高中英语(2019)人教版必修一学案：Unit3SportsandfitnessSectionⅤWriting

1、Section V写作园地|读后续写一一健康故事本单元的写作任务是读后续写中的“健康故事”主题。读后续写是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。读后续写考查的是学生在阅读文章的基础上，分析文章的逻辑，运用准确丰富的语言，展现创造力和想象力。一、解题步骤读后续写一般遵循以下四个解题步骤：1 .准确理解材料，理清人物事件。2 .根据段落开头语，确定续写方向。3 .根据画线词语，确定续写细节。4 .调整写作语言，完成读后续写。二、注意事项1 .仔细揣摩原材料作者所表达的意图和主题。注意前后照应，注意隐含的情感因素。2 . 一定要注意与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接。千万不可忽略所提供的段落首句的限制而肆意创作。

2、3 .切忌大篇幅对白；应尽可能巧妙地设置情节，多关注动作描写和心理描述。4 .在完成续写后，务必用下划线标出所用上的关键词语；不要因此而失分。一、开头常用语1. People are beginning to attach much more importance to their health these days than ever before.现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更加重视自己的健康。2. In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit.在当今社

3、会，人们已经意识到健康和良好生活习惯的重要性。3. When it comes to heath, everybody has his own way to keep healthy, doingexercise, keeping a balanced diet, etc.说到健康，每个人都有自己的方式来保持健康，锻炼身体，保持均衡的饮食等等。二、正文常用语1. To begin with, exercise is the most important factor. Doing exercise cannot only build people's body but also rel

4、ax themselves.首先，锻炼是最重要的因素。锻炼不仅可以保持良好的身体健康也可以放松自己。2. Regular exercise strengthens our hearts and lungs. In addition, it prevents us from putting on weight.有规律的运动能强壮我们的心脏和肺。此外还能防止我们增加体重。3. It is also necessary to keep a good diet. There is a saying,“An apple aday keeps the doctor away. ”还必须保持一个良好的饮食习

5、惯。俗话说，“一天一苹果，医生远离我。”4. Avoid foods with lots of sugar and fat. Eat plenty of high protein foods, vegetables and fruits.避免高糖高脂肪的食物。多吃高蛋白食物、蔬菜和水果。5. Weshould get proper amount of sleep, because without enough sleep, we will often feel tired and irritable.我们应该保持适量的睡眠，因为没有足够的睡眠，我们会经常感到疲倦和易怒。三、结尾常用语1. So

6、 if you keep those ways you will be more and more healthy.因此如果你能保持这种方式，你会越来越健康。2. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.我认为如果想要健康，强大的意愿是必须的。3. Wehave to get rid of those bad habits that damageour health, such as drinking and smoking.我们必须戒掉那些损害我们健康的坏习惯，比如喝酒和抽烟。4. Last but not

7、least, always keeping a good mood can make half the work with double results.最后但并非最不重要的是要经常保持一个好心情，这样做起事来才可以事半功倍。5. . If you really love life, follow these suggestions and start a healthy lifestyle.如果你真的热爱生活，那就遵循这些建议，开始健康的生活方式吧。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Michelle was 8 years old when she heard he

8、r mom and dad talking about herlittle brother Jack, now, only an infant （婴儿）.He was very sick and they werecompletely out of money. Only a very costly operation could save Jack now, but there was no one to whom they could turn for the money needed. She heard her daddy sayto her tearful mom, “Only a

9、miracle can save him now.”Hearing the words, Michelle went to her bedroom and took all the coins from her little money box. After counting the coins three times, she slipped out of the back door and made her way to the_drug store 6 blocks away .She waited for a long time before the pharmacist （药齐U师）

10、turned around andasked her,“And what do you want ?"“Well, it's about my brother , " Michelle answered, "he's really really sick. And I want to buy a miracle. ”“I beg your pardon ? ” said the pharmacist.“His name is Jack. And he has something very bad growing inside his body. A

11、nd my daddy says only a miracle can save him now. So how much does a miracle cost?"“Wedon't sell miracles here, little girl. I amsorry. But I can't help you.”The pharmacist said.“Listen, I have the money to pay for it." With these words, Michelle pouredout all the coins from her po

12、cket.At this time, a well dressed man behind Michelle stooped down and asked thelittle girl, “I amselling the miracle you want. Tell mehow much money you have.”“One dollar and_eleven cents." Michelle answered ina low voice, "That'sall the money I have. But I can get some more if I need

13、 to. ”“Well, " smiled the man, “a dollar and eleven cents. The exact price of amiracle for you little brother. Show me the place where your brother lives.”一、/» 注息：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :Holding the mans hand f

14、irmly, Michelle took him homeParagraph 2 :Whenasked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed,精彩范文Paragraph 1 :Holding the man s hand firmly, Michelle took him home The little girl walkedin such a hurry that she even forgot to introduce herself to the man. Her parents were too surprised to b

15、elieve their eyes. That well dressed man turned out to bea surgeon, specializing in neural surgery. Later, the little brotherwas taken away.The operation was completed with payment of one_dollar and eleven cents. And it wasn't long before Jack was home again and doing well. Michelle was more tha

16、n happy. Now she knew the_exact price of a miracle:one dollar and eleven cents, plus the faith of a little child.Paragraph 2 :Whenasked whyhe chose to help the family, the mandetailed, “Whenl was young myself, I was once in the same situation as the little baby. The little girl reminded meof my own

17、sister. It was she who saved my life. Deeply impressed by her innocence, I was determined to help the family out of trouble. It doesn't matter how much money she actually had with her; what matters is her faith, a faith that miracles do exist."总评原文主要讲述了小女孩的弟弟病重，因家贫而无法救治。她听父母说只有奇迹 可以救弟弟，于是天真

18、地去药店买奇迹，恰好遇见一位陌生人，自称可以把奇迹卖给她。续写部分描述了小女孩的善良纯真带来了奇迹，医生来到她家竭力救治，遵循原文的情节发展，展现了人性的光辉。同时，续写部分与两段所给的开头段落语衔接也十分紧密。亮点呈现(1)本文运用了非谓语动词(deeply impressed by her innocence) 、名词性从句(whatmatters is her faith)等语法结构，更是准确运用了specializing in, with payment of等高级短语，使得全文十分出彩。(2)衔接词Later, And, Now等用来承接故事情节的发展，行文流畅、连贯、自然。(3)本

19、篇合理地使用了10个关键词语里的8个，符合要求。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My mother used to ask me what the most important part of the body is. Through the years I would take a guess at what I thought was the correct answer. When I wasyounger, I thought sound was very important to us as humans, so I said,“My ears,Mommy

20、.She said, "No. Many people are deaf. But they are doing well in theirlife.You keep thinking about it and I will ask you again soon.”Several years passed before she asked me again. Since making my first attempt,I had contemplated （深思）the correct answer. So this time I told her, “Mommy,sight is

21、very important to everybody, so it must be our eyes.”She looked at me and told me,“You are learning fast, but the answer is notcorrect because there are many people who are blind. ”Over the years my mother asked me a couple more times and always her answer was, “No, but you are getting smarter every

22、 year, my child.”Then last year, my grandpa died. Everybody was hurt. Everybody was crying. My momlooked at mewhen it was our turn to say our final goodbye to grandpa. She asked me, “Do you know the most important body part yet, my dear ?”I was surprised when she asked me this on this occasion. I always thought this was a game between her and me. She saw the confusion on my face and told me,“Thisquestion is very important. How you ans