高三英语基础写作高级教学设计

1、1. 覆盖所有的语言要点覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2. 应用应用词汇词汇和和语法结构语法结构的数量和准确性的数量和准确性。值得。值得注意的是注意的是 语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较但为尽力使用较复杂复杂结构或较结构或较高级高级词汇所致词汇所致; 具有较强的语言运用能力具有较强的语言运用能力。 1 汉语式英语汉语式英语 2 句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙 3 无过渡语无过渡语1如何在写作中避免句式单一如何在写作中避免句式单一Rewrit

2、e the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the s

3、chool, they felt the happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法一方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动非谓语动词词)1. 听到这个消息听到这个消息,他们变的很激动他们变的很激动. _the new

4、s, they got excited.2. 尽管被告知许多遍尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错他仍然重复这个错. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词非谓语动词)1

5、,1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。面对困难时，他从不放弃。2 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3 3，做完作业后，他回家了，做完作业后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.巧用非谓语动词，巧用非谓语动词，定语从句于基础写定语从句于基础写作作5个句子中！个句子中！I recently d

6、id a survey among my classmates about their views on the new English textbooksl.l1)According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% dislike it and 5% had no opinion.l2)Students said the texts with the pictures are very attractive, 多用定语从句！多用定语从句！l3) Moreover, the bo

7、ok is very interesting, many hot topics and lots of cultural knowledge of the world.l4)However, students who dislike it complained that there are too many new words and difficult sentences, l5) In conclusion, the new English textbook l1.我们的产品用夏季轻型棉料制成我们的产品用夏季轻型棉料制成,专门专门为儿童而设为儿童而设.l2. 在漫长的夏日里在漫长的夏日里,

8、活泼的小朋友活泼的小朋友穿上穿上登山裤登山裤玩耍玩耍,清凉舒适清凉舒适.( 这句话要变成英这句话要变成英文的顺序文的顺序)lIt is + 形容词形容词 for sb to do sth.l3.我们有两种颜色我们有两种颜色,黑色和卡其色黑色和卡其色(给你给你们选择们选择)l4.每条裤子卖价是每条裤子卖价是50元元,有大有大,中中,小码小码.l5.如果你们有疑问如果你们有疑问,请打客服中心热请打客服中心热线线l1.我们的产品用夏季轻型棉料制成我们的产品用夏季轻型棉料制成,专门专门为儿童而设为儿童而设lOur product which is made from sum

9、mer lightweight cotton, is specially designed for children.l2. 在漫长的夏日里在漫长的夏日里,活泼的小朋友活泼的小朋友穿上穿上登登山裤山裤玩耍玩耍,清凉舒适清凉舒适.( 这句话要变成英文这句话要变成英文的顺序的顺序)l2.In the long summer days, it is cool and comfortable for active children to play in our pants.l3.我们有两种颜色我们有两种颜色,黑色和卡其色黑色和卡其色(给你们选择给你们选择)3. We have 2 colours, b

10、lack and Khaki for you to choose from.l4.每条裤子卖价是每条裤子卖价是50元元,有大有大,中中,小码小码.l4. Each pair is sold at 50 Yuan with small, medium, large childrens sizes.l5.如果你们有疑问如果你们有疑问,请打客服中心热线请打客服中心热线If you have any questions, please dial our Customer Service Centre Hotline:方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增

11、强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete th

12、e sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒倒装句装句)1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事他从不说关于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我们每个

13、人都意识到水的重要性只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好我们才能生活得更好. 3.只有用这种方式只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习我们才能有足够的精力好好学习.Never did he speak about his own family.Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒

14、装结构增强句子的表现力4. Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句倒装句)Poor as/though he was, he was happy.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力5.5. 他是个孩子，却知道很多。他是个孩子，却知道很多。6.6. 墙上有个通知，上面写着墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水请节约用水”.Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”

15、. 方法三方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式一一就受到欢迎就受到欢迎方法三方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._ which_With the development of _ _so _ that_In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples li

