【高中英语读后续写】读后续写精彩结尾（5份46页）.docx

1、高中英语：读后续写微技能读后续写精彩结尾01画面定格人物动作的画面定格01The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽 的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）02Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowi

2、ng a golden path from the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金 色道路。（黎明到来的画面）03The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时 的画面）04The lingering sunlight was obliterated by t

3、he rapidly falling night, resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖o （日落时的画面）05The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月

4、亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗 吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面） What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.” Ive heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can h

5、ardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us, said Nina, I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.,这次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，Shavi也打动了其他人。Nina的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。“我听说过狗狗忠心耿耿

6、的故事，但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在，我也很难相信这只狗走了这么远的路来找我们，Nina说 ,“我再也不会放弃这祥的朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话一一动物是最志诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的 爱和关心。 .They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me? She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads o

7、f stuff on them satisfactorily, saying, Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live.”他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利:“你真的愿意和我一起过难的生活吗?她拍拍手上的骨灰，满意地看着 墙上挂满东西的墙，说“是的！对我来说，活着不是一种痛苦。”精彩收尾3：主题升华最后以升华主题结尾，起到总结全文的作用。从故事引出道理，由浅入深，这种写法更高级、更考验考生对短文的理 解能力和概括能力。 Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me

8、 there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱白勺辛采远影口向）每个人都有一个榜样。对我来

9、说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如 果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像我妈妈 一样伟大的父（母）亲。 .I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesnt equal happiness. And free life style also doesnt equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything u

10、seful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money cant take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness/表达自己的价值观）我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此相爱，为我 们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切

11、。在我看来，金钱不能代替一切，比如你 的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。 “Two reasons account for that you won, the teacher answered/Tirst, you*ve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes

12、 you win the match. As a proverb says, Every coin has two sides.1 Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.借用名言警句来升华主题）“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了，”老师回答。“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次，这个动作唯 一已知的防御方法，就是让你的对手抓住你

13、的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得比赛。正如谚语所说，每枚硬币都 有两面。充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下，你都不要放弃，尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每 个人都是公平的。”精彩收尾4：结尾留白这样的结尾引人入胜，给予读者很大的想象空间，更具有艺术性。 While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans? I explained that Fd like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital 一 ga

14、ve Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat? I asked. Td love to, she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口

15、气，问Joy： “你晚餐有安排吗？我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院让Grace和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗？ ”我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一 样闪闪发光。而且，这是我在Betsy死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。 The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now. With that, he unwr

16、apped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.（出于意料的结局,给人惊喜和回味）乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布： “谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是,里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。精彩收尾5

17、：首尾呼应首尾呼应的写法在语文写作中也经常使用，不仅能强调主题，引起共鸣，也能使文章结构更加紧密、严禁和自然。 2017年浙江高考题开头：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾： Despit

18、e moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom. 2018年浙江高考题开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾： Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip

19、to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind. 2016年浙江高考题开头： A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾： What a funny day. Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious （搞笑的）experience.2021年高考英语培优计划之思维型课堂13读后续写完形思维之合理设置结尾【思维路径】与开头一样，文章的结尾也是相

20、当重要的。成功的结尾，能使读者更深入、更透彻地理解文章内容，进一步领会文章的 主旨。精彩的结尾，能唤起读者的思考与共鸣，增强文章的感染力。一、结尾完形思维1:利用意外反转讽刺现实【典例赏析】项链（莫泊桑）小说以“项链”作为线索贯穿全文。主人公玛蒂尔德为了参加一个舞会，向朋友借了一条钻石项链。舞会上，她大出 风头，却乐极生悲，无意中丢掉了项链。为了赔偿，她整整十年拼命劳作，省吃俭用，不顾一切地还债。当债务终于还清，她却得知这条项链原来是假的。十九世纪八十年代的法国，政府贪污风行，唯利是图的道德观念影响到整个社会, 很多人贪慕上流社会的生活。小说通过这样一个巧妙设置的故事，尖锐讽刺了那种虚荣心和追

