续写好句积累——突破20+

1、高考"读后续写"要求尽可能地应用较多较复杂的语法结构和词汇,同时能有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑.下面是九个在续写中经常用到的句型,如果你能在续写中加以使用,一定会给你的续写增添色彩,也会让阅卷老师眼前一亮.将这些句型熟练地组合使用,根据需要参加状语从句、名词性从句或者是定语从句,可以在这九个句型的根底上写出许多较复杂的好句来.续写突破20+不是梦,就看你用不用.Doing.,主+谓.doing作状语,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before,after,while等；但如果是被动关系,应该使用过去分词done作状语.例如：1

2、) SeeingtearsinMark'seyes,AnniedecidedtopromisetotheboythatshewouldletMarkcutherhair,too.2) Hesitatingalittle,MarkpromisedtoAnniethathewouldworkhardathisEnglish.3) Findingaclinicnearby,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathadhappen.4) Ignoringherwords,themanwalkedawayquickly.5) Approachingthe

3、doorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.6) Hearingthis,Catherineranasfastasherlegscouldcarryher.7) WhiledecoratingthetreetogetherwithMama,Iaccidentallydroppedandbrokeanoldglassonit.8) Wantinghimtotakehisflowerandgoofftoplay,Ifakedasmileandthenturnedtotheotherside.9) Afterreachinghome,shetoldeverythingtoherbrot

4、her.10) Hearinghisbrother'swords,sherushedbacktotheshoptofindtheboybuttimeneverwaitsforanyone.11) Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestressforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.12) Dressedinaballetdress,shemanagedtoslipintothedressingroomwithoutbeingnoticed.主+谓.,doing.doing作伴随状语,与句子的谓

5、语动词同时发生,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现,转化为：主+谓and谓；但如果是被动关系,应该使用过去分词done作伴随状语.例如：1) Thegirlbegankickingandswinging,tryingtogetfreeoftheman'shold.2) Shebravelyapproachedhim,handinghimabunchofredroses.3) Bittermemoriesoftheman'sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.4) Herfatherwaslyingonhisback

6、,trappedunderthetruck.5) HerDadwasstillconscious,yelling,"Onemoretry!"6) "It'sOK,"Mamasaid,comfortingmewithahug.7) Carefullylayingthenoteaside,Icleanedupthebrokenpiecesoftheball,wishingIcouldstickthemtogether.8) Ifollowedher,notbelievingmyeyes.主1+谓.,主2+doing.逻辑主语2与doing构成主动关系

7、,构成独立主格,在句中作状语.该句型或以转化为并列句：主1+谓.and主2+谓.例如：1) Hestoodthere,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhiseyes.-Hestoodthereandtearsofgratitudewelledupinhiseyes.2) Sheopenedtheletter,herhandstremblingwithexcitement.-Sheopenedtheletterandherhandstrembledwithexcitement.3) "Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledout

8、,hisvoicequiveringwithrage."Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledoutandhisvoicewasquiveringwithrage.主+谓1.,谓2.,and谓3.描述一系列的动作.如果是两个动作,可以用这样的结构：主+谓.and(then)谓.例如1)Theadultsputonperformance,chatted,andsaidtheirgoodbye.2)Shestoppedthetrucksafelyoutsidethegarageandthenrushedbacktothebasement.3)Peter

9、rushedtothesceneandwasastonishedtofindthecatingoodshape.4)Sheyawnedandturnedtolookbackatherhouseacrossthestress.5) Despitethegreatdifficulties,healwayshadapositiveattitudeandgreetedeveryoneeachmorningwithahugesmile.6) Hestoodrightbeforeme,andsaidwithgreatexcitement,"LookwhatIfound!"7) Irea

10、chedfortheflowerandreplied,"JustwhatIneed."8) Grandmasighedandturnedtowardsthekitchen.9) Shethoughtforawhileandthencontinued.10) Sheturnedaroundandsawmestandinginthedoorway.表情感类的形容词,主+谓情感类的形容词在句中作状语,说明主语的状态,可以转化为Feelingadj,主+谓.有时可以放在句后：主+谓.,表情感类的形容词.例如：1) Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryello

11、wblouse,tryingtoattractothers'attention.2) Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.3) ToAnnie'sdelight,surroundedbyhisclassmates,Markseemedlikearockstar,cheerfulandproud.4) Andthenheranofftoplay,unawareoftheimpacthe'dhadonme.5) Shegotdisappointedandreturnedho

12、me,continuouslyangryatherself.6) Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock.7) Istoodinthelivingroomdoorway,absolutelyshocked.8) Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.9) Theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.10) Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.11) Ex

13、tremelyworried,theydecidedtowaitforthematMac'shome.方式副词(ly),主+谓方式副词在句中作状语,修饰谓语动词,一般放在句末,但有时根据需要可以放在句首.例如：1) Gently,shepickedupthefirstbaby,ranbackoutsideandlaiditonthesidewalk.2) Quickly,shefollowedthesoundtoastream.3) Attentively,welistenedtotheteacherinclass.4) Immediately,anabsolutedarknessru

14、ledtheforest.5) Carefully,Timdidhishomework.句子副词,主+谓句子副词在句中作状语,修饰整个句子,放在句首,引出句子.例如：1) Andamazingly,theboysrecoveredsoonafterbeingperformedCPR.2) Fortunately,thecatwasstillalive,thoughbadlyinjured.3) Incredibly(Unbelievably),shewasabletocarryherlastchildoutbeforetheroofandwallsfell.4) "Actually,

15、Iwastouchedbyyourkindness!"saidJenny,wipinghertears.5) Luckily,Iwasabletoborrowafewdollorsfromaclerkatthehotel.地点状语或表示运动方向的副词+谓(vi)+主该句型是一个全部倒装句,主语必须是名词,谓语动词为不及物动词,常见的表运动方向的副词有：in,out,off,away,up,down,outside,inside等.例如：1) AtthebackofthecrowdwasMark,determinednottobeleftbehind.2) Inhishandwasaf

16、lower,withitspetalsallworn.3) AtthefrontdoorstoodherdearhusbandwhosufferedgreatanxietywhenJanewasnowheretobefound.4) Aheadsatanoldwoman.5) Awaywentthecrowdonebyone.6) Downfelltheleaves.7) Incameastrangerinblack.时间状语,主+谓时间状语一般放在句末,但有些时间状语放在句首,能使行文连贯,逻辑合理.如：shortlyafterwards,hourslater,beforelong,atth

17、atmoment,afterthat,severalminutesafterthat,afterseeminglyalongtime,afterwhatseemedalongtime,inthemeanwhile,beforeIknewit,Itwasn'tlongbefore.等.例如：1) Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.2) Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightenedandalone.3) Inthemeanwhile,Bradandhiswifejumpedintotheircarandfollowedclosebehind.4) Onthemorningofthecompetition,shewasnervous.However,withhermother'sencouragement,shehadnothingtofear.5) Amonthlater,LarryappearedinEric'sclassroom.6) Atthistime,aboyapproa