中考英语写作训练

1、中考英语作文作文评分参考标准第一档：（1513分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：（129分）基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：（85分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：（40分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。中考英语作文十大常见错误分析一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任

2、何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。1. 审题不清如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。2.拼写错误 拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差

3、，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。3.名词单复数问题：误 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误 Th

4、e apples cheap. I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等 还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身

5、代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整 有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。误 Many students have a hard time passi

6、ng all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.例1. When one h

7、ave knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：误 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the stati

8、on the train had left.10.综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。中考英语写作必须掌握的常用词汇 一、表示递进关系的关键词语Additionally 加之；又 besides 此外；除之外 equally important 同样重要的是furthermore 此外；而 in addition 另外in other words 换句话说last but not least 最后但同样重

9、要的是moreover 而且；此外that is say 即；就是；换句话说二、表示转折关系的关键词语although 虽然；尽管at the same time 同时；但是despite 不管；尽管；不论even if 即使even though 即使however 然而；可是in spite of 不管instead 代替；而不是nevertheless 然而；不过on the contrary 正相反otherwise 另外；不同地regardless of 不管；不顾still 依然；仍然though 虽然；可是while 而yet 然而；但是；仍三、表示选择关系的关键词语either

10、or 或instead of ，而不是neithernor 和都不notbut 不是而是rather than 宁可；胜过whetheror not 是否四、表示比较关系的关键词语compare with / to 与比较equally 相等地；平等地in comparison with 与比较in contrast 相反；大不相同in contrast to 和对比in the same way 同样地instead 代替；改为on the contrary 正相反while 而五、表示因果关系的关键词语accordingly 因此；从而as a result of 作为结果because

11、(of) 因为consequently 从而；因此due to 由于；应归于hence 因此；从此in that 由于；因为；既然 now that 因为；既然on account of 由于owing to 由于；因的缘故so 所以so that 所以thanks to 由于therefore 因此；所以thus 因此六、用于表示总结的关键词语above all 最重要的是accordingly 于是as a consequence 因此as a result 结果as has been noted 如前所述as I have said 如我所述at last 最后briefly 简单扼要地

12、by doing so 如此certainly 当然地；无疑地consequently 因此eventually 最后hence 因此in a word 总之in brief 简言之in conclusion 总；最后in short 简而言之in summary 简要地说in sum 总之；简而言之obviously 显然on the whole 总体来说；整个看来to conclude 总而言之to speak frankly 坦白地说to sum up 总而言之to summarize 总而言之中考英语作文必备经典句型1. 主语+is + the + 最高级+ 名词 +(that)+ I

13、 have ever seen (known/heard/had/read)Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen。姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman

14、 that I have ever seen。刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。2.Nothing is more important + than + to do sth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：Nothing is more important than to keep fit。没有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to potect our environment。没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge。没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。3.There

15、is no denying that + S + V (不可否认的)例句：There is no denying that Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.不可否认的，没有什么比环保更重要的事。There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。4.An advantage of doing sth. is that + 句子(干某事的优点是)例句：An

16、advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。5.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子(的原因是)例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。6.The + 比较级 + S + V, the + 比较级 + S + V (愈愈)例句：The harder you work, th

17、e more progress you make。你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。7.By +Ving, xx can xx (通过，能够)例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。By reading, we can get more knowladge. 通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。8.Those who xxx + V(那些的人)例句：Those who break the

18、law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。9.That is the reason why xxx (那就是的原因)例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。10.be closely related to xxx (与息息相关)例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health。 做运动与健康息息相关。11.Get into the habit of + VingWe should get into the ha

19、bit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。12.Thanks to + N/Ving, xxx(因为，由于) Thank sb. for (doing) sth. 因为感谢某人例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thank you for helping me a lot. 谢谢你帮了我那么多。Thanks to Miss Qin's help, I passed the examination。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通

20、过了考试。13.have a great influence on xx (对有很大的影响)例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health。抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。14.In my opinion，就我的看法例句：In my opinion, playing copmuter games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。15.As we all known 众所周知例句：As we all known that Hangzh

