上海中考英语作文专题指导讲课教案

1、上海中考英语作文专题指导精品文档上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式一一“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you或第三人称she, he,it或they为主;三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who, whe

2、n, where, what, how, why 等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，Ithink / I hope / I believe that等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如 on one hand, on the other hand; whaS more; however

3、等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题，做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语"，更不能乱”发明。般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句 式已很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分，词数不能太少也不能太多，笔者觉 得，以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失 分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1.时态错误错误类型中文疆误表达时态错误他在这儿已经7 年九她常给我们讲故 事。stories.He has been since 7 years.Sh

4、e often tell正确表达He has been liere fur 7 years*She often 【elk us stories*2.时间状语错误错误 类型中文错误表达正嵇表达误用去年春天 今晚 明天下午4点last yeur spring today's night; this night toinorjo afienioon at 1 o'clocklast spring tonighl; this evening;il 4 o clock turiK>m>w aflernoon多余一天下午 在下个月 明天上午one day afternoonin

5、 next monthin / on tomorrow inurningone afternoonnext month tomorrow morning3.名词单复数错误中文错误表达正确表达些信息somesonic inlonnalion真有趣!Whai a greai fun!What great fun!三份工作three worksthree pieces of work / Lhree jobs4.动词误用误型中文错误表达正确表达分词 错误看见某人正在做 某事有某人在做某事对感兴趣see sb, did sth.there be sb- doing sth.bo interesting

6、 insee sb. doing sth.there he sh. doing sth.be interested in不定 式错仗使某人做某事 请某人来希望某人做make sb. io do sth. ask sb. uomehope sb, to do make sb. do sth.ask m Lu cunie hope sb. will / can do want / wish sb. to do .用词 不当参加活动join activiiicstake part in / join in activities缺少 动词我很高兴口 他很累。very happy. He very li

7、red.1 am verj h;ippy. He is very tired.5.语态错误错误中文错误表达正确表达误用 主动它是上海制造的1 她叫海伦3 某物能用Il made in Shanghai.She called Helen.Nlh. can useIl is made in Shanghcii, She is (called) Helen, slh. can be used误用这书好卖。 难说The book is sold well.It is luird lo be saitl.Great changes have Jbten lakeJi pljce inShanghai.T

8、he book sells welL ll is hard to say.Great charmcs have krtakenplaceinShanghai.被动上海史生了很大 变化：构成 错误正在建造一座桥.上周我们看到了 刘翔A bridge is been hui Id inn.Liu Xiang is seen by us Iasi week.A bridge is being hui 11Liu Xiang was seen by us last week.6.词性误用错误 类型中丈错误表达正确表达她的英语很好：Her English is very well.She is gH&g

9、t;d al Englisli. /喃、/ adv.努力学习沿着楚直地走独自地做某事work hardlygo straighdy alongdo sth. lonely adj.)Iler English is very work hard go slraighi along do sLh. alojtegood.adv. / v我乘车去上学1 by bus Io school,I go ro school by on a bus.bus /prep./ adv.地M公里彳远 is kilometres far Irorn .is kilometresIron】awayprep./ y.过马

10、路acn>s% ihe si reelgo across i cross the streetmifn./ adv.第一.第二 第三The first The second The third First (Firstly)Second (Secondly)Tliird (Thirdly)儿/ odj.在北部in the norihcmin the northm / V.他感谢了我白He I hanked【"/ fnr me.He thanked / thankful to me.was7.介词误用类型中文错误表达正确表达误用在村庄附近 对*,有良效 在老师的帮助下 熟悉某人/

11、某事 大声地 在阳光F读书nearby the village have a good effed io under ihe teacher help familiar with sb./ to sth, with a loud voice read under the sunnear the illagc have a gixid efftei on with the teacher's help familiar to sb. / with sth. in a loud voice jead in ihe sun多余到那儿在某人回家的路上为人无服务anived at Ihere,

12、gar id thereon one's way to home serve lor ihe peoplearrived / reached / gor thereon one's wav homeserve ihe people8.某些搭配和惯用法误用中文错误表达正确表达价格便宜心The price is cheap.Ilieprice is low.请你做Pleast you do Please do .*他告诉我Hetold me whetherHe told me (that她15岁口She i$ fifteen ycars age. 1 She is fifteen-

13、 vear-okl.JShe ia Fifteen. / She is a girl nt IS, / She is fifteen years old. / She is a 15- year-oid girl.我花了 10元买书一1 cost / spcni 10 yuan lo bux ihc book.Ilie bunk cost me 10 yuutr / 1 spent 10 yuan (im buying / on the book.F中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A.中考英语热门写作话题1.关于学习Write a passage of at least 60 words

14、about the topiCHow to learn English well (以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago) How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day .) What is difficult to learn

15、? (listening, grammar .)2 .关于兴趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy interest”.（以 “我的兴趣” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What is your interest? Why do you like it so much?3 .关于写事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （Unforgetta

16、ble memories（以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?4 .关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi CMy plan for summer holiday”.（以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the fo

17、llowing points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday? Give at least two points.5 .关于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy good friend ”.（以 “我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） Who is your good

