2017-2018浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

1、2019.9浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. "I'm g

2、oing to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top.

3、She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop

4、 for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a

5、 stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a

6、 helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2

7、 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up.2019.6On a bright, warm July afternoon, MacHollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alas

8、ka with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled_ （骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to第1页show them this beautiful place s

9、omeday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnMan, that's a big dog!w olfaquoghe thought. Buup with him.Mac' s heaijumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bri

10、ght red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back,shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the ch

11、ase （追赶）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he' d be easycaught up and the wolf ' s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky we

12、re driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn' t thinkmuch of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a w

13、olf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2A few minu

14、tes later,the other two cyclists arrived.2019 11.浙江高考A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about h

15、er.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our fri

16、ends. Who knew if we' d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we' d returned home to get the purseand traveler

17、 ' s cheomshad forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: " You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I' ll stand outsicdoor and play lookout wh ile you go. " I had terrible pictures in m

18、y mind:" Honey, where are thekids? ” W What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet." We were never actually lebehind in a strange city, but we weren' t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in va

19、in for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn' t we find a ho-keekirith a likelybackyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed 第2页up on her

20、 front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we

21、had brought with us.Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.2019 6 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New M

22、exico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ' friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm hou

23、se listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sh

24、eep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ' t going to take a hoe ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put o

25、n our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don ' t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the trackso that you don get lost!" "OK! " mydad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sighi_

26、LLwas so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（ 编织白blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好

27、；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse We had no idea where we were and it got dark.参考范文一：Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment （时间）,she felt a li

28、ttle sad, but she wasn' so frightened （情感）.She reminded herself constantly,（心理）-Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe （情感）he was in one of them and will return soon（ 动作）! I have to guide him tomorrow. " She felt asleep 作）and dreamed of seeing Tom （动作）.Paragraph 2It was daybreak

29、when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then（ 时间）walked along the stream, hoping （心、理）to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked,exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly （时间）,she spotted （动作）a huge flat rock. She managed （动作）to climb onto it and waited with patience. The

30、 moment （时间）the helicopter appeared （动彳） again. The nearer it got （动作）,the more she waved （动作）the yellow blouse. To her great joy,（情感）the helicopter didn ' miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed （ 动作）towards Jane. They hugged each oth

31、er tightly （情感）and burst into tears （情感）.参考范文二：The car abrubtly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window.When spotting

32、 this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him.Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac ' s bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after,a：henal ran off.A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived . Mac emerged fro

33、m the car and hugged his friends. a I thought I was going to die, cried to'themaMac retrieved （取回）his bicycle, andthe three men resumed（继续） their road trip, agreeing to keep in one another' s sight line. A fewmiles down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears . " The rest of the

34、trip was amazing, but I had to let the former emotion out. ” 参考范文三：Para1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought withus. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappoint

35、ment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nicecamping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought mom could bewise as I admiring our stunning tent."Oh, I forgot the pillows! ” what a misconcDespite the ache of my neck, we had some great

36、nights.Para1:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque cenery, we also manage

37、d to consider mom' s scandals as a kind offun.I reaaly love my Mum.To our relief, we arrived at grandparents' place and went back to our home with all offour people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.范文四：Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off thetrack into another direction. Dad foll