【书面表达】Notice高考英语作文复习课件(共87张PPT)

1、WelcomeHow to better your writing 时间命题方式文体内 容2009文字提示留言条你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出，请给她写一留言条。2010文字提示书信学校举办英语演讲比赛,邀请外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委。2011文字提示书信在英国学习署期课程遇到困难,写信向校辅导中心寻求帮助。2012文字提示书信一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营，写一封电子邮件申请参加。2013文字提示书信给开网店的美国笔友Tom写一封信，请求帮助代卖自己自制的中国结。2014文字提示征文写一篇题为十年后的我的征文，畅想十年后的自己，以家庭、工作、业余活动展开。2

2、015文字提示书信计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节，写一封邀请函，邀请外教参加 。2016文字提示书信给英国朋友Peter写一封信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。近年书面表达命题情况时间命题方式文体内 容2017文字提示电子邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。2018文字提示笔头通知为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看英文短篇“Growing Together”。2019文字提示电子邮件告知校排球队的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛。近年书面表达命题情况Writing taskNotice【通知写作方法】 第一段：说明活动目的和内容第二段：说明活动的时间，地点，内容 说明

3、活动的好处第三段：发起号令，提出参加Are you familiar with the useful expressions?1. In order to share the fun of reading good books and arouse our interested in ., we are going to organize +活动2. In order to have a good understanding of sth, a lecture/party/activity will be hold in _on sth3. Following are some details

4、 about this activity.4. To start with, A party( a lecture) will be held / given on / at + 时间.in +地点.and it lasts/begins from .to.5. Besides/ In addition all the teachers and students are required/ asked to attend (全体师生务必） Are you familiar with the useful expressions?6. Whats more, there are various

5、activities/ performances such as., which not only can . but also can .( For one thing.,for another thing.)7. If you are interested in +活动， dont miss the chance/ opportunity.8. Make sure that you come on time . Look forward to your participation.9. Dont forget to meet at the gate of school. 为了分享读好书的快

6、乐并激发我们的阅读兴趣， “推荐好书”活动将于11月30日在阅览室举行。 活动从下午五点持续到六点。 要求所有英语俱乐部成员参加并和他人分享一本你最爱的书。 一些英语老师也应邀参加。 另外，所有参加者用英语交流。 事先做好准备并准时参加。 提示词：激发我们的阅读兴趣arouse our interest in . 推荐好书 the activity “Good Book to Recommand” 俱乐部全员“all the members in English Club” 仿写【通知写作方法】 第一段：说明活动目的和内容第二段：说明活动的时间，地点，内容 说明活动的好处第三段：发起号令，提出

7、参加 Notice In order to share the fun of reading good books and and arouse our interest in reading, the activityGood Books to Recommend is to be held in the reading room onNovember30.说明活动目的和内容 The activity lasts from 5: 00 pm to 6: 00 pm. All the members of the English club are required to attend and

8、share one of your favourite books with others. Some English teachers are also invited to join. Besides, all the participants are supposed to communicate with others in English.(说明活动的具体安排和要求) Make sure to come on time. Look forward to your participation.（注意事项） English Club(2018.全国卷II) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语

9、天地”写一份通知， 请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together, 内容包括： 1. 短片内容：学校的发展 2. 放映时间，地点 3. 欢迎对短文提出意见。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。注意写作过程 审弄清题意，明确要求 译把中文要点译成英语 连连词成句，连句成文 改通读全文，检查复核 抄书写规范，赏心悦目写作点拨 【遣词造句 联句成篇】 一、词汇short film； the development of .;be required to do sth;be related to ;the second floor of technogy b

10、uilding;last from .to.;give suggestions by schoolemail ; we-chat ;qq ; your participation; participant； I believe that. / I am convinced that.not only.but also; enrich the knowledge of.strengthen awareness.; arouse the interest. have a good understanding of.; 二、句式（翻译）1. In order to learn more about

11、_our school, all the atudents _watch an English short film Growing Together, which _ 为了了解更多关于我们学校的发展， 学校要求大家观看一部关于学校历史的英语短片。Growing Together。2. To begin with, the short film will begin in the school _, which_ this Friday afternoon. 首先, 这个电影将在学校教科楼二楼举行，此次活动将从星期五下午2点持续到4点3. If it _, please _ about thi

12、s short film. 如果方便的话，请给我一些关于这个短片的建议4.You d better send your advice or opinions to us by school email and we-chat. 你可以发建议给我，通过学校的邮件或微信5. Dont _ to know more about our school. I am convinced that it can not only enrich your knowledge about the school but also can strengthen the honor of school. 不要错过了解

13、学校的机会。 我相信这个活动不仅.而且. 三、联句成篇 In order to learn more about the development of our school, all the atudents are expected to watch an English short film Growing Together, which is related to the history of our school. Following are some details about the activity. To begin with, the short film will begi