21、求享乐的思想，同时，对 受尽生活愚弄的主人公又寄寓了深切的同情。结尾部分：Madame Forestier had halted.You say you bought a diamond necklace to replace minc?,Yes. You hadnt noticed it? They were very much alike.And she smiled in proud and innocent happiness.Madame Forestier, deeply moved, took her two hands.“Oh, my poor Mathilde! But mi

22、ne was imitation. It was worth at the very most five hundred francs二、结尾完形思维2：利用意外反转传递深情厚谊【典例赏析】最后一片叶子（欧亨利）最后一片叶子（TheLastLeaf）是欧亨利短篇小说作品中具有代表性的一篇，亦采用小人物作为主角，歌颂伟大的人性关怀。小说中，青年画家 琼珊得了肺炎，她消极地认为当窗外墙上最后一片常春藤叶被吹落时，她的生命就会消逝。当楼下穷困而不得志的老“ 画家贝尔曼听到这件事后，冒着暴雨在墙上画出了一片永远不会凋落的常春藤叶，让琼珊重新燃起了生命的希望，自 己却因此染病去世。作者通过描写萍水相逢的

23、普通人之间的关怀，刻画了一个舍己为人的画家形象。在作者心中，美好 心灵造就的作品才是不朽的杰作。结尾部分：“I have something to tell you, white mouse, she said. Mr. Behrman died of pneumonia today in the hospital. He was ill only two days. The janitor found him the morning of the first day in his room downstairs helpless with pain. His shoes and clothi

24、ng were wet through and icy cold. They couldnt imagine where he had been on such a dreadful night. And then they found a lantern, still lighted, and a ladder that had been dragged from its place, and some scattered brushes, and a palette with green and yellow colors mixed on it, and 一 look out the w

25、indow, dear, at the last ivy leaf on the wall. Didnt you wonder why it never fluttered or moved when the wind blew? Ah, darling, its Behrmans masterpiece he painted it there the night that the last leaf“我有些话要告诉你，小丫头，”她说，“贝尔曼在医院里去世了。他害肺炎，只病了两天。头天早上，看门人在楼 下的房间里发现他痛得要命。他的鞋子和衣服都湿透了，冰凉冰凉的。谁也想不出，在那样可怕的夜里，

26、他去了什么地 方。后来，他们找到了一盏还燃着的灯笼，一把从别处拖来的梯子，还有几支散落的画笔，一块调色板，上面和了绿色 和黄色的颜料，还有一一看看窗外，亲爱的，看看墙上最后的一片叶子。你不是觉得纳闷，刮风的时候它为什么不飘不 动吗？啊，亲爱的，那是贝尔曼的杰作一一那晚最后一片叶子掉落时，他画在了墙上。”三、结尾完形思维3：利用蕴藏哲理再现悲剧情节【典例赏析1】品质（约翰高尔斯华绥）小说品质（Quality）以现代机器工业对传统手工业的冲击为背景。作者以第一人称的视角，讲述了鞋匠盖斯勒 兄弟在商业化大潮中仍然坚持自己的经营理念，用最好的皮料、最细致的手工打造完美皮靴的故事。盖斯勒兄弟一生都 在制

27、鞋，从不打广告，也不考虑能赚多少利润，却因为大公司对市场的侵蚀减少了生意，入不敷出，最终难以维持生计 直至被饿死。小说的结尾震撼人心，流露出了作者对传统手工业者的怀念与惋惜之情。作者用他细致入微的描写为我们 展现了残酷的社会现实，揭示了在这个适者生存的现代社会中理想与现实的矛盾。故事结尾：That may be a bit flowery, as the sayin is but I know myself he was sittin* over his boots day and night, to the very last. You see I used to watch him. Ne

28、ver gave imself time to eat; never had a penny in the house. All went in rent and leather. How he lived so long I dont know. He regular let his fire go out. He was a character. But he made good boots.”“Yes,” I said, he made good boots.”And I turned and went out quickly, for I did not want that youth

