书面表达考前辅导

1、高三英语书面表达考前辅导2011 湖南卷假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文:1 简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；2 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。注意：1词数不少于120个；2 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。One possible version :As can be seen from the picture , when drops of water accumulate , they can form the sea; trees added together can make the forest, and the huma n society is forme

2、d by every in dividual or family.The picture conveys an important message to us.That is , as human society is made up of every in dividual , it is our resp on sibility to make as much effort as possible to make our society a good place to live in .As a matter of fact, every in dividual has his uniqu

3、en ess and every in dividual has someth ing in com mon with others as well.Learning from each other, we can bring richness to our quality and we can live a harmonious life.That is what all the people expect , I am sure.（2011福建卷）为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据 以下图片提示，以“ Great Cha nges为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。

4、内容要点如下：1. 某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；2. 发生变化的原因；3. 你的感想。1. 短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可根据图片提示适当发挥；3词数：120左右。Great Chan gesI am deeply impressed by the great cha nges that have take n place in the school over the past three years.I am deeply impressed by the great cha nges that have take n place in the

5、 school over the past three years.On May 12, 2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leav ing badly- damaged build in gs. It is now, however, tak ing on a new look. Tall buildi ngs have bee n put up, in cludi ng classroom and laboratory build in gs, and a library. There

6、is also a newly- built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and work ing hard. It is really amaz ing that the once- ruined place has now bee n tur ned into a beautiful school, full of life.Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would

7、be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great cha nges. Many hands make light work. We can work won ders if we un ite as a family, cari ng for each other and help ing those in n eed. Union is stre ngth.（2011 苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的 理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下

8、内容：1描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等； 2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； 3举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数 150 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The burden of

9、students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to

10、remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and

11、 always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter

12、 than a“ good ”. student模版一：1开头From this picture, we can see /As is show n in the picture/As is see n in thepicture 2衔接句As we all know, /As is known to alL/It is well known that/In my opinion , /As far as I am concerned /This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3结尾句In con clusi on /In bri

13、ef /On the whole /In short /In a word /Generally speaking /As has been stated 模版二：As can be seen in the picture,图画内容./The picture tells us概括图片大意. The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示含义 1/原因 1/结果 1.Second, 揭示含义 2/原因 2/结果 2.In my opinion/

14、As for me, we should take some measures to deal with the problem.First we should 具体措施Sec ond, we must具体措施Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容.图表类下面是某高中学校对 150 名高三学生睡眠时间不足及原因所作的调查，结果如下。请根据 图 1 提供的信息描述高三学生的睡眠情况， 并针对图 2 中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出 你的看法。参考词汇：图表 chart n. 思路点拨：本文属图表类作文，要仔细读图和图前的文字说明。本文要求

15、考生说明学生睡 眠情况的调查结果。基本时态应用一般现在时态。以第三人称的口气来表达内容。从写作 步骤来看，可先描述学生睡眠时间不足的具体数据，然后针对图 2 中任何一个数据所反映 的情况写出你的一个看法。在介绍数据变化时应特别注意表达的多样性。Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day. Sixty- two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day, while thirty- seven of th

16、em can sleep seven to eight hours. However, only one percent can sleep over eight hours.From Chart 2, we learn the reason why most senior 3 students don't have enough sleep. One of the reasons is that thirty- five students stay up late studying hard. I think it's not wise to do so. We should

17、 sleep well at night and wake up feeling more refreshed. So we can make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.图表类模版Recently, a survey has been done to find ou所要表达的主题.As is shown in the pie char,表中的内容1,表中的内容2.表中的内容3 and表 中的内容 4.As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percen

18、tage in the table (graph/pie chart),The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is that图表最大特点.This means that as进一步说明.We can see from the statistics given that图表细节一.The figures also tell us that图表细节二.In the column, we can see that accounts for进一步描述.In conclusion, the

19、survey shows that总体规律、趋势或呈现的问题.1) Many factors con tribute to the problem .On the one hand ,. On the otherhand ,is due to the fact that.In additi on ,is resp on siblefor.(Maybe there are some other reas ons to show)2) Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion tha得出结论.There are 至少两个 reas

20、ons why this happened.On the one hand,原因之一 .On the otherhand,原因之二.In addition, 原因之三 is also responsible for it.In my opinion，自己的观点，如何解决问题.It is high time that we发出倡议.We should解决问题的方法或对策.其他类型的书面表达模版一、利弊型Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 作文主题 .Opinions vary from pers on to pers on

21、/Opinions are divided among stude nts.Some people think it necessary to 正方观点.For one thing, 理由一 .For another,理由二.On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一 . What's more,反方理由二.In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that 作文主题 .你的理由.二、观点对比型Recently, a s

22、urvey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主题.As can be see n from the result of the survey, opinions are divided.About持有第一种观点的人数.The reasons are as follows. First, 第一种理由.Besides,第二种理由.On the contrary, others say 他们的观点.They think 第一种理由.What's more,第二种理由.As far as I'm concerned, we should 自