GuidedWriting考前指导

1、Guided Writing 专训专训2014届届高考高考Guided Writing基本解题步骤：基本解题步骤： Step 1: 审题审题：确定体裁，主题：确定体裁，主题 （不同体裁有不（不同体裁有不同写作模板）同写作模板） Step 2: 构思构思：列出各段落提纲：列出各段落提纲 Para 1: 开头（开头（Beginning）-提出主题提出主题 Para 2: 正文正文 (Body) (根据题目要求确定内容根据题目要求确定内容) Para 3: 结论（结论（Conclusion）-高度概括，升华高度概括，升华主题或呼吁主题或呼吁 Step 3: 成文成文：注意各段落之间，各句之间的衔：注

2、意各段落之间，各句之间的衔接接 (注重连接词的使用注重连接词的使用) Step 4: 润色润色：尝试高分句型及成语和谚语：尝试高分句型及成语和谚语 (注重注重积累积累)演讲稿演讲稿某校高三学生秦奋为了提高他最为薄弱的英语学科某校高三学生秦奋为了提高他最为薄弱的英语学科每晚挑灯夜战，终因体力不支昏倒在课堂上。假如每晚挑灯夜战，终因体力不支昏倒在课堂上。假如你是秦奋的同学你是秦奋的同学，请以此为戒，写一篇，请以此为戒，写一篇致高一高二致高一高二学弟学妹们的演讲稿学弟学妹们的演讲稿，包含以下内容：，包含以下内容： 简述高三学生课业负担日益繁重的现状；简述高三学生课业负担日益繁重的现状； 简要分析造成

3、此情形的原因；简要分析造成此情形的原因； 提出若干缓解课业负担的建议。提出若干缓解课业负担的建议。 审题：审题： 主题：高三学生负担主题：高三学生负担 (study burden of senior 3 students) 体裁：演讲稿体裁：演讲稿+描述描述+议论议论 构思：构思： Para 1: 演讲稿格式演讲稿格式 Hello, everyone! (演讲对象演讲对象) Para 2: 提出主题，简述高三学生学业负担的现状提出主题，简述高三学生学业负担的现状 Senior 3 student be admitted to university burn oil into midnight

4、be burdened with homework be worn out/exhausted faint in class Para 3: 简要分析原因简要分析原因 The reasons contributing to this situation may be as follows: 1) wish to be admitted to the university 2) bad habits of learning and low efficiency of study Para 4：论述若干建议：论述若干建议 1) relieve study burden take proper ex

5、ercise and have moderate entertainment) 2) improve learning efficiency form good habits set scientific timetables Hello, everyone! As a senior 3 student, I feel honored to stand here to share some of my feelings with you. Maybe you have already heard one of my classmates Qingfen fainted in class as

6、a result of getting exhausted after burning oil till midnight for several days to improve his English. It is not unusual for our senior 3 students to stay up late at night. And the reasons contributing to this situation may be as follows: On one hand, with the wish to be admitted to the university,

7、Senior 3 students are always burdened with too much assignment and pressure, which will somehow result in their physical and mental problems. On the other hand, bad habits of learning and low efficiency of study are also two factors for the students exhaustion. Under this circumstance, I have some a

8、dvice for all of you. There is no doubt that too much pressure will lead to the opposite effect on the students study. So first of all, you can take regular exercise and have moderate entertainment to keep yourself at ease. In addition, from now on, effective learning skills should be developed and

9、scientific timetables and learning plans should be worked out to improve your efficiency of study. And I firmly believe that great efforts with effective strategies will lead you to the final success. So much for my speech. Thank you for your listening! Practice: 假设你将作为高三毕业生代表，在毕业晚会上用假设你将作为高三毕业生代表，在

10、毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲。演讲内容包括：英文作一简短的告别演讲。演讲内容包括： 对高中生活的怀念对高中生活的怀念 对老师，对母校的感谢对老师，对母校的感谢 对同学的祝福对同学的祝福 审题：审题： 体裁：演讲稿体裁：演讲稿 主题：毕业告别主题：毕业告别 构思：构思： 毕业晚会毕业晚会 at the graduation ceremony 告别告别 say farewell to 高三毕业生代表高三毕业生代表 the representative of senior 3 graduates 从学校毕业从学校毕业 graduate from the high school 感谢某人感谢某人

