五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：话题06节假日活动

1、 话题06节假日活动节假日活动是指春节、元旦、国庆节、植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活节、情人节、母亲节等各种中西方节假日的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，还有生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等各种庆祝活动，以及参加这些活动的经历和感受等。 暑期、寒假等的活动、社会实践活动或者青年志愿者的活动安排及感受等等。命题人可能从下列方面出题：(i)直接给出某一个中西方节日的活动安排；(2)假设考生参加了某个盛大节日或者某个活动，要求他对节日场面或活动情况进行描述；(3)某个节日或寒暑假要来了，准备举行一个活动，以通知的形式告诉大家，希望踊跃参加；(4)以图片的形式体现节日的盛况，要求考生进行描述；(

2、5)节日去某地度假了，回来后写信表示感谢，其中以回忆的形式体现假日活动；(6)节日物品，例如饺子的制作、红包等；(7)中西方节日的对比；(8)对节日的盛大状况的态度，觉得如此豪华，盛况空前，有没有必要性；(9)现在中国逐步开始流行过“洋”节，那么你认为西方节日会不会代替中国传统节日；(10)你的节假日如何安排，如何有意义地度过节假日。f材积I一、中国节日名称I.The Spring Festival 春节.The Dragon Boat Festival 端午节.The Mid-autumn Festival 中秋节.New Year s Day 元旦.National Day 国庆节nter

3、national Labor Day五一劳动节.Teachers Day 教师节.Children s Day 儿童节.Women s Day 妇女节.Tomb-sweeping Day 清明节.Double Ninth Festival 重阳节.Lantern Festival 元宵节二、西方节日名称. Christmas day 圣诞节.Thanksgiving Day 感恩节. Valentine s Day 情人节.April Fool s Day 愚人节.Halloween Day 万圣节.Easter Day 复活节.Mothers Day 母亲节.Fathers day 父亲节三

4、、常用词汇1.celebrate 庆祝2.observe遵守，庆祝.congratulation 祝贺.in honor of为了 庆祝.approach 靠近.paradise 游行.celebration庆祝活动.feast 盛宴.popularity 受欢迎.on holiday 度假11.ask for leave 请假12. cradle of culture文化摇篮13. traditional culture传统文化artistic taste艺术品味stick to the tradition坚持传统cultural needs文化需求give publicity to宣传 广

5、受欢迎enjoy great popularity 16. cultural treasures文化宝藏historical site 古迹material civilization物质文明fall on 恰逢三、参考语句话题常用句型National Day is coming. 国庆节快到了。National Day falls on Monday this year.今年国庆节是星期一。We celebrated the New Year with a dance party.我们举行舞会来庆祝新年。It is festivals that make us reunite .节日让我们团聚

6、在一起。People all enjoy ourselves.人们者酩艮欢乐。I can have a rest, and put trouble aside.我可以好好休息一下，把烦恼丢到一边。Celebrating festivals is a good way to hand down the tradition .庆祝节 日是传承传统的好方法。8.I love all festivals, because people usually feel happy during festivals anyway.我喜欢所有节日，因为，无论怎样，人们在节日里总是感到快乐的9. Spring Fe

7、stival is the most important festival in China, and it is also my most favor festival.春节是中国最重要的节日，也是我最喜欢的节日.10.It s to celebrate the lunar calendar s new year.它是为了庆祝农历新年11.In the evening before the Spring Festival,families get together and have a bigmeal.在春节前夜，家人聚在一起享用丰盛的一餐In many places people like

8、 to set off firecrackers .在许多地方人们还放鞭炮.Dumplings are the most traditional food.饺子是最传统的食物.The 9th day of the 9th lunar month is the traditional Chongyang Festival农历九月初九是传统的重阳节。. The custom of ascending a height to avoid epidemics was passed down from long time ago.登高避疫的习俗是很久以前流传下来的。典例割析【典例01】（2015年课标全

9、国卷I）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：.栏目介绍；.稿件内容；.稿件长度：约400词汇.交稿日期：6月28日前天注息：.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter ,I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，

10、弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。建议 Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。还要注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【范文赏析】Dear Peter ,I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The Foreigp Cultures7ectian in our aewspaper is very pofFular among us FtudcutsJ

