郑州留学中介：出国留学申请文书写作务必做到详略得当

1、个人特点(兴趣爱好、天赋、性格等等) 写作要领服诺网介绍： 不要过度吹嘘、夸大自己的成就，需要跳出来对自己做一个相对客观的评价。Miracles happen, but they dont come easily.I fell in love with volleyball in junior high school in China. Maybe it was my passion, talent and a bit of work that made me stand out in this sport. I was selected as the leader of the class

2、team to prepare for the school volleyball competition. I made training plans, asked help from professional trainers, and after months of special drills and two weeks of competing events, our class eventually won the first prize. I was quite proud of myself about this. So when I got the chance to be

3、an exchange student in America, I immediately decided to try out for the local volleyball team, and was not surprised to see my name on the Varsity list. But there was a surprise in store for me I was put on the second string list.This is not happening to me, I prayed. But that was the harsh reality

4、, and the truth is: I cannot change reality if I dont change myself! So, at home, I made a self-resolution and listed out all the problems I had: First, I was not familiar with the English terms about volleyball, which would affect my performance if I could not understand the coach well. Second, som

5、e of the skills I used back in China were not defensive or offensive enough to deal with my new team of players. Then, goals set, I got to work!I gathered terms often used from professional volleyball websites and magazines, and learned about the names of different serves, sets, passes, and those of

6、 various attacks, blocks, and digs. After the term problem settled, the bigger mission came to me: to enhance my skills. My coach said my often used underhand serves were too easy to receive, so I should practice employing some more unpredictable serves like the jump float. He was caring enough to p

7、oint out every other problem I had in training. I always spent extra hours playing on the court after the training session ended for others, and practiced till my weaknesses mentioned by my coach were corrected.I was blessed to have such a helpful coach by my side to give me guidance, encouragement,

8、 and recognition, because after a lot of hard work, my skills were tremendously improved, and my team even selected me as the leader in the end. This was huge for me - from a second string player to a team leader!This could be counted as the most valuable experience I had during my exchange year in

9、America, because I did something extraordinary: made possible the seemingly impossibly. It gave me greater enjoyment than any award received in my academic studies, because thats what I always do well, but in volleyball, not quite a forte of mine, this achievement was certainly something larger than

10、 life!在我上初中的时候，我爱上了打排球。或许我的热情，天分和努力让我在这项运动中脱颖而出。我被选为班级排球队的队长来为接下来的校级排球比赛做 准备。我制定了训练计划，邀请专业的教练员指 导我们训练，经过几个月的特殊训练和两个星期的激烈比赛，我们班最终获得了比赛的冠军。我对此感到非常自豪，因此当我有机会作为交换学生到美国交流学习的 时候，我立即决定要参加当地排球队的试训。不出意外，我在校队的名单上看到了我的名字。然而让我感到意外的是，我只被排在了二线队员的名单中。我在心底祈祷：别让这样的事情发生在我身上。然而我不得不面对残酷的现实，那就是如果我不改变自己我就无法改变现状。因此，在家中，我进

11、行了一次自 我反省，列出所有我存在的问题：首先， 我并不熟悉有关排球的英文术语，而如果我不能很好地理解教练的指导，那么我的表现就势必会受到影响。第二，我在中国常用的一切技巧对我的新队友来说进攻和 防守的力度都不足够。在设定了目标之 后，我知道接下来我需要努力!我从专业的排球网站和杂志中收集了专业的排球术语，学习了各种发球、接球、传球的方式，以及各种进攻、防守和救球的专业表达。在过了术语关之 后，一个更大的问题摆在了我的面前：如何提升我 的排球技巧。教练对我说我经常使用下手击球，这让我的球很容易被对方接起来，因此我应该学着更多地使用其他击球方式，比如跳飘球。我的教练对我十分用心，总是能够指出我在

12、训练中暴露出的问题。我经常在集体训练结束之后留在场地上加练几个小 时，纠正教练指出的问题。我的教练对我帮助很大，他给予我很多的指导、鼓励和认可，对此我十分感激。经过一段时间的刻苦训练，我的能力得到了巨大的提升， 我的队友们更是选举我作为队长。这对我来说意义重大，谁能想到一个二线队员竟然可以成长为全队的队长!这段经历可以说是我在美国交换学习的过程中最有意义的，因为我做了一件不平凡的事情，我完成了一件看似不可能完成的事情。它带给我的快乐远大于 我在学习中取得的任何成就，因为在学习上，我一直成绩优秀，而排球却并非我的专长，也正因如此，排球带给我的成就感远大于其他。一篇好文往往不只单一地表达一个意思，而是多个层次意义的结合。文章既要保证将每个意义都讲述清楚，同时也要注意有所侧重，做到详略得当。范文 便很好地做到了这一点。文章想要表达两个意义：一是奇迹