11、 say/extend thanks to sb. be thankful/grateful to sb. 我们一起度过的日子成为了彼此的回忆。我们一起度过的日子成为了彼此的回忆。 The days that we spent together will be the unforgettable memory of each other. The days when we worked hard will be our memory. 我祝愿你们梦想成真。我祝愿你们梦想成真。 We wish all of you to make your dreams come true. We wish t

12、hat all the senior 3 students could realize your dreams. Dear teachers and students, In this glorious summer, we will say goodbye! People who have experienced life in high school will say: three years of high school time is so impressive and profound. The past three years has been really a wonderful

13、 journey with laughter and tears. This is not only due to living under high pressure ,faced with piled of test paper ,but also when we spare no effort to study but achieve nothing. Anyway, we benefit a lot from the life in senior 3. In the three years life, our teachers contribute their time, energy

14、, love and whole heart to all of us. Here, we are extremely grateful to all that our dear teachers have done for us. Finally, todays graduation is not only a summary of yesterday, but a new start of tomorrow as well. Now, I represent the whole school to wish all senior 3 students to make their dream

15、s come true in the college entrance examination and in the future. Thats all, thank you! 书信书信闵行区一模闵行区一模 志志 愿愿 者者 招招 募募 爱共线是由民间发起的爱心公益组织，主要致力爱共线是由民间发起的爱心公益组织，主要致力于贫困地区儿童相关的援助项目。于贫困地区儿童相关的援助项目。 我们期待你的加入！我们期待你的加入！ 岗位岗位1：网页编辑（：网页编辑（webpage editor） 岗位岗位2：影像制作（：影像制作（cameraman） 岗位岗位3：论坛管理员（：论坛管理员（forum adm

16、inistrator） 岗位岗位4：活动组织（：活动组织（event organizer） 有意者请来信告知：有意者请来信告知： 1) 你个人的基本情况；你个人的基本情况； 2) 你所申请的岗位和申请的理由；你所申请的岗位和申请的理由； 审题：审题： 主题：岗位申请主题：岗位申请 体裁：申请信体裁：申请信 构思：构思： Dear Sir or Madam, Para A (开门见山开门见山) Having seen your advertisement for employing volunteers to help poor children in poverty-stricken area

17、s, I wish to apply for the position as . in your organization. Para B 个人情况介绍个人情况介绍 Para C 申请职位的理由申请职位的理由(分点讲自己的竞聘优势分点讲自己的竞聘优势) Para D (结尾结尾)I would appreciate your time in reading my letter and if there is any additional information you need, please contact me. Im looking forward to your reply! Your

18、s, Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your advertisement for employing volunteers to help poor children in poverty-stricken areas, I wish to apply for the position as the webpage editor in your organization. I am a Senior 3 student majoring in literature. Mercy for the poor children and passion for volu

19、ntary activities trigger me to make up my mind to do whatever I can for them. And the reasons why I apply for the post as the webpage editor are as follows: On one hand, during my study in school, I am good at writing articles of different styles, such as comments and news reports. On the other hand

20、, surfing the Internet frequently offers me rich experience of designing attractive webpages, which will undoubtedly qualify me for the job as the webpage editor. I would appreciate your time in reading my letter and if there is any additional information you need, please contact me. And Im looking

21、forward to your reply! Yours, Nancy 介绍信介绍信Practice:你在网络上结识了一位美国笔友你在网络上结识了一位美国笔友Tom，现请你用英语给，现请你用英语给他写封信，作个自我介绍。他写封信，作个自我介绍。Dear Tom, I am writing to introduce Best wishes! Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,回信回信Practice:暑假后你的笔友暑假后你的笔友Tom给你写了封信，现在你要用英语给给你写了封信，现在你要用英语给他回封信，介绍你的暑假。他回封信，介绍

