短文改错(公开课)

1、英语专题复习英语专题复习1. 看不出句子有错，感觉越读越对。看不出句子有错，感觉越读越对。2. 看得出句子错误看得出句子错误, 但无法改正。但无法改正。Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition? 短文改错短文改错Proof-reading Passage correcting考考 查查 内内 容容一一.词的用法词的用法1连词连词 2冠词冠词 3介词介词 4形容词和副词形容词和副词 二二.一致性问题：一致性问题：1主谓一致主谓一致 2名词的单复数一致名词的单复数一致 3代词的指代一致代词的指代一致 4时态语态一致时态语态一致5非谓动

2、词与逻辑主语一致非谓动词与逻辑主语一致6行文逻辑关系的一致行文逻辑关系的一致动动 词词 冠词连词常光临，冠词连词常光临，习惯用法要记住；习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，逻辑错误须关注，动词形：无论是谓语动词还是非谓语动词，动词形：无论是谓语动词还是非谓语动词，动词错误就是原形、一般现在时、第三人称动词错误就是原形、一般现在时、第三人称单数形式、一般过去式、现在分词、过去分单数形式、一般过去式、现在分词、过去分词、动名词等动词形式的错误。如：词、动名词等动词形式的错误。如：(2021全国全国卷卷) It is always crowded with custome

3、rs at mealtimes. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that have一、动词形一、动词形错误主错误主要包括两类：要包括两类：1.时态和语态时态和语态 2.主谓一致主谓一致(2021全国全国卷卷)We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip.(2021全国全国卷卷) I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.choosewearing解决方案解决方案(1) 通读全文，搞

4、清文中动词时态的通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律主旋律 .(2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式结合语境，灵活运用时态形式 .(3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动 . 考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：(1) 短文中时态的使用前后不一致 .(2) 在特定语境条件下时态的误用(如含有状语从句的复合句中，主句用将来时态，而从句中那么用一般现在时态) .(3) 主动语态和被动语态的混用 .(2021全国全国卷卷) If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we

5、cannot get from books.(2021全国全国卷卷) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.knowledgeyears二、名词数二、名词数 名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式1. 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系联系 .2. 记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法用法 . 3.3.结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名词词 . 1. 形容词和副词混用，形容词和副词混用，2. 三级错用三级错用三

6、、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副修饰名词，修饰名词，bebe动词，系动词要用形容词动词，系动词要用形容词修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词比较级和最高级的使用比较级和最高级的使用(2021全国全国卷卷)Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady.(2021全国全国卷卷)At one time, I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me, so I hoped I could be freely from them.steadilyfree(2021全国全

7、国卷卷) They were also the best and worse years in my life.worst (2021课标卷课标卷) I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. (2021大纲大纲卷卷) The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school are gone. less old考点剖析考点剖析 :(1) 形容词和副词的混用，是短文改形

8、容词和副词的混用，是短文改错中常见的考点之一错中常见的考点之一 .(2)比较级和最高级的混用或误用比较级和最高级的混用或误用.(3)比较级和最高级修饰语的误用比较级和最高级修饰语的误用 以及近义词的误用以及近义词的误用 .四、非谓语，细区分四、非谓语，细区分不定式不定式符号符号to的多余与遗漏的多余与遗漏现在分词与过去分词混用现在分词与过去分词混用 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.2007宁夏卷：宁夏卷：Li Meng came

9、 see me every day. talkingto四、非谓语，细区分四、非谓语，细区分2021浙江卷：浙江卷： It is one of the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year.学生版：学生版： The big fire burned hundreds of houses, made hundreds of families homeless.makingfound(1) 纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作的句子成分所作的句子成分.(2) 系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能系统掌握非谓语

10、动词的句法功能.(3) 前后联系，整体把握前后联系，整体把握 .五五、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟高考链接高考链接6： I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term.us1.1.人称代词人称代词主格主格和和宾格宾格，物主代词物主代词的使用的使用反身代词反身代词oneselfoneself 的使用的使用3 3不定代词不定代词的使用的使用4 4Both,all,either,neither,noneBoth,all,either,neither,none的使用的使用. .5.5. Whose Whose 和和whoswhos，it

11、sits和和 itits s的区别的区别人称人称单数单数复数复数主格主格宾格宾格主格主格宾格宾格第一人第一人称称第二人第二人称称第三人第三人称称Imeweusyouyouyouyouhehimsheheritittheythem单数单数复数复数形容形容词性词性物主物主代词代词myyourhisherits ouryourtheir名词名词性物性物主代主代词词mine yours hishers its ours yours theirs五五、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟2007全国全国 I was only about six when he held his hand out to me.

12、 I took it in me and we walked.mine2007陕西：陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myselfWe must try ours best to overcome all difficulties to solve this particular problems.our考点剖析考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：个方面：1) 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误的错误.2) “it 一词的不当使用一词的不当使用

13、(包括用于包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语从句中或作形式主语或宾语).3) 不定代词或反身代词的误用不定代词或反身代词的误用.连词连词but， and， or和和so的用法错误的用法错误冠词冠词 a, an, the 误用或混用误用或混用六、冠词、连词常光临六、冠词、连词常光临 连词：连词：(2021全国全国卷卷)Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.(2021全国全国卷卷)He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small t

14、own, he was strong and powerful.and 冠词：冠词：(2021全国全国卷卷)But in that case, we will learn little about world.the(2021全国全国卷卷) At the first, I thought I knew everything and 考点剖析考点剖析: (1) 并列连并列连but ,and ,or, so 等词的混等词的混用，常常出现在改错题中。用，常常出现在改错题中。(2) 并列连词和附属连词的混用。并列连词和附属连词的混用。(3) 平行结构方面的错误。平行结构方面的错误。 主要考查习惯搭配方

15、面的根底知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的根底知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。配错误。 catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon such many people in a shortaonso七、习惯用法要记住七、习惯用法要记住 Have sth on common Have an effect in sb Lose the heart Make a great progress The war was broke out The accident was h

16、appened In the hurry Share sth for sb A pair of shoe A lot of equipments General speaking As soon as possiblyinonthethea awaswaswaswasawithshoesequipmentGenerallypossible多词、少词和搭配多词、少词和搭配七、习惯用法要记住七、习惯用法要记住解析方案解析方案:(1) 平时的学习中注意积累语言知识，平时的学习中注意积累语言知识，特别是一些固定搭配的记忆特别是一些固定搭配的记忆 . (2) 强化语法训练，分清连词，副词强化语法训练，分

17、清连词，副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能和介词之间的区别和句法功能 . (3)语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合起来起来 .八、句子成分多分析八、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。析，才能找出用词不当的错误。2021年安徽卷年安徽卷 : She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?I asked.2007天津卷

18、：天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but who / thatWhy九、逻辑错误须关注九、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴张冠李戴。2006四川卷：四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.学生版学生版: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. wetheir When I was in high school , most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle ,that was only one hundred yuan .