中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析经典1

1、+例题-全面解析经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如彳是Tony名城中学九（ 1）班的学生。请以My junior high school life 为题,写一篇80 词左右的短文。提示：1 . 个人基本情况介绍2 .校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3 .对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1 . 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。2 .文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name

2、is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves

3、. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构

4、和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is ,T ' m glad to , Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on

5、 with, learn from, make progress 等这 些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2 “扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求： 1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100词左右。【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestionsto the young.As old saying goes, "all w

6、ork and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you

7、can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to， graduatefrom , to begin with , both and get along well with others , be active in, as important as ,as well 等。而 To begin with,/ M

8、oreover,/ Last but not least, 等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3 书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“ LessPress

9、ure Makes Life Better 为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求 ”写一份发言稿，内容包括：1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 词数80 左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most studentsreinuonudrecrlatosos ma uch

10、pressure. 【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wan

11、ted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes b

12、etter life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以 Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要 包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的 压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应 由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和 体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意 根据表达的需要使用正确的时

13、态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构 为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和 复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现 象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目 中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短 文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式 准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁

14、。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾 语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如 Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。4.人们对

15、于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍 人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。贽成的理由反对的理由你的看法1 .广交朋友2 .可自由表达思想3 .有利于外语学习1 .浪费时间2 .影响学习3 .可能上当受骗(be cheated)1.2.注意：1.所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。2.词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some peoplethink【答案】 Nowadays many teenager

16、s show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Bu

17、t others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we c

18、an readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的 观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。 注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注 意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡 性语言的使用。做

19、到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼 写和语法错误。5.近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊英语角”投稿，内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害2. 雾霾产生的原因（2 个） 3. 应对雾霾的措施（3 个）提示：雾霾smog poisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 词数 110 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which

20、 has aroused great concern among people.【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which hasaroused great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on people s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequentl

21、y, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of peopleng csarbsu, rning coal, driviindustry production and so on.What should we do to st

22、op the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is

23、 necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely. 【解析】 【详解】 这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将 这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不 能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可 知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化， 这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英

24、语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使 用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。6.美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写 一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1 .语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2 .必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3 .行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4 .词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Sinc

25、e the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a mor

26、e beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, thereare a lot of things we cando. We sho

27、uld be politeto others and try to behave well. It' s kind of you to helppeople in need. Meanwhile,Wecanhelpclean up our city in order to make it clearer andtidier. Also, we can plantmore trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn' t do. We shouldn't make

28、alot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can' t spit anywhere and we shouldn' t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same time, we shouldn ' t break traffic rules.Let ' s take action now. Our aonis can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创 ”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城

29、市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创 ”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之

30、间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创 ”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、

31、It s kind of you to help people in need、 . Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn' t breOk traffic rules.7 写作81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活

32、动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。提示：1) What' s the benefit (好处)of outdoor activities? (1-2 opinions)2 ) Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? ( 1-2 examples)3 ) What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? ( At least 1 suggestion)要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2)必须包括提示中的所有信息

33、，并按要求适当发挥；3)词数：100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。s great to get clIt s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it nature.【答案】It s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it s a good way toget close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the

34、natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, an

35、d often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you re outside, it s better to be with yourparents or friends.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“ outdoor activi

36、ties 为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊 ”征文稿。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中 in the natural world, not only - butalso, get out, such as, also 等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰 富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（ for sb.） to do sth. ； There

37、be 句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。8 假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示问题： When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare f

38、or the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition

39、. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan

40、 to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点， 动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提 示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可

41、。2 .例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法 的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。3 .高分亮点：短语：school gate; invite sb. to do; a lot of; plan to do。句型： not only - but also You'd better ； T'm looki ng forward to 。一9.目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分 析并提出建议。要点：/、重视课外阅读的原因1 .作业太多2 .没有读书习惯3 .时间花在电脑或网络上课外阅读的好

42、处1 .更多地了解世界2 .学会如何思考3 .生活更加丰富多彩对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）注意：1.词数：80个左右(开头已给出的内容不记入总词数)；2 .内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；3 .条理清楚、语句连贯；4 .文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.AAAAAA【答案】 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here

43、 are several reasons.First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others havenformed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world.Besides

44、, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of ourhomework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it' s a good idea to form readingclubs and learn from each other.【解析】略10 .根据要求完成大作文，词数： 80-100词.丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩.请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及 要求，用英文完成写作.内容包括：1. Which course ( s) do you like ?2. Why do you like i