2020年1月浙江省春季高考英语作文读后续写写作指导(含范文)

1、2020年1月浙江省春季高考英语作文读后续写写作指导本次高考续写考生反映最多的是无话可说，无从下笔 -也就是无法构建合理情节；语 言上，不知道如何形象地对狗狗的动作进行描写。另外，原文与续写部分前后人称的一致 性问题，还有就是主题无法确定等。那么，遇到这一类的小故事，情节该如何合理展开，让自己有话可说呢？圣林英语有 一个小窍门。将镜头拉近（zoom in）,拉近到主要人物的一米范围内，看看这一米内的前 后左右上下以及主要人物的内心。结合主题，对这个范围内的细节进行描写，相信你会有 很多内容可以写。下水作文就是这样写的，具体思路请看下面的7+7模式”。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写

2、两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。续写的词数为150左右Tm going to miss you so much. Poppy/ said the tall thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his pu”，and smiled, trying not to let hisget the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven th

3、eir son several hours out of town to the ry where he would soon be living and studying. Itwas time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy.lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. wl guess this is it/ he said

4、. TH see you back home in a month, okay?, His parents nodded, and they A as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy s mother turned to the do% -Okay, Poppy, time to go back home The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week,

5、Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn*tThey offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt

6、her usual chfierful self. Her owners started to get worried. *What should we do to cheer Poppy up?* asked Dad. Wpvp tripd pvprything/,1 have an idea, but it might be a little crazy/ smiled Mom. Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Lets get a little dog for Pop

7、py.It didnl take long before thy walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but wher she saw the box she stopped. She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caughx the smell.注意：1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中除有下划线的关送诩语；

8、3 .续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好； 4接写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Para 2. A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university.二、下水续写“ 7+7 ”模式Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.1. .It was hiding in one corner of the box , with a cur

9、ious look in its eyes.2. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on itsback ,unable to stand up.3. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing.4. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor.5. Poppy , isn t it a swedog ? It s for you! ” Mom in

10、aksoftvoice. It s your companion. ”6. Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member.7. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Poppy had forgotten her old friend.Para 2. A few weeks later

11、, the boy arrived home from university.1. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously.2. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy besidePoppy, growling and sniffing at his feet.What an

12、3. Immediately, he bent down, stroked its head and asked, adorable puppy! Whose is it?”4. His parents smiled and replied,got it fo rPWppy because.5. Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at theuniversity , theboy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.6. Tears burred his vision

13、as he murmured,“ Poppy, I miss you, too.7. And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like a baby in his arms.Para 1 . Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box , with a curious look in its eyes.Wagging its tail, it tried to clim

14、b out of the box, but it fell down on itsback ,unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing.Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor.Poppy , isn t it ”a sweet dog ? It s for you! ” Mormsaisbft voice.It s your companion.Cheerful and yet a little nervo

15、us, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas andcarrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Poppy had forgotten her old friend.Para 2 . A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.Poppy threw herself at him and l

16、icked his hands and face excitedly, her eyessparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took theboy for a longtime to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy, growling and sniffingat his feet. Immediately, he bent down, stroked its head and asked,“ What anadorable puppy! Whose is it?” His parents smiled and repliedWe got it forPuppy because. ” Knowing what had happe