2020南京高三三模英语作文指导与解读：勇士的理解

1、2020南京高三三模英语作文指导与解读：勇士的理解南京三模的作文题非常接地气，将课标主题（人与社会）和时政结合在一起了, 不落俗套。新时代的勇士是怎样的定义？这个话题有很多可写的，一定要选好点。勇士在我看来有两个要求：对自己，要求敢于拥抱未知，走出舒适区；对社会，要承担责任，排除万难，有亮剑精神。这就是一分为二分析话题。写这篇文章的时候，我想到了两个：1 .马斯克说的：我嚼着玻璃，凝视深渊。2 .最美的逆行者题目请阅读下面材料，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。DdaughterMmommyD: “ Mommy, are you leaving home again? ”M: “Yes

2、, honey. Mommy is going to fight a monster!”D:“A monster? Is it scarier than a big roaring tiger? Oh my!”M: “WellyesA lot scarier! It 'called Virus. Many people are working hard to defeat the monster. ”D: “ Who are they? ”D:M: " They' re the scientists who are working on new medicines t

3、o cure the ill and the construction workers who are building new hospitals for patients as fast as possible. They are the delivery people who are delivering masks to everyone in need, risking being caught by the virus monsters, too. They are all ordinary people, including volunteers, but now they ar

4、e also powerful soldiers; they are the bravest fighters and they are heroes!They are so braveut mommy, are you scared?M: “ Yes, everyone is scared. Mommy ' s too. But if no one goes to fight the monster, there will be more monsters, and the monsters will be even more aggressive, and they may def

5、eat us all. ”D: “But mommyI don ' t want you to leave me. ”M: “ Baby, mommy doesn ' t want to leave you either. Sweetie, do you know what be brave " means? To be brave is to do the right thing even if you are really scared.D: “ Mommy. I ' ll be brave, too. I want to be a doctor when

6、 I grow up, and I wglh fi the monsters together with you.”写作内容1 .用约30个单词概述上述对话内容；2 .谈谈你对“勇士”的理解；3 .写出谁是你心目中的“勇士”，并简要陈述理由(至少两点)旨导|概要部分：Summary:事情+反馈事情： mother, explain, bravery, daughter反馈：女儿的愿望正文：谈谈你对“勇士”的理解：一分为二，即对自己的要求(挑战comfort zone, overdifficulty );对社会的责任(shoulder responsibility)心目中的“勇士” ：医生，因为

7、符合上面的勇士的定义，即：钻研疫苗；冒着风险救他人全文如下：A mother explains bravery to her daughter by her fighting the virus monsters like other ordinary heroes, which inspires the girl to follow suit (效仿)after growing up. (27 wds)The brave, in my eyes, should possess the following qualities. For one thing, they dare to chall

8、enge their comfort zone and embrace setbacks instead of being contentedwith the status quo.（主题句中用对比手法 instead of，这样让句子的内涵度更多）A striking exampleis Elon Musk, who claimed that he was chewing the glass and staring into the abyss to fullfil his goals.（举例法，同时用到了马斯克的名言） For another, the brave never cower

9、but shoulder due responsibility whatever the risks.（并没有展开，因为放在末段了）Personally, doctors deserve the honor of brave heroes. First, threatened by virus, they stick to fight in the front line to save the patients. Besides, they becomea beacon of hope in pursuit of vaccine, breathing confidence into those

10、 locked home.（造句用到了比喻 修辞，同时用in.of来简化句子，建议同学们多用介词短语） In a word, the brave are the counter-marching people.（最美的逆行者） We don' t know who they are but we know who they are for. （130wds）感悟冲刺阶段写作文，要在造句上下点功夫，我的经验是：过于复杂的复合句尽可 能少一些，因为熟练地驾驭长难句的能力是大部分中学生不具备的，建议用介词短 语来代替，即：主干部分+介词短语（in of短语；by doing; instead

