近五年湖北高考英语作文分析

1、近五年湖北高考英语作文分析1. 近五年高考写作一览 年份 考查形式 考查体裁 内容 词数要求/范文 分数 教材相关内容 2009提纲书信指出英国朋友汉语成语使用不当100左右/15025分B7U52010英语提示开放结合事例说明微笑的作用100左右/13425分B7U12011英语提示开放结合事例谈与人合作100左右/16025分B1U1(friendship)B7U3（teamwork）B3U3(cooperation)B7U4(sharing)2012英语提示开放结合事例谈论人生观：所得与所用120左右/11830分 2013英语提示开放结合事例说明语言的力量120左右30分B1

2、U2(English)二近五年高考写作规律 1. 开放式作文为大趋势2. 字数增加，从100字到120字左右3. 分值加重，从25分到30分4. 题材贴近学生生活，现实感强，易于动笔5. 话题与高中教材密切了解三2013评分原则 本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。词数少于100，将分数降低一个档次。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前题下侧重于语言的表达。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。拼写与标点符号是语言表达准确的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程

3、度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。四、各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档25-30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。所有内容与提示吻合。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。语法结构与词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力。恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档19-24分完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构与词汇应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达有一定影响。较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档1

4、3-18分基本完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示比较吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构与词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档7-12分仅完成试题规定的部分任务。主要内容与提示基本吻合。语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档1-6分未完成试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示不太吻合。语法结构单一，应用词汇十分有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语

5、句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。五写作步骤 审题考生动笔前要仔细阅读试题，明确写作要求。审题包括审写作要求、审文体、审写作核心内容、审写作时态及语态和审人称等方面的内容。 拟点就是通过审题，拟出写作的基本的重难点，找出五六个动词或动词短语；有时还可构思一些写作可能要用的句型、句式。然后再提炼要点，以备下一步使用。根据提示，理顺要点，既可保证不遗漏所要表达的信息，又可使表达的内容条理清晰。 联句将上一步列出来的要点逐句表达出来，这是书面表达写作时较为关键的一步。完成这个步骤要注意： 书面

6、表达重在达意，千万不要简单直译，要用自己最有把握的短语或句型将意思完整、准确地表达出来。 如果碰到汉语提示中有一时找不到相对应的英语词语或句型时，不要轻易放弃，因为英语中常常会有一句多译的现象。 尽可能多地运用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构，如复合句、倒装句、并列句、强调句和分词结构等。 选择正确的人称、时态、语态等进行表达。 如果是记叙文，还要写明时间、地点和人物。 成文就是将写好的句子组织起来，形成段落式短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语，以增强文章的连贯性和流畅性。 润色就是有意识地将一些“低级词汇”转换成“高级词汇”，将一些“简单结构”转换成“高级结构

7、”，以凸显文章亮点，增加得高分的机会，例如使用新颖词汇或句型等。 六提纲式作文的写作方法 1特点 提纲式书面表达是把材料分割成信息块，列成独立的文字信息。此类试题中有较多的文字说明实际上是规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能少。由于这类试题包含较多的文字说明，容易改变书面表达的性质，使作文成为了翻译。因此，考生应灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将试题要求的要点完整的表达出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。此类试题主要学生的实际语言能力。2例题（2009年湖北高考作文） 假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的外语水平。最近你收

8、到汤姆的电子邮件（附后），发现有一个成语使用不当。请根据下列要点，用英文回一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 不应使用“无所不为”，应使用“无所事事”； 2. 说明这两个成语的用法； 3. 给予鼓励。 注意：1.词数为100左右； 2.参考释义：无所不为- do all kinds of bad things无所事事- have nothing to do;3.除以上两个成语外，邮件中不得使用其他汉字或拼音； 4.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数），但不得抄入答题卡。附（汤姆的邮件）： 华华，你好！ 近几天在忙什么事？有什么有意思的事吗？我们的学校放假了，所以这几天我在家无 所不为，

9、饱食终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思，我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。祝好！ 3范文欣赏 Hi! Tom,Nice to read your e-mail today. I notice youve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, Im afraid there is one mistake Id like to point out. It is “无所不为”. This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”. Are you doing all

