高二英语写作公开课课件

1、2021/3/91 Writing How to write a composition step by step?By Peng qiuyi2021/3/92Will it get high scores?compare exellent poor 2021/3/93Why writing is so difficult for you?Reason 1. dont know what to write. 写什么写什么Reason 2. dont know how to write . 怎么写怎么写2021/3/942021/3/95A good compositionContent 内容内

2、容 Structure结构结构Language语言语言1.good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)2.linking words （过渡词）3.advanced words and sentence patterns（高级词汇和句型）4.no Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)Beauty卷面（美观）卷面（美观） 2021/3/96 提纲式、半开放、书信提纲式、半开放、书信/邮件格邮件格式居多；式居多； 高考命题形式01 通过这个图表可以看出，邀请信和介绍信考得最多，其次是建议信和咨询信。2021/3/97高考评分标准（25分，按5档评分

3、） 五档（五档（21-25分）：分）： 内容内容齐全齐全，错误非常少，错误非常少，高级高级句型多。句型多。 四档（四档（16-20分）：分）：因使用高级句型而有一点因使用高级句型而有一点小错小错。 三档（三档（11-15分）：分）：有错误，但有错误，但不影响不影响理解。理解。 二档（二档（610分）分）: 错误错误较多较多，但也，但也基本理解基本理解文章信息。文章信息。 一档（一档（15分）分）: 明显漏掉主要内容，明显漏掉主要内容，无法传递无法传递读者有效信息。读者有效信息。 0分：内容太少，无法评判内容太少，无法评判022021/3/98高考评分标准02扣分点扣分点： 1.文章偏题 2.

4、要点缺失 3.低级错误 4.词数过多或过少（扣1-2分） 5.卷面和书写不整洁（扣1分）评分四要素：1.内容、2.语言、3.结构、4.卷面 贵州省评卷规则：尽量给学生找分，给分略偏高。 加分点加分点1.1.卷面卷面整洁整洁2.2.句式句式多变多变3.3.巧妙巧妙串联串联4.4.蠢错蠢错不犯不犯5.5.亮点亮点若干若干6.6.层次层次不乱不乱2021/3/99书面表达失分表现2021/3/910Avoid Chinglish!1) I very like you.2) I often by bus to school.3) There has a highway connected with B

5、eijing.4)Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete. 5)It will spend us much money to buy 5）one. I like you very much.istakeI often go to school by bus.2021/3/911书面表达：书面表达： 假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括： 介绍比赛的相关内容； 说明你打算参加的原因； 询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）L

6、ist main points and key words内容内容语幽默故事大赛语幽默故事大赛原因原因问意向问意向我校我校下周五下周五邀请邀请2021/3/9121.审题审题2.提纲，提纲，（写内容要点及关键词和关键句型等）（写内容要点及关键词和关键句型等）3.翻译翻译（拓展并升级词汇）拓展并升级词汇）4. 成文成文（加入适当过度词，使句子连贯加入适当过度词，使句子连贯）写写作作很很重重要要写作五步骤写作五步骤5.检查检查（时态语态，内容要点，句子结构，大小写及标点符号（时态语态，内容要点，句子结构，大小写及标点符号等书写规范，卷面整洁）等书写规范，卷面整洁）2021/3/913 Task 1

7、: Thinking 审题审题“五决定五决定” Letter of invitation（邀请信）（邀请信）The outline in your mindThe present and the future tense（一般现在时和一般（一般现在时和一般 将来时将来时The first person（第一人称）（第一人称）2021/3/914Dear Peter,How are you doing?_ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua“三段三段”谋谋篇篇2021/3/915Para.1(beginning)Para.3(ending)P

8、ara.2(body) Structure of an invitation 邀请信结构邀请信结构 writing purpose reasonsexpectationreply 介绍比赛的相关内容介绍比赛的相关内容 说明你打算参加的原因说明你打算参加的原因表达愿望表达愿望(希望对方接受邀请希望对方接受邀请)2021/3/916用于第一段的有用句子用于第一段的有用句子 开头开头( (夺人眼球句）夺人眼球句）1.Its a great honor for me to invite you to2.I think it would be a great idea if you could part

9、icipate in. 3.On behalf of ., I have the honor to invite you to4.I m more than delighted to invite you5.Knowing of the exciting news that_,I cant wait to invite you to participate in it.用于结尾段的有用句子用于结尾段的有用句子 结尾结尾 （韵味无穷结尾句）（韵味无穷结尾句）1.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.2

10、.I will be grateful if you are willing to come. Looking forward to your reply.3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn. Conclusion （ some useful sentence pattens will be used）2021/3/917Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents）Para.1 介绍比赛的相关内容（介绍比赛的相关内容（5W1H)我校拟定于下周五举行一

