阅卷教师眼中的CET写作

1、阅卷教师眼中的阅卷教师眼中的CETCET写作写作全国大学英语四、六级全国大学英语四、六级 (CET-4CET-6) (CET-4CET-6) 作文作文题评分原则及标准题评分原则及标准评分标准评分标准1 1、本题满分为、本题满分为1515分。分。2 2、阅卷标准共分五等：、阅卷标准共分五等：2 2分、分、5 5分、分、8 8分、分、1111分及分及1414分。分。3 3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若为与某一分数（如若为与某一分数（如 8 8分）相似，即定为该分数（即分）相似，即定为该分数（即8 8分）分）若认为稍优于或劣于该分数则可加一分（即若认为

2、稍优于或劣于该分数则可加一分（即 9 9分）或减分）或减一分（即一分（即 7 7分）。但不得加或减半分。分）。但不得加或减半分。 评分原则评分原则评分标准评分标准2 2分分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 5分分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误严重语言错误. .8 8分分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。连贯；语言错误

3、相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。1111分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。错误。1414分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强, , 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。CET-4: 110119 100109 9099 8089 7079 6069 5059 49CET-6: 140149 130139 120129 110119 100119 9099 8089 79扣扣 分分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9字数不足应酌情扣分：字数不足应酌情扣分：注：注： 1

4、、如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。得计入所写字数。2、规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。3、如果扣为零分，要慎重处理。如果扣为零分，要慎重处理。结构结构语言语言字数字数卷面卷面把把简单句、并列句简单句、并列句和和复合句复合句混合在一起使用。混合在一起使用。I have often wondered whether some people，who had no intention of making a purchase，would take advantage of this privilegeOne

5、 day I asked this question to the shop girl， and I learned it was indeed the case改变句子的长度。改变句子的长度。短句子适用于表述短句子适用于表述概念，陈述事实，增强论述的力度概念，陈述事实，增强论述的力度；长；长句子经常用于句子经常用于描写，解释描写，解释和和论述论述一个完整的情况。一个完整的情况。Economy is the art of making the most of lifeLove is as necessary to the human being as food and shelterThere

6、 were still situations in which I couldnt be certain my decision had been the right one，but I had learned to accept this as a constant problem for a surgeon，one that could never be completely resolvedand I could live with it 注意事项注意事项 (1)(1) 适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实。映事实。 句子开头不要总是用句子开头不

7、要总是用we / Iwe / I 比如写结尾时不用比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to 而用而用Attention should be paid to以形容词或形容词组开头以形容词或形容词组开头Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother Pleased，Mary telephoned her mother The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home以副词开头以副词开头The child

8、 stayed there quietly Quietly，the child stayed there 以不定式开头以不定式开头 He got up very early to catch the busTo catch the bus，he got up very early以现在分词或过去分词开头以现在分词或过去分词开头 I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winters day so long agoComing home from school that dark winters

9、day so long ago，I was filled with anticipationIf you give me enough time，I can do it well Given enough time，I can do it well 以介词短语开头以介词短语开头 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered itLike many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it以同位语开头以同位语开头Su

10、e，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybodyOur monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody以从句开头以从句开头Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handedBefore he sailed round the world single-handed，Francis had already sur

11、prised his friends several timesYou will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspectionIf you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product It is, therefore, high time that someapplicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.注意事项注意事项 (2)(2)善于使用插入语，善于使用插入语，如如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说比如说Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 注