(完整版)高中英语读后续写素材积累1

1、读后续写素材积累12019.10.16一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：Part1环境描写的adj要求:有声，有色，有质感，有味道thebluesky俺天）thesongsofbirds©鸣）thethunderingclouds（电光闪雷鸣）thefragileflowers（娇嫩的花）;（thedark,rainingevening雨夜交力口的夜晚）thegreengrass盾草）thefragrantroses（艳丽的玫瑰）；thesetting/ris

2、ingsun（落日/冉冉升起的太阳）Part2环境描写的verb（vi&vt）要求1） .Wind（blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1 .Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2 .Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3 .A

3、coolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4 .Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.传风吹拂过我的头发）Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）2） .Water（flow/travel/move/meander/enter）声音:1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山

4、谷中奏响。颜色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3 .Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。4 .Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。

5、（action,sound,colour）3） .Sky（stand/appear/turn）1 .Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2 .Blueskiesstoodtallandfar蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/听至U/感至U/闻至U某物（状态/动作/被）3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是如此.以至于4.S

6、thkeptsbspellbound/amazed景物使我如止匕陶醉/惊讶/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower景物让我完全惊呆了5.1 tlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike景物看起来像二、场景描写的素材（来自原著:追风筝的人）1. Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreez

7、ewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.（放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述）空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。2. Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingg

8、lass-clearsurface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。3. ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.（场景、比喻）我抬起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们

9、舞动着,飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在当成家园的城市。4. Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.（场景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。5. Somewher

10、e,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。6. Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdled

11、grayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.天气）到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。7. Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.景象）太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感一）、情感好词：1 .喜乐 Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 Asmileo

12、funderstandingflashedacrosshisfaceftfl脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。 Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。 Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。 Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石

13、一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。Iwaswildwithjoy,我欣喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription我高兴得难以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。?Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。?Herflushedfacewasshiningwith

14、excitement.她激动得满脸通红。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悦。?Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。?Amusementgleamedinhiseyes他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。2.愤怒：Iwasseizedbyange战充满了愤怒。Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage他几乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithange

15、r.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger他愤怒地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes他用灼热的目光怒视着我。Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger他气得脸色阴沉。3 .悲伤烦恼 Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadnes或漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonth

16、evergeoftear她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwineO个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。 Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。 Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhandsM掩面哭泣。 Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。 Afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface他皱起了眉头。 Th

17、eysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。 Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisfacei消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen.他满是悲伤?Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。?Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低落。4 .害怕：Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。Fearslowlycreepsuponher恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen.她感至U恐,惧ShewaschokedbyfearM因恐惧而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。 Herheartbea