29、 to know that I could hardly see.“这样说也许有点儿夸张但是我自己知道，他从早到晚坐在那里做靴子，一直做到最后的时刻。你知道，我往 往在旁边看着他。他从不给自己吃饭的时间，店里连一块钱都没有，所有的钱都用在房租和皮革上了。他怎么能活到这 么久，连我也莫名其妙。他经常断粮。他是个怪人，但是他做的靴子都顶好。”“是的，”我说，“他做的靴子都顶好。”我随即立刻转身离开了，我不想让那个年轻人看到我已经模糊了的双眼。【典例赏析2】快乐王子（奥斯卡王尔德）快乐王子（TheHappyPrince）这一则文学作品继承了王尔德童话题材故事中的“牺牲”主题。王尔德擅长以最唯美的方式

30、表达毁灭与死亡。他 首先在故事中创造了两个人间芳物：美丽的小燕子与满身黄金、身嵌宝石的快乐王子。这两个角色本来生活在无忧无虑 的温柔乡中，觉得人间处处是阳光，却无意中发现真实的世界实际上充满了痛苦与不堪。在这样的落差之下，这两个生 命决定牺牲自己的美好，以解除芸芸众生的痛楚。最终，曾经最美丽华贵的生命残损破败，在垃圾堆中结束了自己的一 生。作者通过描写快乐王子身上颜色从金黄到灰色，地位从市中心广场高大的塑像到垃圾堆里的废物这一反差，描绘了 一幅凄凉的场景。而在童话末尾，作者笔锋一转，从人间上升到了上帝层面，以上帝的口吻赞颂了这两个外表丑陋，而 内在伟大的生命个体，反映了作者认为精神美高于形式美

31、的价值观。快乐王子的情节颇具佛教精神特色，与乔达摩 悉达多王子到世间去体验苦难，最终成佛的故事异曲同工，均深刻探讨了毁灭与重生的相互关系。该作品在童话题材 的包装下触及了人性与哲学问题，体现了作者深刻的文学思想。故事结尾：“What a strange thing! said the overseer of the workmen at the foundry, This broken lead heart will not melt in the furnace. We must throw it away. So they threw it on a dust-heap where the

32、 dead Swallow was also lying.“Bring me the two most precious things in the city,” said God to one of His Angels; and the Angel brought Him the leaden heart and the dead bird.You have rightly chosen, said God, ufbr in my garden of Paradise this little bird shall sing for evcnnorc, and in my city of g

33、old the Happy Prince shall praise me.,“多么稀奇的事！铸像厂的工头说，“这颗裂开的铅心在炉子里竟不能熔化。我们只能把它扔掉。”他们便把它扔到了垃 圾堆里，死去的燕子也躺在那儿。“把城市里最珍贵的两件东西拿给我，上帝对他的一位天使说。于是天使就把铅做的心和死去的鸟儿给上帝带了回 来。“你的选择对极了，上帝说，“因为在我这天堂的花园里，这只小鸟可以永远地放声歌唱，而在我那黄金城堡中， 快乐王子可以尽情地赞美我。”四、结尾完形思维4：利用自然发展烘托温馨浪漫【典例赏析1】小女孩（凯瑟琳曼斯菲尔德）Little小女孩（TheGirl）是一则讲述父女情的故事。在小女

34、孩凯齐娅的心中，爸爸是个威严、高大的人，她因此很怕他，与他说话的时候 支支吾吾。一次，她在奶奶的鼓励下为爸爸缝制生日礼物，无意中剪碎了他重要的演讲稿，让爸爸勃然大怒。凯齐娅很 伤心，想到隔壁麦克唐纳家慈祥的父亲，心中就隐隐作痛。直到有一天妈妈生病，家中只留下了凯齐娅和爸爸，她因为 害怕黑暗，做了噩梦，没想到平时不苟言笑的爸爸将她抱进了怀中，安慰她入睡。小女孩是一篇典型的曼斯菲尔德 作品，它截取日常的生活片段，刻画出其中细腻丰富的感情，读来令人心醉。故事结尾：Then the dark did not matter; she lay still. Here, rub your feet agai