11、 of ；rather than 复合句基本就是一个简单的 which ,非谓语动词也就是一个。我认为这些足够了， 关键是用词上多锤炼一下，四种修辞：反问句；比喻句；对比句；虚拟句（otherwise,would have done）。至于倒装句和强调句不要太俗套，譬如only in this way can we这种没啥意思的。官方范文A mother explains to her daughter why she leaves home to fight against the virus monsters like ordinary heroes, sparking her ambit

12、ion to fight like a soldier. (27 words)Personally, heroes refer to people from all walks of life who perform their duties faithfully whatever the situations. They play an irreplaceable role in any critical moment. Dangerous and urgent scenes can bring out their best, such as courage, responsibility

13、and commitment.Heroes in my heart are my teachers. After the outbreak of the virus, they rise to the challenge of live streaming lectures and grading assignments online. Not only do they have to adapt themselves to the new teaching model but they make enormous sacrifices as well. Besides, serving as

14、 the essential role of imparting knowledge to their students, they offer immediate assistance in terms of mental relief and comfort.To conclude, those who do their own parts whole-heartedly deserve our credit and admiration. (125 words)提示：建议大家多记几句马斯克的名言，因为这个人不同于其他名人，最近的火箭发 射又成功了，他作为典型的敢于拼搏、创新，还有对人类命

15、运的使命感等优秀品质， 可以作为很好的例子：1. 'If something is important enough, even if the odds are against you, you should stilldo it.如果一件事情对你很重要，即使成功的概率很小，你也应该去做2. '(Physics is) a good framework for thinking. . Boil things down to their fundamental truths and reason up from there.物理是思想的框架。追索到事情的本质，再从那里思考下去3.

16、 'The first step is to establish that something is possible; then probability willoccur.只有首先看到事情的可能性，才会有发生的机会4. 'It's OK to have your eggs in one basket as long as you control what happens to thatbasket.'只要你能左右一颗树的未来，那么你是可以在那棵树上吊死的5. 'Persistence is very important. You should not

17、 give up unless you are forced to giveup.坚持很重要，永远不要放弃，除非不得已6. 'You want to have a future where you're expecting things to be better, not one where you're expecting things to be worse.'每个人都幻想将来会更好，而不是更糟7. 'It is a mistake to hire huge numbers of people to get a complicated job don

18、e. Numbers will never compensate for talent in getting the right answer (two people who don't knowsomething are no better than one), will tend to slow down progress, and will make the taskincredibly expensive.雇佣许多人去做一件复杂的事，往往是错误的。数量永远不如质量(三个臭皮匠不一定比一个诸葛亮强)，人多降低效率，增加成本。9. 'If you go back a few

19、 hundred years, what we take for granted today would seem likemagic being able to talk to people over long distances, to transmit images, flying,accessing vast amounts of data like an oracle. These are all things that would have beenconsidered magic a few hundred years ago.'其实我们现在拥有的一切，在几百年前都是不可

20、思议的魔术奇迹10. 'My biggest mistake is probably weighing too much on someone's talent and not someone's personality. I think it matters whether someone has a good heart.'我犯下的最大错误是过度看中人的才能而不是人品。我认为拥有一颗善良的心至关重要。11. 'When I was in college, I wanted to be involved in things that would cha

21、nge the world. Now I am. 我在大学的时候，一直想参与做能够改变世界的事情。而现在我就在做这样的事情12. 'I think it's very important to have a feedback loop, where you're constantly thinking about what you've done and how you could be doing it better. I think that's the single best piece of advice: constantly think ab

22、out how you could be doing things better and questioning yourself.' 我认为循环反馈很重要，这样你可以及时知道自己做得怎么样，是否可以做得更好。最 好的忠告是：重复问自己，我是否可以做得更好 ？13. 'I wouldn't say I have a lack of fear. In fact, I'd like my fear emotion to be less because it's very distracting and fries my nervous system.'我不敢说自己从未担心害怕过。实际上我希望少一点担心害怕，因为它让我分心，使我焦虑14. 'Life is too short for long-term grudges.'生命太短暂，它无法承受无休止的恩恩怨怨15. 'Don't be afraid of new arenas.'不要害怕新的竞技场16. 'I think it is possible for ordinary people to choose to be extraord