写作教学+(1)

1、讨论v高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？v高考作文考查哪些写作能力？高考作文考查哪些写作能力？v学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？讨论v高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？扣题扣题流畅流畅有思想有思想有逻辑有逻辑用词恰当用词恰当讨论v学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？1.语 言 232.逻 辑 83.审 题 74.中式思维 65.内容表达 56.想 象 力 57.连 贯 性 48.结 构 39.书 写 210.细 节 211.写作技巧 112.文 体 1v 词汇量小v 句子单一v 句子时态乱v 句式结构错v

2、语法错误多v 不注意句子的完整v 乱用复杂句式v 时态、语态问题v 选词不恰当v 认识的词写不出来v 人称混乱v 单复数混乱v 主谓不一致v 基本句式没掌握v 用法搭配问题句式句式词汇词汇主要内容v认识写作和写作教学认识写作和写作教学v高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践v高三英语写作教学高三英语写作教学v加强对学生写作的反馈和评价加强对学生写作的反馈和评价 2022-5-77认识写作和写作教学认识写作和写作教学vWriting is the communication of content for a purpose to an audience.Content (Main idea + K

3、ey details)Purpose (Think + Do)Audience (People + Questions)2022-5-78课程标准对写作的要求课程标准对写作的要求v课程标准课程标准8级的写作要求级的写作要求1能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；2能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；3能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；4能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。 2022-5-79谋篇技巧谋篇技巧思维能力思维能力文化知识文化知识写作经验写作经验辨析能力辨析能力行文连贯行文连贯高考说明对写的考查要求高考说明对写的考查要求v考生应能：1根据不同文体，使用恰当的语言形

4、式完成书面交际任务；2运用恰当的句式、词汇和语法叙述、描述、表达观点和态度；3做到文章扣题、内容充实、结构完整、逻辑性强、语意连贯。2022-5-710课程标准对写作的要求课程标准对写作的要求v课程标准课程标准8级的写作要求级的写作要求1能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；2能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；3能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；4能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。 2022-5-711主要内容v认识写作和写作教学认识写作和写作教学v高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践v高三英语写作教学高三英语写作教学v加强对学生写作的反馈和评价加强对学生写作的反馈和

5、评价 2022-5-712课程标准的写作教学建议v教学目的：表述事实、观点、情感、想象力，教学目的：表述事实、观点、情感、想象力，交流信息，培养规范的写作习惯。交流信息，培养规范的写作习惯。v基本技能：基本技能： 整理思路；组织素材；整理思路；组织素材； 规划文章结构；列出提纲；规划文章结构；列出提纲； 起草文章；起草文章； 组织语言；遣词造句；组织语言；遣词造句； 修改文章；正确使用标点符号和字母大小写。修改文章；正确使用标点符号和字母大小写。2022-5-713高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践vLearn to write vWrite to learnvWrite for enjoy

6、ment 2022-5-714高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践vLearn to writev案例 1v案例 2 2022-5-715高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践vWrite to learnv案例案例22022-5-716高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践vWrite for enjoymentvFvRvIvEvNvD2022-5-717高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践vWrite for enjoymentvWhen I opened the door, I found a white elephant standing outside.v2022-5-718高中写作教学

7、的实践高中写作教学的实践vWrite for enjoymentvA friendKennethvAppearance A lot of black hairvDressJeans, and a Pacific umbrellavCharaterAlways smilingvMy feelingI like himv2022-5-719高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践My friendKennethA lot of black hairJeans, and a Pacific umbrellaAlways smilingI like him2022-5-720高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学

8、的实践My friendAlways smilingI like himA lot of black hairJeans, and a Pacific umbrellaKenneth2022-5-721高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践My friendKennethA lot of black hairJeans, and a Pacific umbrellaAlways smilingI like him2022-5-722高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践v写作是学生实践，体验的过程v学生的写作是在教师的指导下进行v写作的过程要比写作的结果更重要v关注语言输入与输出之间的关系v内容的

9、完整和清晰比语言的复杂更重要2022-5-723主要内容v认识写作和写作教学认识写作和写作教学v高中写作教学的实践高中写作教学的实践v高三英语写作教学高三英语写作教学v加强对学生写作的反馈和评价加强对学生写作的反馈和评价 2022-5-724高三写作教学vTell vs. Show more than tellv内容内容 vs. 形式形式v句式的复杂句式的复杂 vs. 句式的多样句式的多样2022年5月7日0时03分25Package tour or individual tour Nowadays, with the improvement of living standards, more

10、 and more people are able to make holiday trips. Their ways of traveling are different. Some people prefer to join a package tour. Its quite convenient to follow the tour guide to different scenic spots. Some other people, however, like to travel individually. They can adjust their plans. Personally

11、, I prefer the second way- traveling on my own. I may meet with inconveniences in finding accommodations. .TELL2022年5月7日0时03分26Package tour or individual tour Nowadays, with the improvement of living standards, more and more people are able to make holiday trips. Their ways of traveling are differen

12、t. Some people prefer to join a package tour. They think it costs less than an individual tour. Besides, its quite convenient to follow the tour guide to different scenic spots, where you probably get much fun. Some other people, however, just like to travel individually, mainly because it gives the