14、n in the school on the second floor of the teaching building , which lasts from 2:00 to 4:00 this Friday afternoon. In addition, if convenient, please give some suggestions about this short film. You d better send your advice or opinions to us by school email. The last but the most important, dont m

15、iss the chance to know more about our school. I hope you can come on time. Look forward your participation.Five-step writing method 一审 Analyzing二译 Translating三写 Drafting四润 Polishing五抄 Copying 假如你是红星中学的学生会主席， 高考临近， 你校决定举办高三毕业典礼（The Graduation Ceremony) 请你代表学生会向全体高三学生发一则通知，内容包括： 1. 毕业典礼（7月4日) 及地点（报告厅l

16、ecture hall） 2. 参加者 3. 活动 4. 注意事项 要求：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可适当添加细节以使行文连贯。 RepresentingStep 1: Analyzing 审题1. Type (体裁)？2. Person (人称)？3. Tense (时态)？4. Points (要点)？【破题分析】 1. Type (体裁)： 通知2. Person (人称)：第三人称为主3. Tense (时态)： 现在时+将来时4. Points (要点)：Seeking points寻找要点 1.高考临近， 你校决定举办高三毕业典礼（The Graduation Ceremony

17、)2. 向全体高三学生发一则通知3. 毕业典礼（7月4日) 及地点（报告厅lecture hall）4. 参加者5. 活动6. 注意事项There are various activities in this ceremony, including, _,_with your classmates and teachers, which not only will _ but also_.有各种各样的活动，例如听老师和校长的演讲，和老师同学拍照,这些活动不仅提供给我们回忆青春年华的机会， 而且可以增加我们对未来的自信心。For one thing, not only will the cere

18、mony provide a good opportunity to recall our life and study of the last three years by listening to the headmaster and teachers lecture, but also we will also increase our confidence to realize our dream in the future by encouraging each other. For another thing,we will take photos to give us a fan

19、tastic memory.Step 2: Translating 翻译内容要点1. 连词成句 2. 连句成文Step 3: Drafting 打草稿 Step 4: Polishing 润色1. 词汇丰富2. 句式多样 3. 过渡自然4. 结构紧凑 打造句子为作文增色1.运用转换打造简单句The museum has a history of 100 years. It is well-known at home and abroad. The museum with a history of 100 years, is well-known at home and abroad.2.巧用非

20、谓语句子上等级Some students dont support the idea. They say plastic bags seriously pollute the environment. Some students dont support the idea, saying that plastic bags seriously pollute the environment.3. 选用高级词汇，使句子与众不同 A new railway is being built in my hometown. A new railway is under construction in m

21、y hometown. 连句成文过渡语1.恰当使用过渡词2.变换句式Step 5 Copying抄写Evaluating 评价英语高分作文即第五档的条件：（很好21-25分）要点齐全语言流畅词汇丰富句式多样过渡自然结构紧凑【精彩点击】 布局合理 词汇丰富 句式多样 语言流畅 过渡自然 书写美观One possible versionDear Sam, I am sorry to know that you are having a bad time. Actually, I also have the same feelings. What matters is to learn to con

22、trol our anxiety and stay optimistic. The following are my suggestions. To begin with, keep connected with your classmates and friends through social media. You can keep informed of what is happening around you by keeping in touch with your friends, classmates and teachers so that you will not feel

23、lonely and thus reduce your anxiety. Besides, develop one or two hobbies that you can work on at home, such as cooking, gardening, reading or calligraphy. When you are occupied with some interesting and meaningful things, you will feel fulfilled. As a saying goes, to be happy, keep busy. In addition

24、, do exercise regularly and plan your daily schedule wisely. When you are tired from attending online classes, you can do all kinds of indoor exercise to relax yourself and keep healthy physically. Health is wealth, which is fundamental to a happy life. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.Yo

25、urs,Li Hua十句作文法三段十句作文法写作题训练策略三段十句训练法 在15秒内取悦阅卷老师要避免以下低级错误： 1. 书写是否规范、卷面是否整洁。 2. 拼写、标点符号是否准确。 3. 词数是否够。 4. 时态、语态和人称是否正确。 5. 句子是否正确、地道，尤其是第一、二句。 6. 内容要点是否遗漏。请看以下经过专家赋分的样卷24分样卷及评语23分样卷及评语14分样卷及评语3分样卷及评语【满分作文例示】Dear Lucy, The Double Ninth Festival, which is the day set aside for the elderly in our cultu

26、re, is drawing near. Our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the elderly there and enrich our after-class life at the same time. Here are some detailed arrangements during our stay there. Well make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people. Well also spend some fun ti

27、me together singing, dancing and playing games, which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon as planned. Im convinced that the activity will be enjoyable and meaningful. If youd like to join us, please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the