35、nst my legs and get them warm,” said father.Tired out, he slept before the little girl. A funny feeling came over her. Poor father! Not so big, after all - and with no one to look after him. He was harder than the grandmother, but it was a nice hardness. And every day he had to work and was too tire

36、d to be a Mr. Macdonald. She had torn up all his beautiful writing. She stin*ed suddenly, and sighed.Whats the matter?, asked father.44Another dream?,“Oh,” said the little girl, my heads on your heart; I can hear it going. What a big heart youve got, father dear.”“来，把你的脚放在我腿上蹭蹭，这样能暖和些。”爸爸说。他困极了，比小女孩

37、先入睡。一种奇怪的感觉占据了她的头脑。可怜的爸爸呀！他其实不是那么高大，也没有人来照 看他。他是要比奶奶严厉些，但也不是不好。每天他都要去工作，太累了，不能像麦克唐纳先生那样。一想到自己将他 那些漂亮的文章都给扯碎了，她便一下子转过身子去，叹了 口气。“这是怎么了？爸爸问道，“又做梦了？“噢，”小女孩说，“我的头在你的胸口，我能听见你心跳的声音。我亲爱的爸爸，你的心可真大啊。”【结尾评析】小女孩将严父与女儿之间的爱写到了极致。凯瑟琳曼斯菲尔德从她的儿时生活中提取了大量素 材：她出身于有名望的家庭，父亲曾任职新西兰银行主席，被授予勋爵，在她儿时，父亲长期在外为公事忙碌，做公共 演讲是常有的事。可

38、能曼斯菲尔德笔下小女孩与父亲的微妙关系，便是她对自己儿时情况的真实记录。曼斯菲尔德善于描写女性细腻的情感，而几岁小女孩的动作心思也被她拿捏得准确到位。父亲在小女孩的心中常以 一个巨人的形象出现，这样的设定，不仅符合现实中小孩子心里父亲们普遍的高大形象，也表现出了父亲在主人公心中 的威严。在受到父亲责骂后，小女孩在没有开灯的房间里独自哭泣，连从百叶窗缝隙里透过来的光线看起来都像是一幅 悲伤的图画，许多少女在受到委屈后都有类似的体验吧！ 一句“这个世界上为什么要有爸爸呢”是小女孩在受到父亲责骂 以后最童真、最令人心痛的问话。作家萧乾说，读小女孩就像是“听一阕德彪西的音乐诗，感到淡淡的哀愁，又好 像

39、一只毛茸茸的爪子，在轻轻地挠着我的心。”相信众多读者的心也同样被小女孩的天真愁绪深深打动。【典例赏析2】画册的一页（凯瑟琳曼斯菲尔德）在小说画册的一页（FeuillecTAlbum）中，作者大量地使用了象征手法，勾勒出了一幅恬淡隽永的初恋水彩画卷，使小说充满了现代主义的气息。 作者熟练地运用意识流的手法描写少年的情窦初开：“他的心也从画室的侧窗跌了出去，落到了对面房子的阳台上 埋在了那盆花苞半开、绿叶似矛的水仙花花盆里了”，也让主人公想象两人在一起的时光：“她脾气暴躁，他们有时吵得 很厉害”，当他第一次要去见她时，感觉到“一切都笼罩在那可爱的粉红色的光晕中”。在作者的笔下，少年青涩的模样 生动

40、活泼、跃然纸上。该作品的文字基调基本是明快的，而其核心却是孤独、敏感的。主人公独自居住在楼顶，没有人能进入他的房间， 与他对话的就是自己的日记本。女孩也是孤独的，她和害病的母亲住在一起，每天都重复做着同样的活来维持生计。这 两个人都与巴黎的繁华与浮夸格格不入，少年之所以认为自己找到了伙伴，是因为他对于孤独的执着与偏爱。少年向女 孩表现自己爱慕的方式也十分含蓄，他只是跟随着她，到了最后才鼓起勇气递给了她一个鸡蛋。这是一种在现代社会中 可贵也可爱的含蓄。作者笔下处处透露着对孤独的偏爱，也表现了她不受大众审美的影响，孤独追求艺术理想的态度。 弗兰奇正是作者自我形象的写照。故事结尾：But now s

