广东省揭阳市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（14）

1、揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（14）附参考范文（重庆卷） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。Today is Sunday .Ive been in Canada for two months .This is the first time that Ive be

2、en away my family for such a 76. long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78. many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. is a little ha

3、rdly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both surprised 82. that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who

4、has been 85. to China several times.I just cant wait.【答案】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Today is Sunday .Ive been in Canada for two months .This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a 76. from long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. mine soon got used to live with

5、out my parents around. Katia,like 78. living many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. is friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. met is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. hard usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both s

6、urprised 82. families that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. and we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. the will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85. whom *结束高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作8高考英语(江西卷)人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介

7、绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1广交朋友2可自由表达思想3利于外语学习1浪费时间2影响学习3可能上当受骗？ 留意：1文章必须包括表中的全部内容。2词数为100左右。3参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheated开头：Should students make friends on line ? 展开：Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely exp

8、ress their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. 展开：Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.结尾：It is my opinion

9、 that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词

10、下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mrs Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know what things are going. Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away

11、 from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. Im going to at

12、tend mine first lesson this afternoon, for Ive got some preparations to make. Keep in touch.Best,Carol参考答案-短文改错:1. what-how2. anything-everything3. find-found4. on second-on the second5. friend-friends6. on-with7. warmly-warm8. to stop-stop9. mine-my10. for-so*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作10可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行可持

13、续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。(江苏省2008年高考全真模拟试卷)目前的状况1 自然资源日趋减少2 环境问题依然严重3 人的环保观念淡薄4 贫富差距越来越大已采取的措施1 制定了相关的法律法规2 投入了大量的资金改善环境3 对民众进行教育4 加强了国际间相互合作你的看法 留意：1不要逐条翻译。1 可适当发挥2 词数：150左右3 文章的开头部分以给出4 参考词汇：差距gap相关法律relevant lawsOne possible version:The idea of sustainable development has been

14、 accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet.The present situation is worrying. First, natural resources are becoming less than before. Second, as some people are not aware of the importance of the environmental protection, the problems with it remai

15、n extremely serious to some degree. The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider.To our great joy, many countries have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. One the o

16、ther hand, popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out.As for myself, I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development, our future and the lives of our children and our grandchildren will be in danger.*结束短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌

17、写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear John, I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me t

18、o your house and I really look forward to going to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing. Whats more, I have caught a bad

19、cold lately and I was really not myself. Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua答案解析-短文改错Dear John, I am extremely sorry to

20、 tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to ofgoing to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, Isharing experiences Muchwill be absent from your party owing to the fact th

21、at the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing. theWhats more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself. worse amAnyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? I am true sorry. I hope you will

22、forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I truly acceptlook forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua*结束(一)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：段首句1.关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为There are different opinions among people as toSome people suggest that_.2.俗话说(常言道)，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying Its the experien

23、ce of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many case seven today.3.现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是Today，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First，Second，.What makes things worse is that.4.现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外(而且)。Nowadays，it is common to ,Many people like because.Besides，.5.任何

24、事物都是有两面性，也不例外。Every coins has two sides and is not an exception.6.关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)，在他们看来，Peoples opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that,To them，.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problemwhich is becoming more and more serious.8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题 ，特别是在年青人当中，

25、将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious

26、problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？According to the figure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，It can be seen that while .Obviously，but why？*结束第三套短文改错（满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：

27、在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday onevening.In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who

28、lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he discovered he cant remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spe

29、nt several hours at the airport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to England. 参考答案 短文改错（满分10分）In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who

30、lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/ Kennedy Airport. When he toreached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he arrived stilldiscovered he cant remember her family name too

31、! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the couldnt eitherairport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but trying thatwith much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he nocaught a next plane back to England. The*结束短文改

32、错（10分）错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。者据Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then s

33、he introduced her and said they shouldnt call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didnt dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Dont be

34、 afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.短文改错参考答案givinggiven 去掉out her-herself they-we said-say turns-turntoo-so kind-kindly do后加it that-what*结束 【西南师大附中】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：

35、把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。 When I was a small child my parents didnt have many money 76_and I had a very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was 10 and he77_had gone out singing Christmas carols and made quite a bit

36、78_money. With telling anyone he went to the shop and spent almost79_every penny of his money on a teddy bear; then he using the80_change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming on them. He 81_came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these 82_things for me as Christmas gifts. T