16、ves convenient, pleasant Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.l今年北京等大城市把禁止放鞭炮今年北京等大城市把禁止放鞭炮改为限放。新浪网做了一个调查，改为限放。新浪网做了一个调查，请根据下面表格提示阐明燃放鞭请根据下面表格提示阐明燃放鞭炮

17、这一社会现象的利弊。炮这一社会现象的利弊。基础写作训练：基础写作训练：基础写作基础写作-社会现象社会现象 80.16% 19.84燃放鞭炮是很好的民间燃放鞭炮是很好的民间传统传统能够增加节日气氛能够增加节日气氛制造噪音，引起事故，制造噪音，引起事故，对人身财产造成对人身财产造成损失。损失。资源浪费和环境污染资源浪费和环境污染l1.有有80.16% 的人赞成用传统方式庆祝新年的人赞成用传统方式庆祝新年lThere are of people who .l2.他们认为燃放鞭炮能够增加节日气氛他们认为燃放鞭炮能够增加节日气氛Setting off fireworks can add .to . l3

18、.19.84的人认为燃放鞭炮能够引起环境和噪的人认为燃放鞭炮能够引起环境和噪音污染音污染.l19.84% of people think that setting off fireworks can causel4.燃放鞭炮有时能够引起事故，对人身财产造燃放鞭炮有时能够引起事故，对人身财产造成损失。成损失。lSetting fireworks sometimes causes .l5.很多人每年都因为燃放鞭炮时大意而受伤。很多人每年都因为燃放鞭炮时大意而受伤。lIt is common that many people get injured by lThere are 80.16% of p

19、eople who support our Chinese traditional way to celebrate China New Year.lThey think setting off fireworks can certainly add pleasure and joy to the festival and it can bring more traditional colours in the modern era.l19% of people think that setting off fireworks can cause noise pollution and env

20、ironmental pollution.l4) Setting fireworks sometimes causes terrible accidents , which adds to our poverty/ causes a great loss to our possesion.l5) It is very common that every year many people get injured by setting off the fireworks carelessly.2.高三的学生是否需要吃补品来保持健康进高三的学生是否需要吃补品来保持健康进行讨论，并根据下列的提示，谈谈

21、同学的观行讨论，并根据下列的提示，谈谈同学的观点点不赞同的同学不赞同的同学赞同的同学赞同的同学1.坚持锻炼，不需要吃坚持锻炼，不需要吃补品。补品。2. 家长用补品过分关注家长用补品过分关注高三考生的健康，会在高三考生的健康，会在一定程度上带给孩子压一定程度上带给孩子压力。力。3. 价格比较昂贵价格比较昂贵1.高三学生学习紧张，高三学生学习紧张，容易感到疲劳容易感到疲劳2.补品可以帮助恢复补品可以帮助恢复 体力体力3.没有时间锻炼没有时间锻炼lWith the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated debate about whether

22、 Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep it.lThere are different opinions about it.l.lSome students think it unnecessary to take tonics, because tonics will make them put on more weight, lMoreover, the parents will bring more stress to the Senior 3 students if they show too much concer

23、n by offering the tonics.lAs we know, the price of tonics is rather high.lHowever, some students hold the opinion that it is easy for the Senior 3 students to feel tired because of their work load, so it is good to take some tonics. lThey are too busy to have sports, so tonics can help refresh them.

24、Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve recently had about whether we should know our parents income.We do have different opinions on this matter.l1.Most of us(about 70%) think we should know our parents income since it will help us understand how hard our parents have to work,

25、 no matter how much they earn. l2.Then we will study harder and will not waste money any more and we may also learn to share our parents trouble.l3.About 30% of my classmates think it unnecessary to let the children know how much their parents earn.l4.If they know their parents have enough money to

26、support the family, they will not study hard since they neednt worry about the future.l 5.It is said，especially when their parents have a higher income, the children will easily form a wasteful habit.l为庆祝母亲节，你班开展了为庆祝母亲节，你班开展了“尊敬父母尊敬父母”的主题班会活动，请的主题班会活动，请根据下面内容为中学生英语报写一篇简要的英文报道。根据下面内容为中学生英语报写一篇简要的英文报道

