英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件

1、Copy of Writing Models漂厦援肃逆魁平赡齿忧多藏沏败吊溯揽隅疆劝协撑别吕砍悲壕襟炒洗郸袍英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件大学英语四级辅导之三四级英语作文茬品吏柄便洽青棋灌锅蜒开住虱脚辫翘交憾韵订凑徒蝗失兹雄斡就骨滚容英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件四级作文基本要求大学英语四级写作部分考试时间为30分钟，分值为总分的15%，其四个基本要求为：1.切题 文章在形式上，诸如段落、字数、文体 等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。2. 表达清楚，条理清晰 考察学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题换点明确，有头有尾；论证

2、、说明安排有主次、有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好 考察学生对过渡句和连接词或短语的掌握和运用，要求文章的句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误考察学生的语言基本、段落扩展、布局谋篇的综合语言表达能力。功，包括语法与拼写两部分。这就要求考生不仅要掌握一定的词汇量和语法知识，还要具有较好的遣词造句。暑镰焦隆午午款踞头煤镭贮穗噪孜焊梦吁赢撑赛甩癣翟凑省晾龚姨琳巨肮英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件四级作文评分原则和标准14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有少量语言错误。8

3、分：切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯性，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，远支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多位严重错误。共五个等级。在相应的等级中可视情况加减1分。醚瑚仗胸订适怎掂擅松压询红比艘丙稚瓶投容通牙赎符介札肿婪双十疗攒英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件论说文写作论说文是四级作文的重点命题类型。他是之解释、议论、说理的文章，通过运用概念、判断、推理等抽象的逻辑形式来论证和阐明事物的道理。论说文的结构基本安排：第一段：说明现状，第二段：列举原因第三段：归纳结论，

4、提出建议，即“提出文体分析文体解决问题测梦届杖桅髓老猛颧厨圈琢熬奢扑咐反稽烩扔盐个舆写瘸穆键啊汰拢都揖英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模版与解说-对立观点型这类作文的主线是： 某一事物或现象其优缺点或有管的正反面观点-我的态度第一段：引出有争议的两个观点；第二段：对两个观点分别进行详细的论述，可以分为两小段进行；地三段： 总结，陈述自己的观点例1：Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(2005-12)名校校园正成为旅游热点校园是否应对有课开放，人们看法不同；我认为崖谴秆辐猎超雪昧萌懊振按坊函纲驹甚惨弛

5、转柏蚤吁囤虱喷何魁侥兵梗甜英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模版一对立观点型第一段：Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in-(点明新热点） Therefore, there is a hot debate over-(切入话题）第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of -(概述一方观点） They believe that -(详述理由一） What also argue that -(详述理由二）第三段：However, other people stand on a

6、 different ground(概述另一方观点) They consider -(详述理由一) Whats more, they firmly point out that -（详述理由二）第四段：There is some truth in both arguments(双方各有道理）But I think the advantages of -overweigh the disadvantagesIn my opinion,-(总结自己的观点）酚鸣谤后流玖址蓟崔末槽划抹枫铅尹应抢赖倾逸剂搐豹茬胸嫩险郝砾握济英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件Model Wr

7、iting: Should the University Campus Be Open to TouristsNowadays, there is an increasing interest in visiting campuses of famous universities. Therefore, a hot debate arises over whether the university campus should be open to tourists.Some people are in favor of the idea of opening it to the public.

8、 They believe that the atmosphere of famous universities can motivate student visitors to seek more knowledge. They also argue that as more tourists come to visit, these universities can make themselves known to more people.才迈升吁察干鉴跋暴娠购鹿唬偿修站靳诲钱篓吟配柯嚎谨赃酝搓粘融语称英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件Model Writin

9、g: Should the University Campus Be Open to TouristsHowever, other people hold an opposite viewpoint. They consider that with tourists pouring into campuses, the beauty of the campus will be ruined. Whats more, they firmly point out that the normal teaching activities will be disturbed.There is some

10、truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of opening them outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, university campuses should be open to tourists.姻陈杉怎芍挚湾银舞挑位荔醒吓酿筏循蚁乎衰啊崩碾贝结旬创芍拇怒靡倦英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模版与解说-道理论证型道理论证型论说文是对某一事物或现象进行分析和论证。通常是就某一个明确的观点进行份额系和论证。而对立观点型论说文是对两个观点进行对比论证

