九年级英语写作基础讲解人教朗文版知识精讲

1、用心 爱心 专心九年级英语九年级英语写作基础讲解写作基础讲解人教朗文版人教朗文版【本讲教育信息本讲教育信息】一. 教学内容： 写作基础讲解Why do you write a composition?/ Whats the purpose of writing?What steps will you take when writing an English composition?How to organize the information.掌握如何写好篇章的技巧：（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分（Opening paragraphs）说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Body p

2、aragraphs）围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（Concluding paragraphs）对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。 （2）确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： 1）归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 2）提炼出一句具有概括性的话 3）主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。（3）巧用连接词连接上下文的关键 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接

3、词 下面请你认真学习并学会运用下列常见连接词 表示罗列增加表示罗列增加 first, second, third, first, then / next, after that / next, finally for one thing for another, on (the) one handon the other hand, besides / whats more / in addition / further / more / moreover / another / also, especially / In particular, 表示时间顺序表示时间顺序 now, at pr

4、esent, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment from now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, notuntil,

5、before, after, when, while, as during,用心 爱心 专心 表示解释说明表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover further more, in fact, actually 表示转折关系表示转折关系 but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though,

6、 except (for), instead, of course, after all. 表示并列关系表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only but also, as well as, both and, either or, neither nor 表示因果关系表示因果关系 because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to, due to, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, sothat, suchthat 表示条件关系表示条件关系 as (so) long

7、as, on condition that, if, unless 表示让步关系表示让步关系 though, although, as, even if, even though, whether or, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom) 表示举例表示举例 for example, for instance, such as, take for example 表示比较表示比较 be similar to,

8、similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to), just like, just as. 表示目的表示目的 for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to. 表示强调表示强调 in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all. 表示概括归纳表示概括归纳 in a word, in short, in brief,

9、 on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know, as I has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion,【模拟试题模拟试题】（一）根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数 6070 左右。 1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。 2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。3、他向我询问去温泉饭店（theHotSpringHotel）的路。

10、4、我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。5、他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）写作指导：根据提示我们了解到这是一篇记叙文，所以考生应马上想到时间（yesterday evening） ，地点（on the road） ，人物（I, my mother and a foreigner） ，事件（howto show the way） 。其次观察信息点，我们确定这篇文章应

11、用过去式来表达。然后，确定这用心 爱心 专心个事件应用第一人称来叙述。最后，按照信息点合理组织文章，别忘用上提示词语。 （二）你收到一封咨询信，请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务。Dear Ace Travel, Im Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but al

12、so interesting. We dont mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots? Thanks a

13、lot.Yours, Li Ming请你根据来信，从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合 Li Ming 要求的地方，向他提出建议。（80 字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai写作指导：这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首先，我们要读懂英语提示的内容，也就是那封咨询信的内容。其次，我们要知道书信的写作方法。针对本道题，还要注意，这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的。最后，还要注意咨询信后的要求-从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合 Li Ming 要求的地方，向他提出建议及字数限制。用心 爱心 专心【试题答案试题答案】（一） Yesterday eve

14、ning,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.（二）One Pos

15、sible version: Dear Li Ming, Im Gina. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. Whats more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day. Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （Its also a wo