11、次英语幽默故事大赛。我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，我校，德江县第一中学，德江县第一中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，我校，位于大犀山脚下，全县最漂亮的学校，位于大犀山脚下，全县最漂亮的学校，拟定于下周五拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，位于大犀山脚下，全我校，位于大犀山脚下，全县最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事县最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。大赛。Thinkingwhen: next fr

12、idaywhere: our school)who: all students who love Englishwhat: Telling English storywhy: (to improve spoken Englishhow: competitionattention:when where who what why how2021/3/918Para.2 说明你打算参加的原因说明你打算参加的原因 (拓展思路）拓展思路）对西方国家的文化对西方国家的文化感兴趣。感兴趣。口语在语言学习中口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。扮演重要角色。共同学习，共同进共同学习，共同进步。步。Why?2021/3

13、/919Para.3. 询问对方的意见询问对方的意见你是否有意愿参加？期待你的回复。你是否有意愿参加？期待你的回复。我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？期待你期待你的回复。的回复。2021/3/920Step 2 翻译句子，丰富句型翻译句子，丰富句型 (Translation) 很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，位于大犀山脚下，全县最漂亮的学校全县最漂亮的学校，拟定于下周五举行举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。表达表达1 I am delighted to tell you that in order

14、 to increase our interest of learning English, our school,located at the foot of the mountain, _, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.同位语同位语表达表达2 I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, our school, located at the foot of the

15、mountain,_is the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday. 定语从句定语从句 the most beautiful in the citywhich 2021/3/921Reason 1： 1.想想参加参加这个比赛是因为我这个比赛是因为我喜欢喜欢英语，对西方文化英语，对西方文化感兴趣感兴趣。高级表达高级表达 The reason_ the competition attracts my attention is _I am _Engli

16、sh and _ western culture.定、表语从句定、表语从句( 高级词汇）高级词汇） why thatam fond ofcrazy aboutPart 2：Reason 2：2.想想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。表达表达 2：定语从句：定语从句 _,(众所周知众所周知)， oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I_ （ 渴望）渴望） improve my oral (spoken) English .As we

17、 all knowlong to：am eager to高级表达高级表达Reason 3： I wish to make friends with those_ have common interests with me _ (为了）为了）we can learn together and progress at the same time.3.希望希望结交结交有共同有共同兴趣爱好兴趣爱好的朋友，共同的朋友，共同学习学习，共同，共同进步进步whoso that2021/3/922询问对方意见：询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否所以想

18、了解你你是否有意愿参加？期待你的回复。有意愿参加？期待你的回复。 Your _（幽默感和天赋）（幽默感和天赋）of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I _（强烈强烈推荐）推荐） you to take part in the competition. I am looking forward for your reply. 高级表达高级表达strongly recommendhumor sense and talentPart 3：2021/3/923Step 3 成文（连句成篇）成文（连句成篇） I am delighted to te

19、ll you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in our school, located at the foot of the mountain,which is the best and the most beautiful in the city.（Para. 1 writing purpose不变）不变） （Para. 2 The reasons 变了变了) Your hum

20、or sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered.I am looking forward to your earliest reply. （para. 3 reply suggestionExpectation 不变不变 ）只是简单相加导致句子不连贯只是简单

21、相加导致句子不连贯把三句表原因的句子把三句表原因的句子1+2+3 整合成一段整合成一段) 1.The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.2.As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by maki

22、ng use of this competition.3. I wish to make friends with those who have common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.2021/3/924Step 4 加入连词，使篇章连贯加入连词，使篇章连贯Dear Linda, I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an Engl

23、ish humorous story competition will be held next Friday in our school,located at the foot of the mountain, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city.(Beginning) To begin with，the reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.

24、Whats more , as we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language. learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition. Finally, I wish to make friends with those who have common interests with me so that we can learn together and progress a

25、t the same time.(Body) Your humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forward to your earliest reply. (Ending) Sincerely yours Li

26、HuaDetails -linking words第一组：第一组：Firstly ,Secondly, Lastly 第二组：第二组：At first,Whats more , At last第四组：第四组：At first, Moreover , At last第五组：第五组：To start with，Furthermore，Last but not least 2021/3/925审题提纲翻译Step4 成文 Step 1Step 3 结构（三段式）结构（三段式）五定Step 5 查看How to write an composition step by step? 关键词、句关键词、句

27、Step 2 2021/3/926Homework模仿写作：（模仿写作：（2019年英语作文全国卷三）年英语作文全国卷三） 假设你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen 参加，内容包括： 时间 活动安排 欢迎他表演节目。（注意：词数100左右。可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。） Pay attention to its words, phrases, sentence patterns and grammar.2021/3/927邀请信邀请信模板模板 Dear , I am delighted to tell you that in order to , （主题） will be held o