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1、书面表达怎么破?高考英语书面表达技巧2017年高考英语全国I卷书面表达依旧是书信的形式。试题并没有给出过多的限定成分,相反的是给了考生较大的发挥空间,让考生有事可想,有话可说,有文可写,体现出了极大的开放性,有深度,有思考度,重视了思维发散能力。一、真题启示特点:应用性、实用性非常强;设计具体化,生活化,情境化;体现学英语的目的是学以致用,体现了考试大纲的理念。因此,平时教学,重在务实,功在平时,巧在方法,实在训练。启示:语言的学习离不开文化,脱离文化这个背景来学习语言,只会事倍功半,效率极大下降。因此笔者认为在日常实际教学中,广大中学教师应当注重学生的外国文化教育和学生文化修养的提高。二、六
2、个步骤我们曾经把英语书面表达归纳为书面表达六步法:三、审题谋篇审题:审体裁、审人称、审时态。立意谋篇。例如:假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,词数100左右。 要点如下:1.栏目介绍; 2.稿件内容 3.稿件长度:约400字 4.交稿日期:6月28日前。谋篇:需要注意书信作文三段论,把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接,就能写出漂亮的文章。列出提纲:第一段:问候+写信背景(我校办杂志)+写信目的(套用十大书信之“求助信“写法)第二段:主题句+拓展句1(介绍外国生活)+拓展句2(介绍外国节日)+拓展句3(不少于400字)
3、+拓展句4(6.28前交)第三段:我希望(你能帮助我)。我相信(大家会喜欢你的文章)。感谢你(读我的信)。请回信。Dear Peter, How are you doing? Recently, our school newspaper will start a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests and enrich our after-school life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on
4、it. To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school.Besides, you can introduce a western festival,which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. Whats more, your article should be at least 400 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th
5、.Hopefully, you could do me the favor. Im looking forward to your reply and your article.从上面高考范文,不难看出文章:结构紧凑,层次清楚,过渡自然。因此,适度选用过渡词语不仅能够丰富句型,而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚,意义更连贯。四、高分策略1.使用高级句式。例如:道歉信你是李华,前天是你的英语朋友Anne的生日,但你忘了赴约。请你给Anne写封信,要点包括:1.说明原因;2.表达歉意;3.补救的办法。参考范文:Dear Anne,I am sorry to say that I didnt attend
6、 your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel sorry about it and want to apologize to you.It was very nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come , but a sudden stomachache struck my grandmother last week.So worried was I that I took her to the nearest hospital withou
7、t delay. As you know, my parents worked in a faraway place, so I had to look after her all by myself.There was no doubt thatI wasso busy thatI forgot the appointment at all. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting next Saturday.
8、I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Best wishes to you.2.巧用连接词语。例如:倡议书随着车辆的增加,道路安全问题变得越来越严重。你是学生会主席李华,请给校报英语专栏写篇稿件。内容要点包括:1.列举道路上的交通违规现象;2.分析违反交通规则的后果;3.发出几点倡议。参考范文:Dear boys and girls,Im Li Hua, chairman of the students union. Id like to call your at
9、tention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules.Without doubt traffic problems become more serious .On the one hand,some people run the red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway.On the other hand, some drivers drive too fast in the street. All these behaviors result
10、 in potential danger.Whats worse, there may be more traffic jams and accidents, or even it will kill people.I suggest that all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street.At the same time, it is necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education. Lets take responsibili
11、ty for ourselves and others.3.传递正能量。例如:一封信你是李华,你所在的学校开展了一次地震演练活动,期间发生了一件很感人的事,请给你的朋友John写封信,告知此事,内容包括:1.组织演练的目的;2.演练的过程;3.演练后的感受。参考范文:Dear John,In order to let the teachers and students of our school have a good knowledge of the earthquake and learn something about earthquake emergency measures, our
12、 school held an earthquake drill on Thursday afternoon.After the signal of the earthquake went off, the students were quickly and orderly running out of the teaching building when a student who had been injured in the leg when playing basketball fell down on the stairs. Without hesitation, the other
13、 students around him helped him up immediately and one of the students carried him on the back running to the safety place in order to avoid being knocked down.What a meaningful and unforgettable drill it is, from which I benefit a lot.Not only does it make me master some useful safety skills, but a
14、lso I feel happy to see the students helping each other in an emergency. It is the students behavior that impresses me most.一篇文章好比一幢大厦,只有用严谨的结构做支撑,用丰富的内容做砖块,用精彩的语言做装饰,才能筑造出世界上最壮丽的建筑。只要平时多积累,多练习,就不难能做到“下笔如有神,滔滔不绝言”了。高中英语写作掌握这七原则,不得高分才怪!一长短句原则工作还得一张一弛呢,老让阅卷老师读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短
15、句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群
16、形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二 主题句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!隐藏主题句可是要冒险的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
17、you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三 一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。阅卷老师们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)3)the first, the second,
18、 the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, fin
19、ally9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四 短语优先原则写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I ca
20、nnot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五多实少虚原则原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted之类的形象词。再比如:走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room但是小
21、偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六 多变句式原则1.加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子有先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以
22、用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2.转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm
23、.更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite3.因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a resu
24、lt, for this reason, so that4.失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.5.附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插
25、入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中。6.排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个的对偶句,一个个的不定式
26、,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge
27、 our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七挑战极限原则既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Afr
28、ica is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.这39个高分词,让你的英语作文轻松20+ 大多数同学在进行英语写作时用的一般都是左边的词,如果能尝试用右边的高级词汇,你的英语写作必会增色不少。还没进行期末考试的同学,可以试试哦!1. want(想) intend to2. famous(著名的)well-known;outstanding3. important(重要的) crucial;significant;essential4. remember(记得)bear in
29、mind that5. cause(导致)contribute to;give rise to;lead to;result in6. helpful(有用的)beneficial; rewarding7. many(许多)numerous;a number of; quite a few8. beautiful(美丽的) attractive;eye-catching;appealing;charming9. improve(提高)enhance;promote;strengthen10. finish (完成) complete;fulfill;accomplish;achieve11. serious(严重的)severe12. develop (发展,培养)cultivate;nurtur
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