41、he was on her way home and he was as far off as ever.She suddenly turned into the dairy and he saw her through the window buying an egg. She picked it out of the basket with such care - a brown one, a beautifully shaped one, the one he would have chosen. And when she came out of the dairy he went in

42、 after her. In a moment he was out again, and following her past his house across the flower market, dodging among the huge umbrellas and treading on the fallen flowers and the round marks where the pots had stood.Through her door he crept, and up the stairs after, taking care to tread in time with

43、her so that she should not notice. Finally, she stopped on the landing, and took the key out of her purse. As she put it into the door he ran up and faced her.Blushing more crimson than ever, but looking at her severely he said, almost angrily: Excuse me, Mademoiselle, you dropped this/9And he hande

44、d her an egg.但是现在她已经在回家的路上，他还像先前那样离她那么远。她突然转身进入了乳品店，他隔着窗户看见她正在买 鸡蛋。她格外小心地从筐里挑选了一个出来一一一个棕色的、有着漂亮形状的鸡蛋，若是他，也会挑这个。当她走出乳 品店之后，他走了进去。随即他又走了出来，跟着她走过他的屋子，穿过了花市，避开一个个大伞，踏着掉落的花和花 盆留下的圆印。他悄悄地走进了她家大门，跟着她上楼，小心谨慎地选择恰当的时机跟随，让她不至于发觉。终于，她 在楼梯平台停了下来，从钱包里取出钥匙。就在她把钥匙插进房门的时候，他跑了上来，站在她面前。他的脸从来没有这样红过，但他严肃地看着她，近乎生气地说道：“抱歉

45、，小姐，你落下了这个。”他递给了她一个鸡蛋。五、结尾完形思维5：用平凡和伟大再现英雄和悲壮【典例赏析1】最后一课(阿尔封斯都德)小说最后一课(TheLastLesson)在表现普法战争这一主题时，并未正面描写战争的残酷场面，也没有突出普鲁士侵略者的骄横暴戾和法国人民 的英勇无畏，而是将视线聚焦到了阿尔萨斯省一个小镇的一堂普普通通的法语课上，以一个学龄孩子的感触，反映了法 国最普通的民众对自己国家深厚的情感。故事的主角并不是个出色的学生，他爱去田野里玩耍不爱去学校，上课也经常 开小差，觉得外面的世界比课堂有趣。但在普鲁士人的政令公布之后，这个调皮学生的心态在一点点地发生变化一一他 发现老师教的内

46、容竟然很容易听懂，并且还希望自己能有更多的时间学习得更加深入，他甚至还开始体贴地察言观色， 理解老师的良苦用心。文章在详细描述主人公的转变时，也带出了其他学生、甚至小镇居民们的转变满教室只听见 笔在纸上沙沙作响，不识字的老居民也摊开课本认真地学习拼写。作者通过截取主人公、学生和那些居民面对国家危难 的这一小片段，以小见大，展示了爱国精神在一个普通人心中引起的强烈化学反应，深刻地反映了法国上上下下的民众 在国难之际的面貌。故事结尾：Suddenly the church clock struck twelve. Then the Angelus. At the same moment the t

47、rumpets of the Prussians, returning from drill, sounded under our windows. M. Hamel stood up, very pale, in his chair. I never saw him look so tall. My friends, said he, my friends,. I.But something choked him; he could not finish the sentence. He returned to the blackboard, took a piece of chalk, a

48、nd wrote in large letters, “VIVE LA FRANCE.Then he stood leaning against the wall, unable to speak. He signed to us with his hand. The lesson is over. You arc dismisscd.,忽然，教堂的钟敲了十二下，祈祷的钟声也响了。普鲁士士兵的号声也从窗外传了进来他们也操练完了。韩麦尔 先生从椅子上站了起来，脸色苍白。我从没有觉得他这样高大。“我的朋友们，”他说，“我我.”但是他哽咽了，他没法说完那句话。他走到了黑板前，拿起了一支粉笔，写了几个