18、friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?6.关于写人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy English teacher".（以 “我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） Who is your English teacher? Do you like

19、 him or her? Why do you like him or her?7.关于英语Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topid“changed my ways of learningEnglish”.（以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） How did you learn English in the past? Why do you change your ways of lear

20、ning English? How do you learn English now?8.关于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （An unforgettable trip”.（以 “次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?9

21、.关于动物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy favourite animal ”.（以 “我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What's your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much?收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除10.关于网上购物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the

22、topi （Online shopping is changing theway of our life（以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What's your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online

23、 shopping.11.关于学科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （My favourite subject”.（以 “我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下内容供参考） What's your favourite subject? Why do you like it best?12 .关于变化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （Ch

24、anges in myself'.（以 “我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题可供参考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? （Give at least 2 examples） What do you think of the changes?13 .关于节日Write a passag

25、e of at least 60 words about the topi （The Lantern Festival （以 “元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容供参考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?B.提示性作文每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现。请根据下图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章。Mv

26、 dream has come trueloinL出身贫寒，付不起学费，但一直自学， 考上了大学口2上大学时坚持打零工（part Time job）,并照顾遭遇车祸的父母已；工坚持梦想（follow one's dream"拥有 了自己的农场.You你的音想如何实现 你的梦想勤奋学习【要求】1 .所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2 .介绍Tom,谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径；3 .文章不少于90词；4 .语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整2015年中考英语总复习专项训练题（六）参考范文 A. 1. How to learn English we

27、ll English is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways: Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class.Secondly, I like speaking English wit

28、h my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. It's important to improve my spoken English.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.2.My interest

29、I have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a musi

30、c lover. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the afternoon. I often run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble a

31、nd worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body.In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies. 3.Unforgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in

32、my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I'v

33、e made great progress. But 'm a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said,“Itnot our abilities that show what we ruly are, it is our choice.-m 01Thehwdaywill also

34、 provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.4.My plan for summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all

35、 the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balance between work and play. In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do different sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do somereading. It can help get us prepared

36、 for the new term. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.5.My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. Shefrom America.She s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading b

37、ooks and listening to music. What's more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. Shes lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English

38、. I "m lucky to have such a good friend.6.My English teacherOur English Teacher Ms Huang, came to our school two years ago. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class, but she is

39、rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, “ Practice makes perfect. " She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us put

40、on short English plays. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.7.I changed my ways of learning EnglishAs an international language, English plays a g

41、reat character in our life. English has become more and more important to us. Therefore, I changed my way of learning English so that I can improve my English ability.In the past, I didn "t listen to English news often. So I changed it. I began to listen to English songs. And I listened to the

42、words of the song carefully in order to learn more words. Everytime when I met the words which I didn't know, I would looked it up in the dictionary. And I always tried to remember it after looking it up. After a month, I found that I knew more words than my classmates.I used to write as few wor

43、ds as I could. No doubt, I changed it.With the help of my friends and my teacher, I tried to write more articles. Finally, I succeeded. I took up writing as a hobby and I will never forget it.I'm glad that I changed my way of learning English. And everything I changed will make me more and more

44、interested in English.8.An unforgettable tripI went to Chongqing in July 22. It is a city which was built near mountains. So people call it Mountain City. In Chongqing, I went to the Red Stone Centre, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There wer

45、e a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisoners were good men. They didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were. So they were put into the prison. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink. They had only tw

46、enty minutes to stay outside per day but they still said nothing. I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit. 9.My favourite animalMy favourite animal is dog. I like it because it can help people in many different ways. Many, many years ago, dogs were already peop le pet

47、s. They lived in caves with people. Dogs were very good helpers. They guarded the caves and kept people safe from danger.Nowadays, dogs are also people pets. But some people are unkind to their dogs. They do not look after them and leave them in the street. We should be kind to dogs. They are our fr

48、iends. They can help us do many things. They help the police catch thieves and find missing people. They also help blind people cross the road safely. 10.Online shopping is changing the way of our lifeAs we all know, online shopping has become more and more popular among people especially the young

49、people. We can buy nearly everything on the Internet. In my view, online shopping has already changed the way of our life. People tend to surf the Internet to buy what they need. I think the advantage of online shopping is its convenience. People only sit in the soft and click the mouse at home to b

50、uy what they want. It can save people a lot of time and money. The disadvantage is that online shopping is not always safe. Sometimes your private information will be let out. So if you love online shopping, please be careful with your personal information and the website so that you can benefit fro

51、m online shopping.11.My favourite subjectEnglish is my favourite subject because English is used widely in the world, especially in Shanghai, a city with so many foreigners. Whats more, I like it because my English teacher is kind and friendly to me.In order to learn English well, I read English alo

52、ud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class, I often watch English programmes and keep an English diary every day.In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better. 12.Changes in myselfEveryone has changed a little or a lot since the day he came to the m

53、iddle school. So have I. I am no longer a little girl because I am a middle school student now. I think that I have changed a lot. For example, I become more confident and friendly than ever before. I have made a lot of friends and we often have a good time. We help each other and share things together. And I also get rid of some of my bad habits. For example, I used to spend much time on c