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1、PAGE PAGE 3书面表达活动单（12.15）教学目标和要求：1.要求掌握书面表达写作五个步骤2. 掌握并学会使用较丰富的句式3. 掌握漫画作文写作技巧和方法Activity1.掌握书面表达写作五个步骤1.审题 ：文字信息或图画信息并确定题材、人称、时态、要点2.以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。3联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4联句成文：主语和谓语 2.背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系 开头与结尾 语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部

2、分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题Activity2.掌握丰富的句式并运用 (常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 1感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way

3、can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6. 定语从句 e.g.

4、 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we canfind much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8.各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed qui

5、ckly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.Activity4漫画作文训

6、练目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。注意：1. 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；2. 词数：120左右。解析：要想生动地描写这幅图，细心的观察固然重要，但扎实的基本功更重要。比如suffer from, be shocked, cant stand on ones feet, beyond what someone can afford短语的使用，只有平时多

7、积累，需要用时才会觉得得心应手。范文：Health CareFrom the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford Its really

8、another heart attack for him.At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. Worse still, some have to wait for the last day of their life.We strongly call for the medical e

9、xpenses to be reducedThe government should build up a favorable medical system. Everyone could enjoy their life as long as possible.1.On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.2.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things3.Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.4It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 5I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your helpFollowed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to