2020-2021年中考英语书面表达解题技巧及练习测试题经典1

1、2020-2021年中考英语书面表达解题技巧及练习测试题经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.书面表达我的英语学习初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据卜面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一）痘文，多听听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松 .多说运用英语，增强能力与信心.多读书开阔视野，了解英语文化.语法规则更好地理解与运用.写作写写日常生活.其他要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范;2.必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数 80100。【答案】My English StudyHow ti

2、me flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicatin

3、g with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write

4、about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 look back, listen to the radio, a good way to learn English , relax ourselves, communicate with , help sb. do , do more reading , in addition , in a word 等。而感叹句

5、How time flies!, 倒装句 only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 和复杂从句结构 Use spoken Englishwhen communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达 更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力

6、。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.假定彳是David,来自美国，你的 QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来 信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语 回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David,I ' m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often

7、 do volunteer work in your free time. I interested in it very much. I' m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know itittleCould you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems

8、 with volunteering? If my parents don ' t allow me to doasohwhld I do?I ' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes,Li Ming注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数；2 .回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answ

9、er your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot

10、from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Someti

11、mes I can balance my study and work. If your parents don t allow you to volunteer, you should have a goodtalk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming 回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本

12、文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I'm glad;-we can； It ' sOK to , If your parents don ' t allow you tyou should-. ,-1 hope 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would li

13、ke to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb todo sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3 随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯

14、，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As forme, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communicationsoftware, such

15、as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should

16、pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not towaste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：thereare ；I prefer to , Mobile phones bring , -we can , we should ,So let ' 等旬式的应

17、用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。止匕处 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one' s opinion,try one ' s bisg些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4.书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李

18、华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能（或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼（或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然（或自拟一点）注意：1 .表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2 .词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3 .表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That s all. Than

19、k you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm intereste

20、d in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we

21、 should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet

22、. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I'd like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least， be interested in ， during theholiday， plan to do ， join in ，

23、 be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ， be close to nature， search the Internet 等。而 First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind

24、to someone in need. 等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使 短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。My Life At5 马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场School ”主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处；3.获得交

25、换生机会；2得到老师的帮助；4参加志愿者活动。/、开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学；2不擅长语文写作。未来展望1 .升上理想的学校；2 .能结识更多朋友；3 .请你补充（至少两点）My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It ' s unbelievable ghan g to graduatefrom my beloved school.

26、There are many things to remember.In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the

27、experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I hope I can go to a dream s

28、chool and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示 了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般 现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内 容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心

29、的事情；最后展望自 己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们 变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三

30、段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The mostunforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming

31、an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college. 等。6 书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。每年春节，每个孩子都

32、能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（ lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高， 大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（ WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收 压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少3 点）；3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents

33、and relatives. Now Ieven get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of

34、the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us ma

35、nage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【详解】每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（ luckymoney）。随着生活水平的提高， 大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（ WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收 压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按

36、照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【点睛】文章使用了很好的 短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we cando the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。7.美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活

37、动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写要求：1 .语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2 .必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3 .行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4 .词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behavior

38、s can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our c

39、ity, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. A

40、lso, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn t do. We shouldn t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can t spit anywhere and we shouldnbish every whtethrero. w rubAt the same time, we shouldn t break traffic rules.Let s take action now. O

41、ur actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创 ”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创 ”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的

42、表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创 ”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子

43、结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 It s kind of you to help people in need、 . Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At th

44、e same time, we shouldntraffic rUlbBsOk 等。8 假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示问题： When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for t

45、he visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We

46、 will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to

47、stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。2. 例文

48、点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法 的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。3. 高分亮点：短语：school gate； invite sb. to do ； a lot of； plan to do。句型： not only but also You'd better ；T'm looking forward to。9 随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购 ”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点(advantage)1 .不需要出门

49、；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2 .价格通常比较便宜3 .可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点(disadvantage)1 .只看到图片， 看不到商品本身2 .容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购 shopping online;商品goods;导致 cause 注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】

50、 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tir

51、ed and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it ' s very easy for you to buy goods that aren ' t like t

52、he pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That' s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时 态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如 convenient , disadvantage, ingood quality , figure out , have the chance to do , be attacked by , of course , take care of 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求