27、。宗旨宗旨让每位学生都理解父母，尊敬父母。让每位学生都理解父母，尊敬父母。现象现象大多数同学是独生子女，只看重自己不顾及父大多数同学是独生子女，只看重自己不顾及父母。母。要求要求1.送一份自制的礼物给父母。送一份自制的礼物给父母。2. 记住父母的生日，并表达祝愿记住父母的生日，并表达祝愿3. 父母下班回家时主动打招呼。父母下班回家时主动打招呼。4. 离家出门前向父母告知去向离家出门前向父母告知去向效果效果1.受到班主任的表扬受到班主任的表扬2. 同学们增强了尊敬父母的意识同学们增强了尊敬父母的意识l1.To celebrate Mothers Day, we had a class meeti

28、ng aiming to let everyone respect and consider their parents/ with the theme of showing respect to parents.l2. As most of us are the only child, we often regard ourselves as the center of the family without caring about others.l3. So, all the students are advised to remember their birthday and give

29、gifts to parents made by ourselves .l4. Besides, we should say hi when they return home and tell them where we will go when we leave home.l5. After the meeting, we were thought highly of by our headteacher and we enhanced the awareness of respecting our parents.高三课堂限时基础写作高三课堂限时基础写作2011年年8月月l第四部分第四部分

30、 写作（共两节，满分为写作（共两节，满分为40分）分）l第一节：基础写作（第一节：基础写作（15分）汕头分）汕头l假设你叫李华，假设你叫李华， 上周，你对全校上周，你对全校1200名学生中进行了一次名学生中进行了一次“上上网目的网目的”的调查的调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：。以下是调查数据：上网目的上网目的男生男生女生女生看新闻看新闻35%30%发电子邮件发电子邮件28% 27%聊天聊天11%45%学习学习23%23%玩游戏玩游戏60%21%l写作内容写作内容l根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：l 1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；l 2男女生上网

31、玩游戏的差异；男女生上网玩游戏的差异； l 3男女生在以聊天为目的方面的差异；男女生在以聊天为目的方面的差异；l 4男女生上网学习及发邮件方面的情况；男女生上网学习及发邮件方面的情况；l 5你上网的目的及理由。你上网的目的及理由。l写作要求写作要求l 1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；l 2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。lLast week, I made a survey among 1200 students in my school about the purpose of surfing the internet .lThe survey shows that 60% of the b

32、oys like playing games on the internet while only 21% of the girls like it.l Besides, “chatting” ranks the last for the boys, but the first for the girls. lHowever, the percentage of the boys using the internet to study is 23%, the same as that of the girls, and sending e-mails on the internet is al

33、so popular with boys and girls. lAs for myself,l第一节第一节 基础写作基础写作 （共（共1小题，满分小题，满分15分）分）l请根据以下表格内容，以A Big Forest Fire 为题，使用5个规范的英语句子写一篇英文简讯。起火时间起火时间2007年年4月初月初地点地点中国东北部中国东北部起火原因起火原因一青年工人吸烟一青年工人吸烟持续时间持续时间约一个月约一个月参加救灾人员参加救灾人员数千名解放军战士数千名解放军战士与当地群众与当地群众死亡人员死亡人员约约200人人经济损失经济损失至少一千万元至少一千万元影响影响全国震惊全国震惊l A Big

34、 Forest Firel A big forest fire broke out in the northeast of China in the early April. lIt is said that the reason for the big fire was that a young worker smoked carelessly in the forest. lAs the big fire lasted about a month, several thousand soldiers and local people joined in the fight against

35、it .l200 people died in the fire, which caused a loss of at least ten million yuan. lAs a result, the whole nation was shocked by it and was thinking of the lesson of this damage.l整合信息，定出整合信息，定出5个句子个句子l1。地震袭击四川汶川并引起重大损失。地震袭击四川汶川并引起重大损失。lEarthquake hit/ struck/ happened in .,which caused a great loss

