高考英语对比性写作训练(看图作文)

1、Writing 宝剑锋从磨砺出，宝剑锋从磨砺出，作文美自苦练来。作文美自苦练来。梅花香自苦寒来梅花香自苦寒来Practice makes perfect How to develop our composition ?Now, lets go!湛江二中海东中学湛江二中海东中学 英语科组英语科组 HYLHYL高考英语高考英语对比类作文对比类作文训练训练何谓何谓对比类作文对比类作文 ? 请看下列作文例子：请看下列作文例子：例例 1 ：中学生英语报社正开展一场题为：中学生英语报社正开展一场题为”Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefe

2、r?”请你依据下面要点写一篇短文投稿。请你依据下面要点写一篇短文投稿。老年教师老年教师: 教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富青年教师青年教师: 精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新你的观点你的观点?例例 2 ：据网上报道，国庆期间重庆市百余名初三学生拒绝进校门，抗议：据网上报道，国庆期间重庆市百余名初三学生拒绝进校门，抗议假期补课，请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。假期补课，请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。 假期补课调查表假期补课调查表 教师观点教师观点： 不同意假期补课不同意假期补课 理由：理由： 师生疲惫，应该给学生更多的时间和空间师生疲惫，应该给学生更多的时间和空

3、间 学生观点学生观点： 60%不同意；不同意； 40%同意同意 理由：理由： 应该放松，调节应该放松，调节 能多学点东西能多学点东西 家长观点家长观点： 同意但收费过高同意但收费过高 理由：理由： 有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点 你的观点你的观点?Step IIntroduction Read the following article and find out what strategy (way) is used to develop the article. 高考英语高考英语对比类作文对比类作文训练训练Eating and Reading A

4、s a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Eating is to meet the primary need of my body while reading is to satisfy the intellectual need of my mind. To keep ourselves alive, we need all kinds of nutrition gained by eating. Similarly, to enrich our minds, we need information and knowledge, which can be

5、 obtained through reading. 1. What strategy (way) is used in it? Contrast （比较，比较， 对照对照 ）It explains how persons/things are different. Comparison （相拟，相拟， 比拟比拟 ）It explains how persons/things are similar. Contrast: whilehowever, but, be different from, unlike, on the contrary, just the opposite Compar

6、ison: similarlyjust like, alike, likewise, equally, in the same way, both, also What connecting words or phrases can we use to develop contrast and comparison? 思考：思考： 我们可以用什么连接词来进行我们可以用什么连接词来进行比较比较和和相拟相拟？I wrote letters to my friends.I send emails to my friends. Ex: Combine these 2 sentences into on

7、e .（注意时态的不同）（注意时态的不同）I used to write letters to my friends, but now I send them e-mails.Unlike before when I wrote letters, I send e-mails to my friends now.3. Two ways to develop comparison and contrast (对比写作一般有两种方式对比写作一般有两种方式)1）Topic by topic structure 集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）诸种特征）2

8、）Point by point structure 逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）的异同）范例：范例： 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。的影响。 注意：注意：1词数：词数：100左右左右 2生词：通讯：生词：通讯：communicate(with sb) communication (n)互联网：互联网：the Internet (n). Great changes have taken place in the

9、way of communication in peoples life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, p

10、eople have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several mi

11、nutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays. Please pay attention to its structure. Structure Opening: Background / General idea Body: Similarity and Difference Closing: Making comments and opinions Great changes have taken place in the way of

12、communication in peoples life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people h

13、ave easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes,

14、even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.OpeningBodyClosingStep IIWriting 请你根据下列图片的内容，以请你根据下列图片的内容，以 “Education in China” 为主题，谈谈自己为主题，谈谈自己的感想。的感想。 注意：注意：1. 只能用五句话表达。首句话已经只能用五句话表达。首句话已经给出，不包括在内。给出，不包括在内。 2. 生词：生词： 一捆：一捆：a bundle of 稻草：稻草：rice straw

15、The two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. _我要读书！我要读书！ 我不要读书！我不要读书！ “ Education in China ”A school boy He doesnt want to go to school any more.In modern cityHe is eager to go to school.In poor country-sideA peasant boyWhat happensWhereWho1. Observing (观察图画，抓要点观察图

16、画，抓要点)2. Comparing and contrasting Observe the two pictures again and find out the similarities and differences between the pictures. Then describe the pictures by the development of comparison and contrast .PictureSimilarities Differences12At the same age Carrying heavy things Unhappy Tired In poor

17、 countryside Carry a bundle of rice straw have no chance but is eager to attend school In modern city Carry a heavy schoolbag full of books Be tired of going to schoolMore important3. Making a composition Combine the description and your own opinion together. Pay attention to the structure. Structur

18、e Opening: Background / General idea Body: Similarity and Difference Closing: Making comments and opinions The two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. In the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw, is out of breath under the great pres

19、sure. His hope is to have a school to attend. In the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. What he wishes is that he didnt have to go to school any more. In my opinion, the whole society should make efforts to make every child to be educated happ

20、ily and benefit from our education, such as building more “Hope Schools” and reducing the pressure on the students. 4. A possible versionStep III. Summing upComparison and contrastWriting process （写作步骤）（写作步骤） Observing （观察图画）（观察图画） Similarity and difference （找出相似点和不同点）（找出相似点和不同点） Making a compositio

21、n1. Checking and improvingOpening: Background / General ideaBody: Similarity and Difference Closing: Making comment and opinion 中学生英语报社正开展一场题为中学生英语报社正开展一场题为”Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。短文，向该报社投稿。 老年教师老年教师:教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富教学耐心讲解细致经验丰

22、富 青年教师青年教师:精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新 你的观点你的观点? 注意：注意： 1.词数词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；数； 2.短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯。结构合理，紧凑连贯。 Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more te

23、aching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they c

24、an make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers. 据网上报道，据网上报

25、道，2004年国庆期间重庆市百余名初年国庆期间重庆市百余名初三学生拒绝进校门，抗议假期补课，请你根据下三学生拒绝进校门，抗议假期补课，请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。列提示写一篇英语短文。要求：要求：1字数：字数：120词左右；词左右； 2必须谈出自己的观点。必须谈出自己的观点。假期补课调查表假期补课调查表 教师教师 观点观点 不同意假期补课不同意假期补课 理由理由 师生疲惫，应该给学生更多的时间和空间师生疲惫，应该给学生更多的时间和空间 学生学生 观点观点 60%不同意不同意 40%同意同意 理由理由 应该放松，调节应该放松，调节 能多学点东西能多学点东西 家长家长 观点观点 同意但收费过高

26、同意但收费过高 理由理由 有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点点 Teachers speak up against giving extra lessons during vacation. The reason,they argue,is based on the definition that vacation is designed for relaxation and rest ,both for teachers and students ,the latter in particular ,should be given enough time and freedom to develop their own interests and enjoy some outdoor activities, which in return ,will bene