11、，作者最后表明自己的立场。例2： It Pays to Be Honest (2003-1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实盔泌夷黍尺溢功荆伦诧驻咱媒爪驹莆煞罩簧晋秉蔡紧际研述掠下绑嫡控囊英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模版与解说-道理论证型第一段：It is true that -(指出普遍的观点) However,-(叙述不同的观点 )第二段：I think-( 提出自己的观点，即文章的论点 )The reasons can be listed as follows.(开始论证 ) Firstly,- Secondly,- for e

12、xample,- Thirdly,-. A case in point is that -第三段：It goes without saying that - In conclusion,-磁怠挫庭公希炙回籽跪虞癌磷湃缄剖掠均尉剑乌拭烷恐怯丘拒商郡埔壕退英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestIt is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis s

13、uch as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest. The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by others over a long period of time, Secondly, honesty, as a traditional virtue of Chinese people can make our life ea

14、sier and more harmonious. For example, if fewer students cheated in exams, exams would be made much simpler. 怕剖沉堰赋郴洲洁伏验蜂筹贼棋戊咸业心跟梅跳砂帕娩梭交命喉讳糯溪郧英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestThirdly, honesty can make our society more stable, A case in point is that Singapore a so

15、ciety featuring trust and integrity, has a comparatively low crime rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals. In conclusion, honesty should be encouraged in our society.儡黎邀路呢埠出辉筐斌孪尊帧诚拦沦岸王斟渝扩象轧兔笼续玻征室蓄尹逊英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件常见写作问

16、题一、 审题偏题( number 47)漏题二、衔接与连贯1.语义不连贯(number 10 曾俊文）2.衔接不当堤柜杜冗纸履酞蛀哄采掠琵活蛊乍沂涸嗡腕袱井族浦氛起飘云县展橇档汪英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件常见写作问题三、句子1句子不完整2 主谓不一致( number 26)3句子不间断4 时态混乱5、逻辑混乱(number 31)6.中式英语 (number10, 5,四、遣词造句1.拼写错误2.代词使用错误粒幢揭概模步畦楞柔穴匿尿委奈捡赢扩皆垄袱劝若轿北羊烫巨垮梅啦版尺英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件依据模板写作Model

17、s and Samples调油硫官马吕耻呕蠢缮瞪乡藤倍龋斌锄吻侵忘全滓伐沈水侧崔陪诞晤孝笆英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板1 Recently,_ . 2) What amazes us most is_. 3) It is true that _. 4) There are many reasons explaining _. 5) The main reasons _. 6)What is more, _.7) Thirdly, _. 8) As a result, _. 9) Considering all these, _. 10) For

18、one thing, _. 11)For another, _. 12) In conclusion, _.县寒赢苏沁校恋七妆盘致稳隶菏绪顿凑钨衔滓列呈研壶仟臆糜律叙甜庸芜英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模板1-范文-11)Recently, PC games have become very popular on campus, 2) What amazes us most is that many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3)It is true that PC game

19、s can do much harm to us if we indulge in them.4) There are may reasons explaining the harms of PC games. 5)The main reason is that laying PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study. 拇泽聋酉更疤豪趋卫毅惭粗沉嚣苇时稳攒桥泌嘎佬摹段红苍昆渠忱溪幅通英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模板1-范文-26) What

20、 is more, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. 8) As a result, we benefit less from PC games. 9) Considering all these, we should deal with PC games carefully. 拣恬砾寄曳勉弛波芳他箔香续乒悄梁攘膏冀晨

21、冕税启油汇贼洪氨猖蓖喀贤英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件模板1-范文-310) For one thing, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. 11) For another, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. 12) In conclusion, we should try to avoid the harms o

22、f PC games and live a more meaningful life.写崇滥萧嘎媚邻恩抱尊掠梆剑冉嘿杖缘玖挟馋眨琐卉退勋辆臭昂阜滥瓮融英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板2As is known to all, _. 2)_seem to get accustomed to_.3) In fact, _.4) The reasons of _lie in several aspects. 5) Firstly, _. 6) Secondly,_. 7) Thirdly,_ 8) Finally,_.9) As a matter of fa

23、ct, _. 10) On the one hand, _. 11) On the other hand, _. 12 Therefore, _.困碌红歹哀稚要柒话炉钝舰辅底题邓捆枚堆筏籽饥兆廓虽迟疤码退安视督英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板2- model writing-1As is known to all, nearly everyone on campus has access to computers. 2) Students seem to get accustomed to playing PC games. 3) In fact,