11、t carries artiGles written by foreign fiicnds about (he cultures of their home coiiLitries. Would you please write somethuLg about the culture in y&ur paif of the United Stated? And 9 would esptially welcirtie arricles atwut kw Anierieanj spend their holidays and festivals j and the life cf American

12、 high school studcats. You xn write nythuig rdevant so 1-ong as 浦 inter艇tii喀 ind iifornntivfl .400 wdrds would be fine.Could hat嵯 your article before Tune 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【典例02】(2015年课标全国卷II)假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院( nursing home )陪老人们过重阳节(the DoubleNinth Festival )。请给外

13、教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：.出发及返回时间；.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注息：.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；.开头结尾已为你写好。Dear Lucy,Looking forward to your reply.Yours , Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点

14、所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【范文赏析】Dear Lucy,rd lite to mwte you to join us foe a visit to nearby nurEng heme nexi Saturday for the Double Ninth FestivalJt is the day oi th-e elderly in our Gr.I really want to obtain this prodous opponuninr because, by offering m

15、y smloe I will be able to improve my organisatdEil ability； OMtmuiiication ski Ils as wdl 35 mywcfidiw in spiking En5lisli in public.As an outgoing girl , I get along well with my classmates.Besides, I have sucha good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successful

16、ly , I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class , which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be gratefulif you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Your

17、s truly,Li Hua【典例04】（2016 北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三（一）班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以Actions for a Greener Earth ”为题，给校刊“英语 角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：地球日 Earth Day【写作指导】这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1.认真读图，可知四幅图讲述的是你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动的事情。2.初步构思，考虑用词、 短语、句型和时态。.连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。.反复

18、审核，修改错误。5.注意所给的汉语提示。 一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往 给定了有关的时间、 地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章 的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。【范文赏析】A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us t

19、o join in the actions for a greener earth.Our cUjs came up witli the idea Io make bener use of used rmTtrials. We brought to oui classroom wm-ciit clothes, pieces ofcaidboard ind empty ph Iwnles, and turned those intodolK handbags, issue boxes and small vases. That weskemd. we went to a nearby neigl

20、itKuhflod and gave them away to the people Ibcre. Evciyoiie was vetyliappy with those ureapcGtod gifts, cBpcdally littk kid 31alid ddrly people Wc did so wdl that wc wctc incited to fhaie our idea aid experieiice 卯ich all th七由idenisour school.We are very premd of ourselves and believe we can Lp mare

21、 Ear a better world.假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友 David给你发来email,希望你给他简要介绍中国过春节 的一些文化习俗。内容包括：贴春联，包饺子，看春晚，拜年，放鞭炮，走亲访友等。注息：.词数100词左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；.开头已写好，不计入总数. 生词：春联Spring Festival couplets Dear David,I m glad to receive your email. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear David,I m very glad to receive your email. I m w

22、illing to tell you about how we Chinese celebrate the Spring Festival.The day just before the lunar NewYear, every familywill paste the Spring Festivalcouplets on the door and make preparations for makingdumplings. On NewYear s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as we

23、ll as appreciating the SpringFestival gala. Whenthe New Year bellrings, all the people will cheer and firecrakers are set off. With the New Year sDay coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Years call each other. Everywhere is filled with joy.Could you pleas

24、e drop me a line talking about how westerners celebrate the New Year?Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】这是一篇提纲式作文，写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生 首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，

25、使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】范文涵盖了所有的要点，语言简洁，但是不乏好的词组和句式：makepreparations for 准备，set off 燃放，be filled with 充满， drop me a line 给某人 写信，On New Year s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the deliciousdumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala.这句话用 了现在分词做伴随状语， Wit

26、h the NewYear s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Years call each other.这句话用了 with 复合结构。假如彳是Tom,今年国庆节正好和中秋在一起，你写信给你的笔友Peter告诉他你国庆节是怎么度过的。 汪后： 词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。【范文】Dear Peter,I am writing to tell you how I spent my National Day. This year it

27、was acoincidence that National Day was close to the Mid-Autumn Festival, so I had a long and happy holiday.First, in celebration of the 68th birthday of our country, I went to Beijingto watch the flag-raising ceremony with my parents, which moved me a lot. I hope our country will become stronger. Of