13、m great freedom. They can adjust their plan so their trip is always full of interesting things. Personally, I prefer the second way- traveling on my own, because I can decide where I might stay a little longer, and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. True, I may m

14、eet with inconveniences in finding accommodations, but much more freedom can be enjoyed. It is important to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly for relaxation.2022年5月7日0时03分27比较： Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm (11). We spent a whole week there (6). Upon our arrival, we were divi

15、ded into groups of four and each group shared one room (16). All by ourselves, we wiped the windows, swept the floor and made the bed (14). After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once (16). Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks

16、 (14). While we were there, we also helped with the corn harvest (11). We cut the corns off and piled them up (9). Never in my life had I ever seen so many corns lying about in the field (16). I felt it was great fun (6). On the last day, we gathered together in the open air to have a party, where w

17、e sang songs and danced happily (22). This was really an unforgettable experience for us all (9).2011. 6v比较vLast Monday, our general technology class tearcher, Mr. Wang, asked us to make a book shelf. While he taught us how to prepare and make the shelf, we all listened to him attentively. None of u

18、s wanted to know nothing about how to deal with it. Then some of us looked up information on the Internet, while others wrote the crafts. Not only did we know how to make a shelf, but also learned a great deal.2022-5-729书面表达vIn my opinion the competition in the area of grades is distracting. It dist

19、racts many students from their goal, which is to obtain an education that is good. There seems to be a belief among a few students that grades are more important than what is measured by them.vThe competition for grades distracts many students from their goal of obtaining a good education. A few stu

20、dents seem to believe that grades are more important than what they measure.2022年5月7日0时03分30书面表达vTell vs. Show more than tellv内容内容 vs. 形式形式v句式的复杂句式的复杂 vs. 句式的多样句式的多样2022年5月7日0时03分31书面表达v语言的基本功语言的基本功基本词汇基本词汇5个基本句式个基本句式v用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果用具体的实例说明想表达的内容用具体的实例说明想表

21、达的内容v增强写作的逻辑性增强写作的逻辑性主题句主题句连接词连接词冗余信息冗余信息2022年5月7日0时03分32书面表达v语言的基本功语言的基本功基本词汇基本词汇5个基本句式个基本句式条条道路通罗条条道路通罗马马2022年5月7日0时03分33书面表达vThe earth trembled.vThe earthquake destroyed the city.vThe result was chaos.vThe government sent the city aid.vThe citizens considered the earthquake a disaster.2022年5月7日0时

22、03分34书面表达他是谁我不关心。I dont care who he is.Who he is doesnt concern me. 2022年5月7日0时03分35书面表达他还没有解释他为什么来得那么晚。He didnt explain why he was/came so late.Why he was so late has not been explained. It was not explained why .2022年5月7日0时03分36书面表达v语言的基本功语言的基本功基本词汇基本词汇5个基本句式个基本句式v用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义 (内容？

23、语言？内容？语言？)通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果用具体的实例说明想表达的内容用具体的实例说明想表达的内容v增强写作的逻辑性增强写作的逻辑性主题句主题句连接词连接词冗余信息冗余信息2022年5月7日0时03分37词汇积累三：using dictionary There is nothing but clouds in the sky.Which picture may appear in your mind?adj.ABCD2022年5月7日0时03分38There is nothing but_ clouds in the sky. dense, heavy,

24、thick fluffy high, low broken, scattered fast-moving, scudding black, dark, grey, white2022年5月7日0时03分39Which picture may appear in your mind?vThere is nothing but heavy clouds in the sky.ABCD2022年5月7日0时03分40书面表达vThe earth trembled.vThe earthquake destroyed the city.vThe result was chaos.vThe governm

25、ent sent the city aid.vThe citizens considered the earthquake a disaster.2022年5月7日0时03分41书面表达vRecently, the earth trembled.vThe earthquake nearly destroyed the old city.vThe result was chaos.vThe government soon sent the city aid.vThe frightened citizens considered the earthquake a disaster.2022年5月7

26、日0时03分42书面表达vYesterday I went to the bookstore and bought a book. The book was very interesting.vYesterday I went to Xidan Bookstore. I bought a book named Harry Potter by J.K.Rowling. It was about , which was interesting. （代词）2022年5月7日0时03分43书面表达v语言的基本功语言的基本功基本词汇基本词汇5个基本句式个基本句式v用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义用最简单的话

27、表达最丰富的含义通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果用具体的实例说明想表达的内容用具体的实例说明想表达的内容v增强写作的逻辑性增强写作的逻辑性主题句主题句连接词连接词冗余信息冗余信息2022年5月7日0时03分44书面表达vAs far as Im concerned, the English Corner needs an organizer. Many students want to join it. I am one of them.vI wish to be the organizer because I want to be good at English.

28、 I like to communicate with others. And I will be able to provide different topics to encourage others to study together. vThanks the English teacher gives me the chance. If I come, I must use my power to help the English Corner.2022年5月7日0时03分45书面表达I am excited to learn that you want someone to orga

29、nize the English Corner. I want to sign up for it.I think I am fit for the job. First, I am enthusiastic with English study and I am good at English. We had an English speech contest last year. I won the first prize. Second, I like to communicate with others and I enjoy great popularity in our class. Most importantly, I organized s