我的短文改错

1、Proof ReadingProof Reading 短文改错短文改错朝阳县实验中学朝阳县实验中学 王顶举王顶举 2015年东北三省三校高三第一次联合模拟考试年东北三省三校高三第一次联合模拟考试 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and g

2、o over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generously. Id like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by he old mans table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, co

3、ming over and helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he gad made my day, either.短文改错的要求短文改错的要求 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改修改：在错的词下画一横线()，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者

4、(从第11处起)不计分。 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled a

5、nd said, “Thank you. You are generously.foranbutgenerouswent Id like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he

6、 gad made my day, either.somesaydaytoo 2015年东北三省三校高三第一次联合模拟考试 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting for my order to come, I noticed a old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one but me seemed to notice him. I got up and went over to his table and asked if

7、 that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generous. Id like some orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to say goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his day, coming over and helping him out . I ga

8、ve him a hug and told him he gad made my day, too.多词多词 少词少词 错词错词 合计合计201111810201211810201311810201411810全国新课标卷）全国新课标卷） 如何做短文改错题 1、从句子的角度分析：、从句子的角度分析：（1）查时态是否一致）查时态是否一致 I remembered her words and calm down.calmed （2）查主谓是否一致）查主谓是否一致 1、Anyone may borrow books and it cost nothing tocosts （3）查指代是否一致）查指代

9、是否一致 1、I used to love science class-all of them-classes （4 4）查上下文修饰语是否）查上下文修饰语是否一致一致 1、We study quite a few subject. 2、It was very kind for them to meet me.subjects of 5 5）查行文逻辑是否一）查行文逻辑是否一致致 1、 It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it.and/so 2、从词性的角度分析、从词性的角度分析 冠词冠词 名词名词 代词代词 形容词形容词

10、 副词副词 动词动词（非谓语动词，情态动词等）（非谓语动词，情态动词等） 介词介词 连词连词 etc 2015年东北三省三校高三第一次联合模拟考试年东北三省三校高三第一次联合模拟考试 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting for my order to come, I noticed a old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one but me seemed to notice him. I got up and went

11、over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generous. Id like some orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to say goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his day, coming o

12、ver and helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he gad made my day, too.错误类型错误类型统计统计（全国新课标卷）全国新课标卷） 动动词词非非谓谓语语名名词词形形和和副副代代词词介介词词连连词词冠冠词词其其它它合合计计201121111211102012211121101102013111211211020143011211110逐句找错词，错在那里？逐句找错词，错在那里？动词动词形形，名词名词数数还要注意还要注意形形和和副副代词代词格格，细领悟，细领悟介词介词短语短语须关注须关注冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾

13、非谓语，非谓语，细辨别细辨别一、动词形一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。2011全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 ： I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last .felt2012全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 ： When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said,2011全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 ： but the only clothes I had was

14、 those I had on. tore 一、动词形一、动词形were 二、名词数二、名词数 1可数可数名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误的用法错误 2不可数名词错用了复数不可数名词错用了复数【2012全国新课标】全国新课标】 ：From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. toys 【2012全国新课标】全国新课标】 It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. luggage二、名词数二、名词数三、还要注

15、意形和副三、还要注意形和副1主要指该用形容词的地方用了副词主要指该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用该用副词的地方用了形容词，了形容词，2该形容词或副词修饰什么该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确形式是否正确,是原级、比是原级、比较级还是最高级较级还是最高级 。3一些副词的互换，如一些副词的互换，如however和和besides等等2013新课标新课标II ： Interesting, it had a connection with the British porcelain(瓷器瓷器) industry. Interestingly【2012全国全国I】 That wont be

16、easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. anyhow【2012全国新课标】全国新课标】 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive（好斗的）（好斗的）. . less三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有以这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有以下几种方式下几种方式1现在分词、过去分词现在分词、过去分词互换互换；2动名词动名词和和动词原形动词原形互换；互换；3不定式不定式to

17、的有无等的有无等【2012全国新课标】全国新课标】 ： I must make my toys to last. 2008辽宁卷：辽宁卷： We all enjoyed this precious day greatly , remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.remembering【2012重庆卷】重庆卷】 Gradually, I became interesting in biology . interested四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别五五、 代词代词格，格，细领

18、悟细领悟1人称人称代词代词主格主格I, you, he, she, it, we, you, they宾格宾格me, you, him, her, it, us, you, them2物 主物 主代词代词形容词性形容词性 my, your, his, her, its, our, their名词性名词性mine, yours, his, hers, its, ours, theirs3 反身代词反身代词myself, yourself, himself, herself, itself, ourselves, yourselves, themselves4 指示代词指示代词this, that

19、, these, those, such, some5 疑问代词疑问代词who, whom, whose, which, what, whoever, whichever, whatever6 关系代词关系代词that, which, who, whom, whose, as7 不定代词不定代词one/ some/ any, each/ every, none/ no, many/ much, few/ little/ a few/ a little, other/ another, all/ both, neither/ either2011四川卷四川卷 ： The doctor gave

20、him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 【2013陕西卷】陕西卷】 ： We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. itour五五、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭多词、少词和搭配错误。配错误。in Sunday afternoon catch a sight oflose my heart in hurry ao

21、n六、介词短语需关注六、介词短语需关注【2012全国新课标】全国新课标】 ： My father said, Thats it. No more toys to you. for2011重庆卷重庆卷 This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a long time. from六、介词短语需关注六、介词短语需关注1冠词的冠词的误加和漏用误加和漏用2不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别的用法区别(包括包括 a 与与 an 的区别的区别)3冠词在一些习语中的固定搭配冠词在一些习语中的固定搭配 a

22、七、冠词连词常光顾七、冠词连词常光顾2011全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. 连词常光顾（1）并列连词并列连词短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and, but, or, so 等几个表示并列、转折、选择、等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。主要属于行文逻辑的错误。2011全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag.

23、and 连词常光顾（2）从属连词从属连词短文改错对从属连词的考查主要涉及不同短文改错对从属连词的考查主要涉及不同从句引导词的使用从句引导词的使用1在定语从句中，在定语从句中，which和和that2名词性从句中的名词性从句中的what和和that3状语从句中的连词用法错误等状语从句中的连词用法错误等2012全国新课标卷全国新课标卷 But before long they began to see which was happening.what 2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不超十个短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 四不改四不改: :标点符号不改。标点符号

24、不改。大小写不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。在纲外生词不改。 2014年高考英语课标卷年高考英语课标卷II短文改错短文改错 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the cl