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1、专题复习：专题复习：书面表达训练之一书面表达训练之一如何使句子优美如何使句子优美鸦滩中学鸦滩中学词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语法多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇3. 有效地使用了语句间的连有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体语言得体要要点点全全连连接接词词语言地道，语言地道，规范规范句式多变化句式多变化作文更优美作文更优美怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义怎样通过对句子结构的变化怎样通过对句子结构的变化

2、,使文章显得使文章显得更加丰富多彩更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？1.What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all. = surprised me he didnt know me at all.= , he didnt know me at all. ItthatTo my great surprise2.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know

3、_ _ _ next. 3.Hurry up, or youll miss the train. =You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.what to do if dont unless4.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic

4、jam . lead to result in 5.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多(一句多译)1) _ _ 2)_Although/ Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。1)_2)_3)_4)_This book was so interesting that I read it again and again. This was such an inter

5、esting book that I read it again and again.So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom.= The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的复合结构) The t

6、eacher came into the classroom, _ _ _.（用独立结构）with a book in his hand book in hand1.把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.A. 合并为简单句合并为简单句2. 把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his

7、 back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并为复合句合并为复合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing ve

8、ry fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant With the development of so that Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays,

9、 Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.C. 把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.1. 把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语C. 把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句2. 把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语I i

10、nsisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等合句、分词状语等. Though he is wealthy, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth,he works hard.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句

11、、强调句、主从复要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等合句、分词状语等. He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.On arriving at the village，we were warmly. The moment we arrived at the

12、village, we wereWe were warmly welcomed by thevillagers immediately we arrived at the village.No sooner had we arrived at the village than we Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.句子开头的变化句子开头的变化1. The boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldnt say a word.= _ _ what he

13、had seen, the boy stood there , _ _ _ a word. (形容词做状语形容词做状语) Surprised atunable to say2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out. = _not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake.(强调句型）强调句型） = _you pointed it out _my mistake.（倒装句）（倒装句）Not untildid I realizeIt wasthat3You are sure to

14、 succeed by working hard.=_ sure to succeed. (only +状语提前状语提前)4. We all know that he is honest.= _ (It做形式主语做形式主语)= .(as引引导的非限制性定语从句导的非限制性定语从句) It is known to us all that he is honest.As is known to all , he is honest Only by working hard are you 5. I passed the physics exam with your help.1).I passed

15、 the exam _ _your help 2).I couldnt have passed the physics exam _ _our help. 3).I couldnt have passed the physics your exam _help. thanks tobut forwithout 1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park should be _ _ _.2. The railway in our county is being built.The railway

16、 in our county is _ _. free of charge under constructionusing complicated / advanced wordsusing complicated / advanced words注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。一些单词，以增加文采。 3. We think the meeting is very important .= We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _.4.The result is not satisfying at

17、all.=The result is _ _ satisfying hold the view of great importancefar from Dont worry about your expensesfor university education, and we will try to help you. and we will make the greatesteffort /do our best / try every meansto help you.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.

18、At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.I came up with a good idea.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful, since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some

19、other people argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes.欣 赏 一 下欣 赏 一 下Ladies and gentlemen, Welcom

20、e to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 书面表达书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small