闪光词句的使用

1、2022-6-4Lecture1 写作的用词和造句 2022-6-4Lecture2用词的标准用词的标准1)忌用口语词e.g. “You know”, “Well”, “gonna”2）忌用生僻词 2022-6-4Lecture3闪光词的基本标准闪光词的基本标准1）准确 Context(上下文) e.g. commit crime Connotation(内涵) e.g. 30%discount Collocation(搭配) e.g. apply to/for Culture(文化) e.g. dog 2022-6-4Lecture4闪光词的基本标准闪光词的基本标准 2）多样e.g. a b

2、ig/great/sharp increase 2022-6-4Lecture5准确、多样准确、多样E.g.a good man: kind, honest, generous, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, selflessgood food: tasty, nourishing, rich, fresh, appetizing, abundant, delicious2022-6-4Lecture6词汇选择词汇选择-Tips1)考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等。2)一

3、定要学会换词，用形象，具体的词替换太宽泛的。 2022-6-4Lecture7用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句1+2) (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句) (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and

4、were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) ) (4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语) (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句) 2022-6-4Lecture8用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化(1)

5、The young pilot was on his first overseas training. (2) He felt very uneasy.(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (c) The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (d) Extrem

6、e uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. 2022-6-4Lecture9用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化(g) Being on his first overseas training, the yo

7、ung pilot felt very uneasy. (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (k) As the young pilot was on his

8、first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 2022-6-4Lecture10闪光句之基本句型闪光句之基本句型l简单句l并列句l主从复合句 2022-6-4Lecture11主语从句主语从句E.g. E.g. 1) They need more help in English.2) That is quite obvious. 可改为：可改为：It It is quite obv

9、ious they need more help in English. 2022-6-4Lecture12同位语从句同位语从句E.g. E.g. 1) He works hard.2）The fact does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.可改为：可改为： The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader. 2022-6-4Lecture13定语从句定语从句E.g. E.g. 1) He sent he

10、r a letter. 2）In the letter he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 可改为：可改为：He sent her a letter，in which he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 2022-6-4Lecture14复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-with结构结构E.g. E.g. As the pace of change is quickening, more and more scientists find it hard t

11、o keep up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines. 2022-6-4Lecture15复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-with结构结构可改为：可改为： With the pace of change quickening, more and more scientists find it hard to keep up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines. 2022-6-4Lecture16复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-分词结构分词结构

12、E.g.E.g. Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. 2022-6-4Lecture17复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-分词结构分词结构可改为：可改为： Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers resort to smoking. 2022-6-4Lecture18倒装句倒装句否定词位于

13、句首时否定词位于句首时 e.g.I have never been to Europe.可改为：可改为：Never have I been to Europe. 2022-6-4Lecture19倒装句倒装句only引出的状语位于句首时引出的状语位于句首时 e.g.The doctor realized that only when his patient needed surgery.可改为：可改为：Only when his patient needed surgery did the doctor realize that. 2022-6-4Lecture20被动句被动句e.g. We

14、should take effective measures to stop various forms of pollution. 可改为：可改为：Effective measures should be taken to stop various forms of pollution. 2022-6-4Lecture21强调句强调句e.g. Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式一般句式)可改为：可改为：It was Ah Fu who saved my sister.(强调句式强调句式) 2022-6-4Lecture22 Assignment Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a