cousin choose music subject, now she can sing and create new songs with her classmates everyday. She seemed have a wonderful university life. However, this happiness can not be everlasting since they might not outstanding in their fields then they may quit, and find

8、jobs they have never known. If you know yourself and prepere a lot when you are in university, you are more likely to success.共十三页 To sum up, the subjects that are associated with your future job enable you to gain more energy, save precious time and make your future life greater than others. Studen

9、s should choose the useful subjects for thire future career.共十三页 With the development of education, more and more subjects have come out. Some people suggest that it is more beneficial for students to choose the subjects which are associated with their ideal job than the subjects they like. I agree

10、with it because it actaully has several advantages. 共十三页 First of all, the subject that prepare for your future job always can give your more energy. You can only be longing for success when you know your direction. For instance, my brother choosed business because he wants to be a business man. He

11、worked harder than his classmates and participated a lot of school activities that about business. Although he got many taskes to do, he told me that he felt more energetic than others since he knew what he had done could pay off when he begins his career. Now he is running a famous corporation and

12、he really feels thankful because he made the right decision. So these subjects foster us to work harder and gain more power.共十三页 Second, these subjects really save your time after graduating. For instance, there was a survey about the univrsity subject and students future life. It showed us that stu

13、dents who choosed the subject they liked could get better transcripts than others. However, to our amazement, the students who choosed the subject similar with their future jobs were more outstanding than others after graduating. One of a student complained that after he left universities, he could

14、not find satisfied jobs so he just squander his time and money playing and shopping. It really wastes time. However, well-prepared students can always find jobs quickly, know the society and get more time to complish their dreams.共十三页 Admittedly, choosing the subjects they like can make students hap

15、py and relaxed. For instance, my cousin choose music subject, now she can sing and create new songs with her classmates everyday. She seemed have a wonderful university life. However, this happiness can not be everlasting since they might not outstanding in their fields then they may quit, and find jobs they have never known. If you know yourself and prepere a lot when you are in university, you are more likely to success.共十三页 To sum up, the subjects that are associated with your future job enable yo