22、你的暑假。Dear Tom, Im very pleased to receive your letter. Now Im writing to tell your something about my summer vacation. Best wishes! Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, 投诉信投诉信 Practice: 假如你叫假如你叫Li Yuan，你买了件商品，但发现质量有问题，你买了件商品，但发现质量有问题，现请你写一封投诉信，字数现请你写一封投诉信，字数120-150字。信的内容包括：字。信的内容包括： 1）

23、你购买商品的时间地点和物品名称。）你购买商品的时间地点和物品名称。 2）你购买商品的质量问题。）你购买商品的质量问题。 3）你希望的解决方式。）你希望的解决方式。 投诉信的常用句型：投诉信的常用句型： 1) I am writing to you to complain about . 2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with. 3) There are some problems . that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there isFor another,. 4)

24、I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 5) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can. 6) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 7) We wil

25、l appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss. 假如你叫赵敏，收到学生会发给你的邮件后决定参假如你叫赵敏，收到学生会发给你的邮件后决定参加志愿者活动，请你按邮件中的内容和要求给学生加志愿者活动，请你按邮件中的内容和要求给学生会回一封邮件。会回一封邮件。To zhaomin DateMonday, May 14th, 2010 3: 30 p.m. FSubjectVoluntary Activity A Voluntary Activity In the winter vacation 5 Volunteers Wanted As

26、English teachers At S. O. S Childrens Village If you are interested in taking part in the activity, please send an email to studentunior bjsz. Sh. Cn before May 20th, 2010, explaining your past relevant experiences and purposes for applying for the activity. Students UnionStudents Union, Your idea t

27、o do some voluntary activities at S.O.S Childrens Village really interests me. After careful consideration, Im now formally applying for this voluntary activity. Frankly speaking, Im always interested in voluntary activities and therefore, I think I have got quite rich experiences. The latest was on

28、e that required volunteers to teach and play with children in the special school. I was fortunate to be one of these volunteers. The first time I met those children, I found they were not special at all. Instead, they showed me the same passion for life and the same for being their personal best as

29、those normal students. From then on, I began to love children and Im writing to take part in voluntary activities in which I can give a helping hand to children who call for my help. Yes, its the claim “HELP” that encourages me to come again! As far as I know, children in rural areas seriously lack

30、experienced teachers and to make matters worse, English teaching resources are limited. It so happens that I have a good command of English and Im available this winter vacation. Thus, the love for children and the interest in volunteer work push me to apply for this times voluntary activity. For th

31、e sake of those innocent children, for the sake of education in remote areas, I will try my best. Im looking forward to your reply and more details about the voluntary activity.Yours sincerely,Zhao Ming图画类图画类+倡议书倡议书 在积极倡导低碳环保的大环境下，今天的校园内，浪费现在积极倡导低碳环保的大环境下，今天的校园内，浪费现象还很普遍，许多学生没有意识到节能的重要性。请你根象还很普遍，许多学

32、生没有意识到节能的重要性。请你根据下图所展示的一些现象，以学生会的名义，就这些现象据下图所展示的一些现象，以学生会的名义，就这些现象起草一份起草一份倡议书倡议书，向全校师生发出倡议，向全校师生发出倡议，节约能源节约能源。 注意：（注意：（1)词数不少于词数不少于120-150； （2）可根据需要补充与文章有关的信息；）可根据需要补充与文章有关的信息； （3）主要内容：）主要内容：描述图画，发出倡议描述图画，发出倡议。 Dear teachers and students, Nowadays, its common to see students wasting thing in our sch

33、ool. Many students havent realized the importance of energy-saving. For example, sometimes we can see that lights and computers are still on after class, or some students even leave water running after using it. Besides, our paper is printed on only one side, causing much waste. Its time that we did

34、 something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are switched off when we leave the rooms. Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. Whats more, paper should be printed on both sides and reused if possible. In