21、ou is a beautiful city. 众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。中考英语作文满分必备“万能”句1. 不用说 It goes without saying that = （It is） needless to say （that） = It is obvious that 例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。 It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2. 在各种之中， Among various kinds of ， /= Of all the ， 例在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。 Among various kinds

22、of sports, I like jogging in particular.3. 就我的看法；我认为In my opinion, = To my mind, = As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that 例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。4. 随着人口的增加 With the increase/growth of the populati

23、on, 随着科技的进步 With the advance of science and technology, 例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。5. 是必要的 It is necessary （for sb.） to do / that 是重要的It is important/essential（for sb.） to do / that 是适当的 It is proper （for sb.）

24、 to do / that 是紧急的 It is urgent （for sb.） to do / that 例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。It is proper that we （should） keep the public places clean.6. 花费 spend on sth. / doing sth. 例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren

25、9;t interested in.7. how 引导的感叹句例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are.8. 状语从句A）如果你不，你就会 If you don't ， you'll 例If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。B） 如此 ，以至于 so that 例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.当时，

26、我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。9. 宾语从句我认为， / 我认为不 I think / I don't think that 我想知道是否 I wonder whether 例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。10. Since + S + 过去式， S + 现在完成式。例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。2014中考英语满分作文必备高分句型100例1.

27、According to a recent survey，four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。3. No invention has received more praise and abuse

28、than Internet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。6. When it

29、 comes to education，the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tour

30、ists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However，this

31、opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents，who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题。10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more t

32、ime waiting for a bus，which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem：the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该

33、采取有力措施来解决它。12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact，it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes： All work and

34、 no play makes Jack a dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。14. Any government，which is blind to this point，may pay a heavy price.任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。15.Nowadays，many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or colleg

35、e they will begin. Unfortunately，for most young people，it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。16. In view of the seriousness of this problem，effective measures should be taken before things get worse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必

36、须采取有效的措施。17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills，which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。18. It is indisputable that there are m

37、illions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。19. Although this view is wildly held，this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。20. No one

38、 can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。22. In the last decades，advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live lo

39、nger than in the past.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。23. In fact，we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。25. People believe that computer skills will enha

40、nce their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。27. Now，it is generally accepted that no college

41、 or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。28. This is a matter of life and deatha matter no country can afford to ignore.这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。29. For my part，I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons：我同意后者，有如下理由：30. Before g

42、iving my opinion，I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。32. Although many people claim that，along with the rapidly economic development，the number of people who use bicycle a

43、re decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡，然而，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。33. Environmental e

44、xperts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。34. In view of such serious situation，environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are mo

45、re important than any time before.考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle，it is not without its problem.尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它

46、的问题。37. Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.在速度和舒适度方面，自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。38. From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play

47、 essential roles in modern society.通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论，其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。40. This

48、issue has caused wide public concern.这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。41. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.必须指出学习只能靠自己。42. A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously，they seem to fail to t

49、ake into account the basic fact that a person's education is a most important aspect of his life.许多人存在这样的误解，认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然，他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。43. As for me，I'm in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation，for the following reasons：就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以

50、下原因：44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.人们普遍认为高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的。45. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.即使最优秀的毕业生，要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。46. It is commonly th

51、ought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology，and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new

52、skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。49. For th

53、e majority of people，reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style，it is important to find time

54、to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes：it is never too late to learn.对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老。51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.对于大学或高中生打工这一现象，校园里进行着广泛的争论

55、。52. By taking a major-related part-job，students can not only improve their academic studies，but gain much experience，experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。53. Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last dec

56、ades，it must be admitted that，shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.近几十年，尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变，但必须承认，由于学费和书费日益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。54. Consequently，the extra money obtained from

57、part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.因此，业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。55. From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job，which will benefit students and their family，even the society as a whole.通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。56. These days，people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work i