49、大字：“法兰西万岁。然后他靠墙站着，一句话也不说。他向我们做了一个手势：“放学了。你们走吧。”【典例赏析2】空中骑士(阿尔封斯都德)空中骑士(AHorsemanintheSky)讲述了美国南北战争时期发生的一个震撼人心的故事。主人公卡特德鲁斯出生于弗吉尼亚，父亲是富裕的农场主 ，他却因为与父亲政治观点不同而加入了北方联盟军。在一次值勤中，卡特发现一名南方军队的骑兵前来刺探军情，此 人竟然就是他的父亲，卡特在强烈的心理斗争之后，决定履行自己的职责，扣动了扳机，将父亲的坐骑打落山崖。作者 详细地描绘了复杂、险要的战争地形，运用内心独白和悬念设置等手法，剖析了主人公在职责与亲情之间的痛苦抉择， 使该

50、故事具有独特的艺术和思想魅力。卡特失去父亲后的冷静在读者的心中造成了强烈的震撼。作者没有正面描写主人 公的悲痛，只是寥寥几笔就勾勒出了在军人职责抑制之下那呼之欲出的丧亲之痛，使故事具有强烈的艺术性和巨大的感 染力。故事结尾：A horse. It was standing on yonder rock pretty far out. You see it is no longer there. It went over the cliff.”The mans face was white, but he showed no other sign of emotion. Having answe

51、red, he turned away his eyes and said no more. The sergeant did not understand.“See here, Druse,” he said, after a moments silence, its no use making a mystery, I order you to report. Was there anybody on the horse?,“Yes.”“Well?“My fathcr.,The sergeant rose to his feet and walked away. Good God! he

52、said.“一匹马。它站在山崖上，距离很远。你看，现在那匹马不在了，它跌下了山崖。他的脸色苍白，但除此以外，并没有表现出任何的情绪。答完话之后，他便转过脸去，不愿再说一句了。那中士有 些不明白。“听着，德鲁斯，”他沉默了片刻，说道：“没必要搞得神秘兮兮的。我命令你如实汇报。那马上面有人吗？ ”“有。”“谁？ ”“我的父亲。”中士站起身来，走开了。“我的天啊！他说。【语篇锤炼】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Daily Star, sir, called a thin boy with a bundle of papers under his arm. He was

53、 ragged, tired and hungry. Passing a well-dressed officer, he called again holding a paper up with his right hand, Daily Star, sir. Only eight taka, sir. sir . sir” but the officer went on without saying a word. Little Rafiq had been up and down the street crying, Daily SW until his voice was almost

54、 gone. There were still twenty papers under his arm. An unlucky day!” sighed Rafiq. The shops would soon close, and all the people would go home. He would have to go home too, carrying the papers instead of money. It was a hard job. He had hoped to sell more papers tonight than usual. He had longed

55、to have more money tonight to buy a cake for his mother and some seed for his favourite bird Bulbul which his father had given him shortly before he died. He knew his mother had worked hard all day cooking, washing and cleaning for Mrs. Zaman. He broke down as he thought of his failure to sell his p

56、apers. He had spent all the money that both he and his mother had to buy them. It was much more than he could bear.Hello, Rafiq. Havent you sold your papers yet? I sold mine two hours ago.Rafiq looked up. It was Sardul, another newsboy.“How many do you have left, Rafiq?”“Twenty.Why? Thats more than

57、a hundred sixty!”Yes, said Rafiq, And I cant sell them. Nobody wants papers tonight.” Tears began to flow from his deep black eyes.“Rafiq, said Sardul as he drew nearer to him so that no one would hear what he was going to say.Tll tell you how I did it.”“How? Do tell me.”You must run quickly up the

58、street and shout, Hot news, hot news. Bomb bursting in Rangpur. Many died. a trick of the trade.Rafiq was astonished, “But Sardul, that its not in the paper at all! Thats a“No, you softy, nobody will catch you. Just run away quickly before they have time to see, and you will sell out and get your money.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上