28、 morning. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua学生在作文中反应的问题基本词汇太差。单词拼写出现错误。缺乏基本的语法知识。有的同学词性滥用，有的汉式英语，有的简单句都写不对，语法错误层出不穷，小错不绝，大错不断，找不到完全正确的句子；导致文章不好定档。偷奸取巧的同学也不少。背诵几篇范文，混合抄袭几句妄图蒙混过关是不可能的。阅卷严格看要点表述。学生审题不细致。抓不住写作要点，遗漏要点或要点重复。字迹潦草卷面不干净。有的同学书写乱到难以辨认，自然分数就下来了，有的同学铅笔打了一道格，应该是四线格的第二线却不擦掉，导致所有的单词都和“吊死鬼”一

29、样悬空。（铅笔擦不干净的酌情减分）学习启示1.狠抓学生的基础词汇。常用的简单词语千万不能掉以轻心。可以在备考时督促学生对初中和高一词汇强化记忆，必须书写过关。2.加强对简单句5种基本类型的训练，避免汉式英语。3.训练学生写作必须按要点来写，缺要点，哪怕是几个字的小要点也算要点不全，基本与四、五档作文无缘了。4.加强书写和卷面训练， “印象分” 很重要。英语书写章法全，平横短竖胖椭圆，大小均一致，竖线皆平行，字母统一压底线。常看同学的优秀作文听写背诵默写仿写作文改错语篇填空高三写作课的有效训练每周至少一次写作课2.按照话题当堂训练3.分话题背诵范文4.仿写备考建议1. 备考训练中首先要培养学生的

30、审题能力，不可跑题。2. 列足要点，不可遗漏，结合实际，在必要时添加合理细节，使内容充实连贯。3. 在此基础上，关注句子表达正确性的训练，条件具备时逐步过渡到高级结构的运用。4. 还要关注语篇衔接成分及语气表达的得体。文章恰当结尾的训练亦不可忽视5. 从近年的高考作文阅卷来看，书面表达的评卷要求提高了，为了求稳只写简单句的考生已很难得高分。对于基础不太好的同学：所给材料分为几个点，每个点用1-2句简单句(主语+谓语+宾语+其他成分)表达出来，然后用适当的连接词把各个句子连成短文。对于程度较好的同学：尽可能运用高级词汇，适当运用复合句，关键是表达准确到位，尽量减少不必要的错误。6. 迎考阶段不仅

31、要练习写作，还要多看范文，注意各种文体的审题、要点的提炼以及语篇的表达。7. 考试写作文时最好先打草稿，然后抄写到答卷上，字迹尽量清晰，以免因为字迹潦草而失分。 英语写作警语认真审题，把握信息亮的开头，好的结尾 布局谋篇，独巨匠心 词汇丰富，句式多样 结构紧凑，前后连贯书写规范，卷面整洁 Thank you!命题宗旨：着重考查考生的语言基本功和正确使用英语进行表达的能力。即考查考生三种能力： 1.正确运用词汇、语法、句型结构能力； 2.逻辑推断、综合辨析能力； 3.阅读理解能力。常考文体：记叙文为主，兼顾说明文和议论文语言材料：取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔 内容贴近生活，多为考生熟悉

32、或经历过的事情。难度适中：词数110左右。句子浅显易懂，结构不复杂。所设错误主要以词法、句法和上下文逻辑关系为主短文改错文章通常只有100个词左右，难度与考生的习作相当，内容来自学生身边或社会生活中的常见话题。题型设置形式包括三种：多词、缺词、错词。 短文改错命题特点 1. 短文改错的比例 改正; 添词; 删词8:1:1 2. 一对一。不能划出多个词的错误改成一个词；也不能把一个错词改成多个正确的单词。 3. 三不改 不改标点符号错误 不改大小写错误 不改拼写错误。 4. 错误类型不重叠。 短文改错特点有提示词名词形容词副词动词作谓语1. 词性转换 形容词、副词、动词2. 名词所有格1. 词性

33、转换2. 比较级或最高级, 加前缀变成其反义词形容词时态，注意常考时态语态，即被动语态语气，即虚拟语气1. 词性转换不作谓语2.非谓语1. to do 表:将来/目的2. V-ing 表:主动/进行3. V-ed 表:被动/完成无提示词冠词连词介词代词It的用法 名词之前,尤其是泛指”一”, 或特指某个人或事物;泛指用a/an,特指用the。当空格后的名词在句中不是作主语，表语或动词宾语时，选填介词；注意 搭配 常为介词考查主要内容依据。空格前后都是句子, 前后都是并列单词或短语1. 单词/短语+并列连词+单词/短语；2. 一个句子+并连/从连+一个句子3. 从属连词+一个句子，一个句子（主句）人称代词、不定代词、反身代词物主代词：形容词性物主代词后必须加名词; 名词性物主代词作主语，宾语，本身就是名词，后不需再加名词。指代上文事物形式主语形式宾语强调句型按考点解题,先硬伤后软伤通读篇章逐句排查兼顾考点 无提示词：冠代介连（并列连词/从属连