36、.l2.电力和公路都被中断，交通瘫痪。电力和公路都被中断，交通瘫痪。 lElectricity and roads were cut off ,so the traffic was paralyzed.l3. 近七万人死亡，受灾人数达到近七万人死亡，受灾人数达到4千万千万lNearly 70,000 people were killed and the number of people who suffered from the disaster was up to 400,000.l4.灾区的人们急需救助，你的捐款无论多灾区的人们急需救助，你的捐款无论多少都是感激不尽的。少都是感激不尽的。

37、lThe people suffering from the earthquake need your help badly, so you donation will be appreciated.l5.请大家在下周一之前把捐款交给班长请大家在下周一之前把捐款交给班长.lPlease hand in your donation to me before next Mondayl第一节： 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）l 请根据以下要点请根据以下要点,使用使用5个规范的英语句子描述个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。全部所给的信息内容。拥有健康的体魄非常重要；拥有健康的体魄非常重要；要每

38、天坚持做大量的户外运动；要每天坚持做大量的户外运动；人人都要根据自己所需，选择适合自己的运人人都要根据自己所需，选择适合自己的运动项目；动项目；要拥有健康的身体必须食用健康食物及养成要拥有健康的身体必须食用健康食物及养成健康的生活方式；健康的生活方式；现在越来越多的人明白到只有保持身体健康，现在越来越多的人明白到只有保持身体健康，才能过上幸福的生活。才能过上幸福的生活。l标题：标题：How to Keep Fit只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部个句子表达全部内容。内容。l How to Keep Fitl As we all know, good health is very importan

39、t to us, but it is not easy to keep healthy and fit.lWe must take plenty of outdoor exercise everyday walking, running, swimming, climbing, and ball games, etc. lAccording to their needs, different people may choose different events.l In addition, we should eat healthy foodless meat and more fruit a

40、nd vegetables, and try to get into the habit of living in a healthy way. lNow more and more people realize that we can live a happy life only when we enjoy good health.比赛时间 2007年7月18日至23日。比赛地点 德国风景迷人的小镇Wernigerode。参赛队伍 18个国家的46支不同类别的合唱团。比赛结果 校合唱团共参加了两个组别的比赛，且都获得了第一名。而且在所有组别第一名参加的总决赛上，也获得了第一名。其它比赛结束后

41、，被邀请到周边的小镇进行了演出。l参考词汇：校合唱团 school choir 第五届勃拉姆斯国际合唱节the 5th International Johannes-Brahms Choir Festival & Competition 组别category l写作内容写作内容l假如你是校合唱团的一名成员，请给某报社写一篇英文报道，讲述此次比赛的情况。lOur school choir, led by four teachers, participated in the 5th International Johannes-Brahms Choir Festival & Com

42、petition held in a beautiful small German town Wernigerode from July 18 to 23, 2007. lAltogether 46 choirs with different styles and age groups from 18 countries took part.l Our school choir won the first prize for both categories we competed in.l Whats more, we took the first place in the competiti

43、on held for all the category winners.lAfter the competition was over, we were invited to give performances in the neighboring towns. l假定你是李华假定你是李华,David是你的美国笔友，他是你的美国笔友，他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：要内容如下：l1.感谢他关注感谢他关注l2. 简要介绍相关情况简要介绍相关情况l3. 谈谈你的感想谈谈你

44、的感想l参考词汇：参考词汇：environment-friendly shopping bags 关注：关注：concernl根据内容要点，适当增加细节，行文连贯根据内容要点，适当增加细节，行文连贯l3.假定你是李明，去年时期曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一假定你是李明，去年时期曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访向，住在所中学进行短期参观访向，住在Peter家。今年寒假家。今年寒假Peter要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电发个电邮件。邮件。 内容内容到京到京到机场接机，举办欢迎家宴到机场接机，举办欢迎家宴活动活动参观长城等名胜古

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