28、 course, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a time to reunite, so we spent two days accompanying my grandparents as well as helping them do some housework. Whats more, holiday as it was, I still spared time to finish my homework.Yours,Tom【写作指导】这是一篇开放式作文，要求写信讲述十一长假是怎样度过的，这类作文容易写成流水账，要选择几件有代表性的事情写，也要就这些事情发表自己

29、的看法。根据内容可以确定用一般过去时和第一人称为主，作文除了内容还要注意遣词造句，高中英语学习很多特殊的句式， 学生要在作文里面有体现，在保证表达正确的前提下恰当使用高级句型。句式一定要富有变化，不能千篇一律都是简单句，也不能都是复杂句。还要使用适当的关联词将这些要点连接起来，这样文章才能连贯。【亮点说明】范文涵盖了所有的要点，语言简洁，但是不乏好的词组和句式：in celebrationof为了庆祝；accompany陪伴，as well as 而且，spare time to do sth 腾出时间做某事， flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式，it was a coinci

30、dence that National Day was closeto the Mid-Autumn Festival, 这句话用了 it 作形式主语，I went to Beijing to watch the flag-raising ceremony with my parents, which moved me a lot.这句话用了 which 弓 I导非限制性定语从句。还使用关联词first , what s more使得文章更加连贯。你的英国朋友在做一个课题：世界各地生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：.生日通常方式；.生日聚会；.生日礼物；

31、.生日祝福；.我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。一、/ 汪后：.词数100左右；.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 【范文】As we all know, birthdays are celebrated all over the world.Some ways to celebrate birthdays are rather similar from country to country: candles , cakes and birthdaywishes. But there are also different ways to celebratebirthdays.Here are a f

32、ew inChina :In China, the ocicbratioii of biitt(hyE is a custom f which is cspedaJly attractive to the ycrurg iniildraiPcopk get togettici in family? ttcy cat the birthday cake, singing son5s mid dandr happily. Besidesj tley give the birtfcd3y飞 presents and hlessiiigs to each other.Id my opinion, we

33、 should ceJebrate birthchys with our family members together and give out best wishes to our parents.【写作指导】这是提纲类写作，话题是关于生日问题，文章的要点是以提纲的形式给出来的，不是很具体，内容有：1.生日通常方式；2.生日聚会；3.生日礼物；4.生日祝福；5.我认为更有 意义的庆祝方式和理由。考生需要做的就是以提纲为中心，适当增加细节，考生要自己去发挥，使内容充实难度，这也增加了作文的难度，要求学生有很高的拓展能力，在确定写作内 容后，考生要考虑的是选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思

34、，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。 要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点， 使文章成为一个 整体。【亮点说明】这篇文章涵盖了要点，简洁又不乏好的词语和句型：do harm to 对有害；custom 习俗；get together 聚会， blessings 祝福，.give our best wishes to 向某人表 达我们的祝愿，In China ,the celebration of birthdays is a custom , which is especiallyattractive to the young Children.这句话用了 which引导的非限制

35、性定语从句，As we allknow, birthdays are celebrated all over the world.也是非限制性定语从句,还有范文还使用了 besides这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。一个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主 要活动。写作要点：.它是中国的传统节日之一；.家人团聚；.赏月、吃月饼；.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注息：.词数100左右;.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；.开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar赏月 enjoy

36、the full moon月饼 moon cake【范文】The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home fo

37、r the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, w

38、e have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.【写作指导】这是提纲类写作，话题是关于生日问题，文章的要点是以提纲的形式给出来的，不是很 具体，内容有：1.它是中国的传统节日之一；2.家人团聚；3.赏月、吃月饼；4.还有旅游、访友等其它活动。考生需要做的就是以提纲为中心，适当增加细节，考生要自己去发挥，使内容充实难度，这也增加了作文的难度，要求学生有很高的拓展能力，在确定写作内容后， 考生要考虑的是选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句

39、子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。【亮点说明】这篇文章涵盖了要点，简洁又不乏好的词语和句型：fallon恰逢时候；enjoying great popularity 非常受欢迎； a wider range of 各种各 1的，no matter how faraway or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.这句话使用让步状语从句；What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.这句话用 了主语从句； The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.这句话使用定语从句；With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eatmoon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories.这句话使用 with 复合结构， 还有范文还使用了 as well as这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。圣诞节就要到了。假如你是李华，老师让你们了解关于圣诞节，并给同学们介绍