写作辅导--运用同位语课件

1、How to use the appositive如何使用同位语写作辅导Teaching aimsAt the end of the class, we should knowwhat is an appositive.how to use the appositive to beautify your writing.Step 1 Warming Up A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and pr

2、ofessor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011

3、. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.Step 2 Lead-in What is an appositive? Last Thursday, I had an interview with Professor Li, a famous psychologist and educator, a

4、bout how Senior 3 students can release their stress from study. 同位语常用于描写人物，地点及事物. Step 3 How to use the appositive1. To describe a person 1) 人物： 杜老师 职业： 英语老师 描述： 非常可爱，经常用甜美的声音和我 们说话。 Mrs. Du is a very lovely English teacher. She always talks to us in her sweet voice. Mrs. Du, _, always talks to us i

5、n her sweet voice.Step 3 How to use the appositive1. To describe a person 1) 人物： 杜老师 职业： 英语老师 描述： 非常可爱，经常用甜美的声音和我 们说话。 Mrs. Du is a very lovely English teacher. She always talks to us in her sweet voice. Mrs. Du, a very lovely English teacher, always talks to us in her sweet voice.1. To describe a p

6、erson 2) 人物：Amy ，耶鲁大学教授 观点：父母对孩子应该从严教育 Amy, _, holds the view that parents should be strict with their children.1. To describe a person 2) 人物：Amy ，耶鲁大学教授 观点：父母对孩子应该从严教育 Amy, a professor of Yale, holds the view that parents should be strict with their children.1. To describe a person 3) 你是校报记者，最近你就学生

7、上课外补习班这个问题采访了教育专家时 间：上周末对 象：教育专家陈教授主 题：父母要求孩子上课外补习班的问题 Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Chen, _, about the issue that parents ask their children to attend extra classes.1. To describe a person 3) 你是校报记者，最近你就学生上课外补习班这个问题采访了教育专家时 间：上周末对 象：教育专家陈教授主 题：父母要求孩子上课外补习班的问题 Last weekend, I had a

8、n interview with Professor Chen, an educational expert, about the issue that parents ask their children to attend extra classes.4) 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况(2009年)：时间：上周末对象：眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题：我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题 基本信息：(1) 发生率：略高于50% (2) 人数：世界第一专家解读：(1) 原因：很复杂 (2) 治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3) 建

9、议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4) 特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, _, on the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.4) 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况(2009年)：时间：上周末对象：眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题：我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题 基本信息：(1) 发生率：略高于50% (2) 人数：世界第一专家解读：(1) 原因：很复

10、杂 (2) 治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3) 建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4) 特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye doctor, on the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.5) 你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道(2014年) 人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解

11、不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息：借助当地媒体寻找; 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家; 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等计划: 40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人,打算根据此经历写一本书Richard Avis, _,has been travelling around the world in search of his time twins.5) 你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道(2014年) 人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目

12、的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息：借助当地媒体寻找; 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家; 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等计划: 40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人,打算根据此经历写一本书Richard Avis, a British born on Dec 1st, 1974, has been travelling around the world in search of his time twins.2. To describe a place州名：加利福尼亚特点：1. 约38,000,000人； 2. 美国面积第三大的州Calif

13、ornia, _, has a population of 38 million.2. To describe a place州名：加利福尼亚特点：1. 约38,000,000人； 2. 美国面积第三大的州California, the third largest state of America, has a population of 38 million.2. To describe a place北京，中国的首都，是一个美丽的地方，那里有很多的名胜古迹。Beijing, _, is a beautiful place with a lot of places of interest.青

14、海湖,中国最大的内陆(inland)湖,海拔3198米。Qinghai Lake, _, lies 3198 metres above sea level.2. To describe a place北京，中国的首都，是一个美丽的地方，那里有很多的名胜古迹。Beijing, capital of China, is a beautiful place with a lot of places of interest.青海湖,中国最大的内陆(inland)湖,海拔3198米。Qinghai Lake, the largest inland lake in China, lies 3198 met

15、res above sea level.2. To describe a place天安门广场是世界上第二大的广场，占地面积44万平方米。Tiananmen Square, _, covers an area of 0.44 million square metres.2. To describe a place天安门广场是世界上第二大的广场，占地面积44万平方米。Tiananmen Square, the second largest square in the world, covers an area of 0.44 million square metres.3. To describ

16、e other things艾滋病，无法可医，总让人陷入绝望。Aids, _, can always drive people to despair.射击最初(originally)只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。(2008年)Shooting, _, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 3. To describe other things艾滋病，无法可医，总让人陷入绝望。Aids, a disease with no cure, can always drive people to despair.射击

17、最初(originally)只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。(2008年)Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 3. To describe other things目前的交易会(trade fair)，是有史以来规模最大的，正在广州举行。The current trade fair, _, is being held in Guangzhou. 信用卡是一种很便利的付款形式，它在年轻人中越来越流行。Credit card,

18、_, is getting more and more popular among young people.3. To describe other things目前的交易会(trade fair)，是有史以来规模最大的，正在广州举行。The current trade fair, the biggest in its history, is being held in Guangzhou. 信用卡是一种很便利的付款形式，它在年轻人中越来越流行。Credit card, a convenient means of payment, is getting more and more popul

19、ar among young people.Step 4 Instant PracticeGroup 1: (2012 广东)请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓 名：Allan Stewart国 籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。*硕士学位：masters degree; *博士：doctorAllan Stewart, an Aust

20、ralian born on March 7th, 1915, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. 2. Born on March 7th, 1915, Allan Stewart, an Australian, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. 3. Allan Stewart is an Australian who was born on March 7th, 1915 and he became

21、the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. Group 2: 请用5句话，介绍我们的祖国-中国要点如下：中国是一个有着悠久的历史和文化的伟大国家 。地理位置（亚洲东部）、面积（960万平方千米）和人口情况（13亿）有美丽的山川和丰富的自然资源。长江是世界上最长的河流之一，长城是世界七大奇观之一人民勤劳勇敢，他们的勤奋和智慧在过去的三十年里给中国带来了巨大的变化 Lying in the east of Asia, China, a great country with a long history and rich cul

22、ture, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion. 2. China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a long history and rich culture and covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion.Group 3: 以下是微博的基本信息及主要影响： 基本信

23、息： (1)微博：一种网上日记 (2)话题：从日常小事到全球重大事件 (3)内容：定期更新、公开，简短、140字以内主要影响：(1)正面：便于人们表达心声、交流想法 使信息的传播比以往更快更广(2)负面：可能泄露隐私或其他重要的个人信息 误导性信息使公众无法辨清是非参考词汇：微博microblog n. 误导性misleading adj. 隐私 privacy n. Microblog, a kind of online diary, covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major glo

24、bal events. 2. Microblog is a kind of online diary which covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major global events.3. Microblog is a kind of online diary and covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major global events.1. Go over what we h

25、ave just learned. 2. Finish writing your article. HomeworkThank you for your attention ! Born on March 7th, 1915, Allan Stewart, an Australian, became the worlds oldest man to obtain a masters degree in 2006. He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself. He got his first degree in 1936

26、 and then his doctors degree in medicine. In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained his third degree in 2006. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.2. Lying in the east of Asia, Ch

27、ina, a great country with a long history and rich culture, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers with a population of 1.3 billion. There are many beautiful mountains and rivers, as well as abundant natural resources. The Changjiang River is the longest rivers in the world and the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders on the earth. The Chinese people , whose