10、 kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that youve got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use “无所事事”. We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “无所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothi

11、ng meaningful to do. Have I made myself clear?Anyway, Im amazed at the progress youve made.Hope youll find a job soon.Huahua4常用句式(书信)Im writing to tell you about.Im very much delighted to inform you that.I apologize to for not writing to you for a long time.It was so good to hear from you and I shal

12、l be very pleased to let you have the information you need.Im very have to hear that you are all enjoying good health.Give my regards to.Im looking forward to your early reply.Please remember me to your parents/ family.5即学即练习 假如你叫陈宇，你的英国笔友Mike在上次来信中谈到了低碳生活这个话题。最近几个月校倡导学生过低碳生活、过节约生活、做有责任感的公民，引导学生从出行、

13、购物、用水、家电和餐具使用方面反省自己的生活方式。请你用英文给Mike回信。回信要点如下：1你对低碳生活的理解2你校开展的活动3你最近生活方式的改变（至少选取三个方面）注意：                                1词数为100左右；2参考词汇  低碳生活

14、 low carbon life (style)3信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）Dear Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now Id like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months. Im really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours Chen Yu范文： De

15、ar Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now Id like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more pe

16、ople are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.Interest tingly, our school called on students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes i

17、n my way of life, which ranges from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though i

18、t is not so convenient. TV and computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.Im really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours Chen Yu6趋势 提纲式作文考查的机率已不再大，因为提纲式的作文不能反映出学生的真实水平，只是进行中文要点的翻译而已，也

19、不符合高校选拔人才的要求。 七开放式作文的写作方法 1特点 开放式作文类似语文考试中的材料作文，试题给出考生一定的素材或主题，让考生在此基础上自由发挥，自由创作，不受“文体形式，内容要点”的限制，甚至不受短文词数的限制。这种开放式作文和目前其他形式的书面表达相比，难度更大，要求更高 2例题（2011年湖北高考作文） We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too. 注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗

20、歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右。 3范文欣赏 Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life.One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several chances that I shou

21、ld have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates comfort and persuasion as well as Peters apology and explanation that helped me realize he d

22、id have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasnt long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever.From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get through and get along w

23、ell.4写作方法 例：请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意： 无须写标题； 内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为100左右。 1）步骤

24、第一段：引出话题 开头第一段引出话题，点出观点，可用到主语从句和定语从句。 It is well-known that smile is the most pleasant expression in life, from which we can benefit a lot, for example, getting encouragement and building up confidence.也可运用谚语格言的方式吸引读者注意，同时引出话题，点出观点。 There is a saying that goes, “life is much like a mirror. If you sm

25、ile upon it ,it smiles back upon you.”, with which you can get along well with others. 第二段：写一个事例，举例论证法，记叙文段落 正文部分，则可运用写记叙文的方式结合事例进行叙事论证自己的观点。要注意连词的使用，使叙述有逻辑条理，连贯通顺。 Take myself as an example, When I first learned English, I found it was not as easy as I had thought before. Disappointed, I decided to

26、 quit. At this time My English teacher came to me, saying, “I believe you can do it." After that, she gave me a big shining smile. Suddenly, I was full of confidence again. Since then, a confident smile has always been on my face whenever a challenge comes to me. 第三段：你的观点，议论文段落。 结尾部分，重申话题和观点，回应

27、开头，对好的方面要有提倡，利弊都有的方面要进行度的把握。 2）总结：作文模版可为 It is well-known that . is the most . in life, from which we can . for example. Take myself as an example, When I first . Disappointed.Suddenly.Finally.Since then.In conclusion, . can bring us . with which .It is advocated that we should Only with can we 3）即学

28、即练：（2011年湖北高考英语作文） 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限

29、；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右。范文： It is well-known that teamwork is the most important way of solving problem in life, through which we can complete the task efficiently.Take myself as an example, I was the leader of a football team. Once in a match, our team failed although all the mem