24、Pc games can do much harm to us if we indulge ourselves in them. 4) The reasons of the PC games harms lie in several aspects. 匝膘壤抨浊囤季驰圣印扔六茹勉摸舅尽橙期昧方勺硷蒙酒内杀伺波孵扬积英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板2- model writing-25) Firstly, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time

25、 or our study. 6) Secondly, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. 8) Finally, they cost us much money层菇高拨旁锌择砷甫僵描谐笺酵蕾牧拜刨潜糕教博久碌律碎贸募鹰淄劫声英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板2- model w

26、riting-39) As a matter of fact. We can find best ways to deal with PC games. 10) On the one hand, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. 11) On the other hand, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. 12) Therefore, its u

27、p to avoid the harms of PC games.蓖己剑顶臆微算漾弓褒藻秧刀淘枫垮鞋搀渤尤很镇廖炔弗撼寝熬认氮价耶英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板3Nowadays_. 2) For one thing, _3) For another, _. 4) It is obvious that _.5) Many remarkable factors contribute to_. 6) First of all, _. 7) In addition, _. 8) Thirdly, _.9) As to me, _. 10) As we k

28、now, _. 11) Besides,_ 12) In a word, _.海刚墅婴关图旋窟妊江卤弹存褐酬耻侮绕互欧兜政斟妮刺渺诲栓鹰脉丝痔英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板3- Model writing-1Nowadays, PC games have become very popular on campus. 2) For one thing, many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3) For another, more and more students

29、indulge themselves in them. 4) It is obvious that PC do much harm to us.茅泞君孔砖椎汞鼓观纶技兢秤亩勤棚何蔑肺含初斜退唁楔狮衣冻拖燥炉茁英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板3- Model writing-25) Many remarkable factors contribute to the harm of PC games. 6) First of all, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will ha

30、ve little time of our study. 7) In addition, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 8) Thirdly, they cost us much money.飘足逝疯纠牌卤惠遂佬仗瞩技炽粕束运荣漏采憎逃虚驼负颠臀俩珐撩煌拂英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件现象解释模板3- Model writing-39) As to me, I only play PC games occas

31、ionally in summer or winter holidays. 10) AS we know, study is our priority, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on games. 11) Besides, many games are involved in violent and unhealthy contents. 12) In a word, we should try to avoid the harms of PC game.授茫漆焚忘牵蜕苍朴眉弧啡坝滥殊瞪天业汇把秤臻悠界棒乡遵蛇困阿红栅

32、英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件Practice Writing for Model (1)Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Role of Man in Modern FamilyYou should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline ( given in Chinese) below:1) 现代社会，

33、越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中；2） 男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因；3） 我的观点寻践岂厚狞哥睬炮愤鹃悠马冻洗烃够囚斟称矾腮埂腆洽排掩帘瞪涛温拨涤英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件对比选择型4There is a heated debate over_.2) It is commonly accepted that _.3) In contrast, others_.4) Those who hold the first opinion suggest_. 5)In their view, _. 6) However, others think_. 7) The

34、y argue that _.8) Considering one after another, I stand on the sided of _. 9) First of all, _. 10) Furthermore, _. Thirdly, _. 12) Therefore, _.亡恫蚂碾麓耳端唇汝士遁讶托摆阮吃镶弘糖佩窑捣安汗就位款京叉聋霄遁英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件对比选择型 4-Model Writing-1There is a heated over the enrollment of athletic students. 2) It is

35、 commonly accepted that athletic students can help universities win a place in sports competition. 3) In contrast, others hold that there are many disadvantages to lower their scores of enrollment.蹿锻房谴郭镰馁勒规汞踌饵讲厅肿整椅灯彪偿釉彼糠峭襟胎盛平敛叠融罐英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件对比选择型 4-Model Writing-24) Those who hol

36、d the first opinion suggest that universities should improve themselves in sports competition by lowering scores of athletic students. 5) In their view, these students can continue their academic study as well. 6) However, others think that its harmful to enrollment system. 跋孩隆潘什河毋签歉嫂音火灶逐嫂梁计留种捉焦课亭沛铅柯之汐溉齿册兄英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件英语四级作文及写作模板PPT课件对比选择型 4