37、wenty-five years late the 83_moth-eaten teddy bear has long since been thrown away, but I even 84_have the little rusty necklace in my jewelry box to remind of my cousins kindness. 85_短文改错：76. manymuch 77. 去掉 a 78. bit 后加of 79. withwithout 80. usingused81. themit 82. whatthat 83. latelater 84. evens

38、till 85. remind后加me*结束第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小題1分，满分10分）When my twenty birthday came , I was not at home. 76._In order to celebrate such important day with my 77_Parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them 78_For having raised me for twenty years, and expressed 79_my love to them. Later mother t

39、alked me when they 80_read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. But father 81_appeared much cool. After that. he read it alone carefully, 82_and then he put it up into a desk drawer. I can imagine the 83_scene clear because I know father. Being a man with few 84_word, he prefers to show his love

40、for me in a silent way. 85_参考答案 76.twenty-twentieth 77.such 后加an 78.him-them 79.正确80.talked-told 81.去掉were 82.去掉much或改为very83.up-wawy 84.clear-clearly 85.word-words*结束高考英语书面表达写作指导-议论文1. 引段高考英语议论文的引言可以有两部分组成：现象+观点。现象就来自作文题目。所以学生必须要理解题目中的每句话，把题目中的中文用英语表达出来就能成为不错的开篇。然后再开门见山地亮出自己的观点。2. 主体段 引证法(即引用一些名人名言

41、、成语、格言、谚语灯作为论据)； 例证法(即举例来进行论证 ) 喻证法(用比喻的方法来论证事理，把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂，使文章既生动又形象 ) 对比论证法(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证，使文章的表达效果更强烈，给人留下深刻印象 ) 归纳法 (从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。) 推理法 (从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析，而后得出结论) 驳论法 (先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点)。在主体段中，务必要牢记应采用先总后分的手法先亮出主题句，然后再用发展句充实段落。你必须围绕着引言段的观点展开，千万不能让人觉得的的

42、文章段落之间没有衔接。此外，在主体段中要恰当地使用过渡词，有明显的层次感，引领阅读者一层一层地根据你的分论点走向最终你要阐述的观点。3. 结尾段结论，用一、二句话来结束文章，做到首尾呼应。一定要再次澄清你的观点，切记与引言段的观点一致，建议用不同的词句法表达一个意思。(四)、英语议论文范文Private TutorsWith the development od science and society, more and more students are keen to take on private tutors. Some people think taking on a private

43、 tutor is good for students in some ways. The tutor can answer the studentsquestions individually and carefully and give them detailed advice; some private tutors assign their students more exercises to do and the students will learn extra knowledge from their tutors; it is known to us all that a go

44、od and experienced teacher can help his students to review their lessons in a very good way so that they can have a better understanding of the knowledge learned in class, which is help to them in their examinations. But every coin has two sides. Some people look upon it with disapproval. They hold

45、the opinion that the students rely too much on their tutor and they even take little notice of what their own teacher says in class; the private tutor assigns them to do a lot of extra exercises, thus occupying plenty of rheir spare time and they will be too worn out; contrary to what their parents

46、hope, their studies become worse than before. So it is hard to say whether taking on a private tutor is good or not. It all depends on the individual. But in my opinion, if you want to take on a private tutor, you should choose one carefully since he or she will have a great impact on your studies.

47、Money for EducationIn my opinion, it is worthwhile to spend more of the money in order to have the children better educated.First, as there are more than 40 or even 50 students in a class, in most cases, teachers can not take care of all the students in class. Therefore many students have to attend

48、spare time classes or even go to the tutors to make up for this.Second, we are now in the 21st century. With the development of society, only those who have a good education are more likely to get good jobs. So the more we learn now, the more chances we will have in the future. Of course we will get

49、 a high pay.In a word, spending money on education is certainly rewarding.III. Post-task ( Each composition 120-150 words)请你谈谈在学习上遇到困难时，如何想办法去解决，如何克服这些困难？IV. Sentence patterns:The point is that.From my point of viewAs for meAs far as I am concernedWe must recognize thatThere is no doubt thatThe main reason is thatAs we all knowV. Summary:VI. Assignment: ( Each composition 120-150 words) 1.每一位高三的学生都面临着巨大的压力。对压力，高三的学生看法不一，有的害怕压力；但有的却认为压力不是件坏事。请你谈谈你的看法。2 .2010年世博会将在上海举行。为了办好这次国际盛会，上海市将进一步改善环境。与此同时， 提高市民的素质和修养也势在必行，因为文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要。作为年轻人，我们自身也存在着一些不文明行为。请例举