35、 a word, if everybody has the awareness of energy-saving and start with ourselves to reduce the waste, we can contribute to society. Students Union图表类图表类 最近国家教育部门就最近国家教育部门就“是否取消中学文理分科是否取消中学文理分科”面向全国面向全国征求意见。下面是腾讯网就征求意见。下面是腾讯网就“中学文理是否应该分科中学文理是否应该分科”这这一话题进行调查的结果。一话题进行调查的结果。 请你结合上表，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈自己的看法。开请你

36、结合上表，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈自己的看法。开头已给出，不计入总词数。头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, the Tencent Website has launched an online survey on the topic whether science and arts education should be separated.网友观点网友观点投票数投票数百分比百分比理由理由应该分科应该分科172 79348. 48%中学生负担太重中学生负担太重现代社会更需要专业人才现代社会更需要专业人才不应该分不应该分科科183 59351. 52 %分科不利于人的全面发展分科不利于人

37、的全面发展分科导致全民整体素质下降分科导致全民整体素质下降 审题：审题： 主题：文理分科主题：文理分科 separate arts and science education 体裁：描述体裁：描述+论述论述 构思：构思： Para 1: 提出主题提出主题 (已给出已给出) Para 2: 描述图表描述图表 (简要使用表中数据简要使用表中数据) According to the chart, As we can see from the chart, As is described in the chart, 48 percent of Para 3: 简要论述自己观点简要论述自己观点 Rece

38、ntly, the Tencent Website has launched an online survey on the topic whether science and arts education should be separated. According to the survey, about 48 percent of people are in favor of the practice of separating science and arts education. They think, for one thing, high school students are

39、suffering from a heavy learning load; for another, what the modern society needs are more professionals in various fields. While more than 50 percent of the netizens dont think so. They believe that the practice of separation goes against a persons all-round development and it leads to the falling o

40、f overall quality of the entire nation. In my opinion, science and arts education are of equal importance and neither should be ignored. Even though the practice of separation is acceptable, a student shouldnt abandon either science or arts education completely, because science makes us wise while a

41、rts makes us cultivated. In addition, the social development demands no separation of arts and science. The important thing is to ensure that students are able to develop real talents by keeping a balance between arts and science studies and thus make great contributions to the society in the future

42、.叙述叙述+议论议论 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese. 请你根据请你根据参加过的社会实践活动参加过的社会实践活动，谈谈参加社会，谈谈参加社会实践活动的实践活动的体会体会以及这样的活动对你将来的人生以及这样的活动对你将来的人生产生的产生的影响影响。 审题：审题： 主题：社会实践活动主题：社会实践活动 social activities 体裁：叙述体裁：叙述+议论议论 构思：构思： Para 1: 提出主题提出主题 参加社

43、会实践活动参加社会实践活动 I have taken part in many social activities up till now, such as playing with children who were homeless, getting into conversation with lonely old men and so on. People who I helped were much obliged to me and I am too glad to do these. (郑佳颖郑佳颖) Para 2: 结合参加过的实践活动，谈体会结合参加过的实践活动，谈体会 注意

44、：简单叙述实践活动；过去时注意：简单叙述实践活动；过去时 Last weekend, I took part in the activity in my community, which armed at keeping the old company. There we performed for them and chatted with them happily. Through that activity, I thought I had a better understanding of the old and knew how to respect and help them. (

45、马雪斐马雪斐) Para 3: 论述参加此实践活动对我人生的影论述参加此实践活动对我人生的影响响 Although its a voluntary labor without reward, it can help me make progress in social communicative and manipulative abilities. It adds a brilliant touch to my life, so I will always cherish this period of the most beautiful time. (张伊婷张伊婷) Participati

46、ng in social activities can not only broaden our horizons, but also a good way to improve our comprehensive qualities. During a summer vacation a few years ago，l became a museum volunteer and began my one-week volunteer work, which left a deep impression on me. My task was to guide the tourists who came to visit the exhibition, which was a tough job for me. l had to stand in the sun , answering the same questions again and again. But at the same time ,my communication skills were improved and l also managed to get along with other people. Nowadays, social skill