(完整版)AgreeorDisagree型

1、Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpopulationproblems（两个问题要提出两个解决方案）.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbeeffective?（第一句写背景）Thereisnodoubtthattrafficandpollutionfromvehicleshavebecomehugeproblems,bothincitiesandmotorways（高速公路）everywhere.（第二句点明

2、自己的观点）Solvingtheseproblemsislikelytoneedmorethanasimpleriseinthepriceofpetrol.（第二段第一句肯定题目方案的有用之处，提高油价直接可以抑制私家车的使用数量）Whileitisundeniablethatprivatecaruseisoneofthemaincausesoftheincreaseintrafficandpollution,higherfuelcostsarelikelytolimitthenumberofdriversforlong（长久）.（第二句承上启下，以“这个政策”开头，同时提出这样做的不可行性，

3、从而否定这一观点）Asthispolicywouldalsoaffectthecostofpublictransport,itwouldbeveryunpopularwitheveryonewhoneedstotravelontheroads.（第三句转折，引出下一段，点明有其他更可行的方法）Buttherearevariousothermeasures（措施）thatcouldbeimplemented（实施）thatwouldhaveahugeeffectontheseproblems.（第一句点明，先说解决污染的问题）1thinktotackletheproblemofpollution

4、,cleanerfuelsneedtobedeveloped.（第二句说明可行的原因，因为技术已经支持电动汽车的生产）Thetechnologyisalreadyavailabletoproduceelectriccars（that说明电动汽车的好处）thatwouldbebothquieterandcleanertouse.（既然好，就要广泛采用，那么应该采取什么具体措施呢）Persuadingmanufacturersandtravelerstoadoptthisnewtechnologywouldbeamoreeffectivestrategyforimprovingairquality

5、,especiallyincities.（第一句说明仅仅这样不能解决堵车问题，从而引出第四段对堵车问题的解决方法）Howeve,trafficcongestion（堵车）willnotbesolvedby（对上一段的总结）changingthetypeofprivatevehiclepeoplecanuse.（既然不能解决，怎么做？）Todothis,weneedtoimprovethechoiceofpublictransportservicesavailabletotravelers.（第三句，举例论证）Forexample,ifsufficientskytrainsandundergro

6、undtrainsystemswerebuiltandeffectivelymaintainedinourmajorcities,（因果论证，改写）thentrafficontheroadswouldbedramaticallyreduced.（第四句继续举例）Long-distancetrainandcoachservicesshouldbemadeattractiveandaffordablealternativestodrivingyourowncarforlongjourneys.Inconclusion,Ithinkthatlong-termtrafficandpollutionre

7、ductionswoulddependoneducatingthe（公众怎么做）publictousepublictransportmore,andongovernments（政府怎么做）usingpublicmoneytoconstructandrunefficientsystems.Itisimportantforchildrentolearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthisdistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordis

8、agreewiththisopinion?Whatsortofpunishmentshouldparentsandteachersbeallowedtousetoteachgoodbehaviortochildren?（第一句写背景）Oneimportantstageinachild'sgrowthiscertainlythedevelopmentofaconscience,whichislinkedtotheabilitytotellrightfromwrong.（第二句thisskill开头承上启下）Thisskillcomeswithtimeandgoodparenting,（第

9、三句点明自己的观点）andmyfirmconvictionisthatpunishmentdoesnothavemuchofaroletoplayinthis.（第四句同样是点明观点，反对题目的观点）ThereforeIhavetodisagreealmostentirelywiththegivenstatement.（具体情况具体对待）Tosomeextentthequestiondependsontheageofthechild.（第二句展开支持句具体举例）Topunishaveryyoungchildisbothwrongandfoolish,（举例解释）asaninfantwillno

10、tunderstandwhatishappeningorwhyheorsheisbeingpunished.（既然惩罚不合适，那么可以改用奖励制度）Oncetheageofreasonisreached（承上启下）however,achildcanberewardedforgoodbehavioranddiscouragedfrombad.（thiskind指代“奖励制度”，与惩罚比较）Thiskindbutfirmapproachwillachievemorethanharshpunishments,whichmightentail（牵涉）manynegativeconsequencesun

11、intendedbytheparents.（那么老师和家长应该怎么做）Tohelpachildlearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong,teachersandparentsshouldfirstlyprovidegoodrolemodelingintheirownbehavior.Afterthat,ifsanctions（惩罚）areneeded,thepunishmentshouldnotbeofaphysicalnature,（每个观点都要解释原因）asthatmerelysendsthemessagethatitisacceptableforlarg

12、erpeopletohitsmallerones一anoutcomewhichmaywellresultinthechildstartingtobullyothers.Norshouldthepunishmentbeinanywaycruel.（提出第二个可行方案）Rather,teachersandparentscanuseavarietyofmethodstodiscipline（管教）theiryoungcharges,suchasdetention（监禁，放学后留校），withdrawalofprivilege,andtime-out.Makingthepunishmentfitthecrimeisausefulnotion（观念），（举例论证）whichwouldseechildrenbeingmadetopickupru