任务型写作指导(广东)（课堂PPT）

1、1 summary?WritingHow to write a 2IV. 写作写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节第一节: 基础写作基础写作 第二节第二节:读写任务读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150词左右的英语短文.任务说明 请认真阅读下面的短文,然后完成以下的任务:1 )概括短文的内容要点概括短文的内容要点,该部分的词数大约该部分的词数大约 30-50字左右字左右;)Leading in3Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.摘要Warming u

2、p4Preparation for writing a summaryFind key wordsFind key sentencesFind the main ideaWarming up5任务型写作任务型写作-归纳大意的写作归纳大意的写作仔细阅读所给的文段仔细阅读所给的文段.找出每一个段落的主题句找出每一个段落的主题句(topic sentence), 并用下划并用下划线划出。注意首句和首段原则。线划出。注意首句和首段原则。根据题目的详细要求，审清要写的短文的题材和体根据题目的详细要求，审清要写的短文的题材和体裁如裁如“发言发言/演讲稿演讲稿”、书信、日记、通知、记叙文、书信、日记、通知、

3、记叙文、说明文或议论文（说明文或议论文（比较少是议论文比较少是议论文）等等。从整体）等等。从整体上把握好文章的格式和结构。上把握好文章的格式和结构。根据要求和主题以及自己要表达的观点，确立好根据要求和主题以及自己要表达的观点，确立好标标题题1. 根据找出的每一个段落的主题句，用同义词、短语根据找出的每一个段落的主题句，用同义词、短语或句子，通过恰当的关联词或过渡词串写成个句子。或句子，通过恰当的关联词或过渡词串写成个句子。（30词）词）6Passage I How to choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what caree

4、r to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then al

5、l their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.7 How to

6、 choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5

7、. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would k

8、now that money going to education was being well spent.8Task Summary At fifteen,students should know what career they will have in the future based on their school performance. They need instructions. Society pays when young people choose the wrong career. (30 words)9Task : Write a summary of passag

9、e Lets have a try!Read the passage and write a summary10Task Two Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space e

10、xploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to sol

11、ve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 11Task Two 1 Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 2 30% of us think space exploratio

12、n is not worthwhile. 3 They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. 4 And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. 5 On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. 6

13、We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. 7 Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.8 Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 12Task TwoPart:

14、Part:Part: Three parts:How many parts can we group the passage into?Sentence OneSentences Two-FourSentences Five-Eight13section: Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.section: 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is

15、 too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. WhatA survey on whether(Result ) DisagreementTask TwoWhat does the writer want to tell us in each part?14Task Twosection: On the other hand, 70

16、% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the

17、 population problem by moving to other planets one day. (Result) Agreement15Task TwoOutline because and . While because and .A survey on whether space is worth exploring What: Disagreement: Agreement :not worthwhile ; too far awayour daily life; a waste of money.worth; benefit a lot; solve problem o

18、f communication , weather forecast, energy shortages, even the population.16Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the exploring has little to do with our daily life and it will be a waste of money. While 70% think i

19、t worthwhile because it brings us benefit and helps to solve the problem of communication, weather report , energy shortage, and even population problem. (64words)Summary17Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the e

20、xploring which wastes money has little to do with our daily life . While 70% think it worthwhile because it brings us benefit . (42words)Summary18What should you pay attention to when writing a summary? Focus on main ideas and omit(省去省去) examples, specific details, and minor supports.2. Mainly use t

21、he words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words.(主要引主要引用原文的词句用原文的词句,不能添加自己的见解不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的，但是要用自己的语言概括）语言概括）3. Write it in the third person .（第三人称）（第三人称）suggestions19 Change unnecessary clauses into phrases2. Change useless phrases

22、into single words 3.Change the sentence structure(结构结构)4.Change the voice(语态语态) of the sentence5.Use the synonyms(同义词同义词)About the language20读写任务型写作模板读写任务型写作模板 标题标题第一段第一段: :第二段第二段: :第三段第三段: : 概括所给短文内容要点概括所给短文内容要点约约30字字过渡词引出主题句过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点自己的观点-理由理由 约约105字字总结句总结句 约约15字字21 标题标题 标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写

23、短文的标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题；（如内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题；（如果没有要求，可以不写）果没有要求，可以不写） Is time more valuable than money？ On Smoking How to make friends？ Happiness Is watching TV a good thing? My view of money / time / pollution My attitude toward building a car factory 22第一段：概括所给短文内容要点第一段

24、：概括所给短文内容要点注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求写作具体方法和要求:第一段概括要做到第一段概括要做到开门见山开门见山: 例如例如: According to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that2. 第一段要做到第一段要做到有层次感有层次感: 必要时概括段中运用必要时概括段中运用 firstly,secondly,lastly, 或或

25、but, so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。等来列出原文作者观点或内容。3. 第一段概括要第一段概括要抓住要点抓住要点,语言精练语言精练: 23 The writer tells us that the parents should also do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere. Next, parents should help their children become more independent and responsible. Parents

26、Help Is ImportantParents Help Is Important24 第二段第二段:过渡词引出主题句过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点自己的观点-理由理由 开头用语：开头用语： I do agree with the author In some way, I agree with , but Every coin has two sides. It is right in that, but This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter

27、 of fact, In my opinion, From my personal point of view As far as Im concerned 25 第三段第三段最后一段最后一段 : 总结句开头用语：总结句开头用语： In conclusion, In short, In general, In a word, In belief, On the whole, All in all, 26 Examples: 1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their par

28、ents, but also the responsibility of the whole society. 2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden. 3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.27读写任务型读写任务型写作方法写作方法总结28写作具体方法和要求写作具体方法和要求:第一段概括要做到开门见山第一段概括要做到开门见山: 例如例如: According to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that29 2. 做到整体语篇和概括段层次感要强,如: 1) 整体语篇用连接词等引出每一段整体语篇用连接词等引出每一段 第一段第一段: According to 约约30词词