30、bers had tried their best. Later the coach told us the with key point was teamwork, which means we should cooperate with each other. Realizing the importance of teamwork, finally we succeed.In conclusion, teamwork can help us play the role of every member at best. Only with teamwork can we make our

31、complicated work easier.4常用词汇短语 1occur 替换 think ofSuddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2devote替换spendHe spends all his spare time in reading. He devotes all h

32、is spare time to reading.3seek替换want / look forThey sought (wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4average 替换ordinaryI m an average ( ordinary ) student.5but替换veryThe film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night

33、 was anything but boring.6seat 替换sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.7be supposed to 替换shouldHe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8appreciate 替换thankThank you very much for you help. We appreciate your help very much. / Your hel

34、p is much appreciated.9the case替换 trueI dont think it is the case ( true ).10on替换as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he began his research. On his arrival, he began his research.11due to替换because ofHe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm. 12cover替换walk/readAfter covering (walking) 10 miles, we

35、all felt tired.13contribute to替换  be helpful/usefulPlenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans

36、? Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 15aaae to light替换discoverThe family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the workshop, we went back to

37、school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).17aaae up with替换think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18set aside替换saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books. 19be of + n. 替换adj.The products are of high quality

38、 (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.20refer to  替换talk about/of, mentionThe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.21can not but / can not help but替换have to doI could not but (had to) go home.22more often than not替换usuallyMore often than not (Usually), the meaning o

39、f many words can be easily guessed.23lest替换so that /in order thatI wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.24be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much. I am long to se

40、e you.25be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.26more than替换very Im very glad to learn that you are coming in September. Im more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.  If there is

41、anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.27perfect (ly) 替换good/ very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).28do sb a/the favor 替换helpWould you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?29the other day替换a few days agoThe

42、 other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. 30in the course of替换during In the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31the majority of替换mostThe majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to goin

43、g to the cinema.32consist of替换be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.33be worn out替换 be tired / broken After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired). My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.34become of替换 happenWhat do think has become of ( ha

44、ppened to ) him ?35attend to替换look after 36on condition that替换as long as37nevertheless替换however38express ones satisfaction with替换be satisfied with 39spare no efforts to do替换try ones best to do40many a 替换many41be rushed off ones feet  替换be busy in doing42a handful of替换a little / some43meanwhile替

45、换at the same time44get to ones feet替换stand up 45beneath替换under46occasionally替换sometimes /once in while47for instance替换for example48seldom替换not often49wealthy替换 rich50amazing替换surprising 51as a matter of fact 替换in fact5常用习语 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。

46、 3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 4.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。 6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。 7.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。 8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。 9.All work and

47、no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。 11.More hasty, less speed. 欲速则不达。 12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。 13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。 14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里

48、之行始于足下。 15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。 17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。 18.well begun, half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。 19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。 20.Out of sight, out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。 21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 22.Call back white and whit

49、e back. 颠倒黑白。 23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。 24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。 25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 26.live not to eat, but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。 27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。 28.East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。 29.Its not the gay coat that

50、makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。 30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。 31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。 32.The older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。 33.Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。 34.An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 35.As the tree, so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。 36.To live is to learn, to learn is to b

51、etter live.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。 6常用句式 It句型 It will be + some time + beforeIt wont be long before humans visit the Mars. It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossi

52、ble to fix it without the right spare parts. It is + 被强调部分 + that1)  It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2) Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge. more than any other 表示最高级Among the optional courses, spoken English and compute

53、r study are more popular than any one else. 名词从句 It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. My hometown is no longer what it used to be.（非限制性）定语从句 It was quite an experience for us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life. 分词结构 I dont kn

54、ow about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great sc

55、ientist and inventor. with结构 A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured. He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. 倒装句 The time is so precious that we cant afford to waste it. So precious is time

56、that we cant afford to waste it. Although we are tired, we are happy.Tired as we are, we are happy. Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. 被动语态 Opinions are divided on the question. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. New factories, houses

57、and roads have been built. 巧妙的改写（1）Only 改成no one but   Only Tom passed the exam last week. No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）as soon as 改成No soonerthan/Hardlywhen/Immediately/The  moment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）have sb/sth do/done The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg