翻译禁区：英语翻译中的“八戒”

1、翻译禁区：英语翻译中的“八戒”由于历史和文化上的差异，汉英词语之间存在着或显或隐的翻译上的陷阱，导致汉译英远比英译汉易于出错。用鲁迅的话说，就是“词典不离手，冷汗不离身。”这提醒译者必须对这些差异心中有数，然后再调和这些差异，“摆平”这些差异。为此，要迈好下面八道坎儿，时刻要留心这八条“戒律”只想为你擦亮满天星光，以免在熟路上“迷失方向”。一、戒“从一而终”汉语言简意赅，句子灵活，往往是一个汉语词汇对应N个英语词汇，具体到在本句中应该采用那个意项，务必抓住精神实质，不可以不变应万变。至于怎么应变，这就是显示译者功力的地方了。比如：都是“问题”，下面的翻译各不相同，几乎是打一枪换一个地方。共同关

2、心的问题 questions of common interest解决问题 solve a problem问题的关键 the heart of the matter关键问题 a key problem原则问题 a question/ matter of principle悬而未决的问题 an outstanding issue没有什么问题 Without any mishap摩托车有点问题。 Something is wrong with the motorcycle.问题不在这里。 That is not the point.最近揭发出相当严重的贪污、受贿和官僚主义问题。 Serious c

3、ases of embezzlement, bribery, and bureaucracy have been brought to light recently.译者要掌握这种汉英翻译中的“游击战术”，翻译家应是不同“文化王国”边境线上的“游击战略家”。例沙博里将水浒传译为：Outlaws of the Marsh（沼泽地上的亡命之徒）。杨宪益译将屈原的国殇译为：For Those Fallen for Their Country，北外出版社将儒林外史译为：The Scholars。这些都是译者吃透了原文的原意而译出的佳作。二、戒望文生义，机械直译这多半是初学者犯的毛病，自己易于被表面现象

4、所迷惑，做出令人啼笑皆非的事情。黄牛（yellow cowox前误后正，下同）黄鹂（yellow bird oriole）从小青梅竹马（green plum bamboo horsegrew up together）黄瓜（ yellow meloncucumber） 紫菜（purple vegetable laver）白菜（ white vegetable Chinese cabbage）红木（red woodpad auk） 红豆杉（red firChinese yew）黑社会（black society sinister gang）三、戒“水土不符”，习惯搭配失当这的确是难度系数较大的问题

5、，它要求译者既有较高的中文修养，又要有较高的英文造诣，一知半解的人常常在此“翻车”。如：写罢，掷笔在桌上。又歌了一回，再饮数杯酒，不觉沉醉，力不胜酒，便呼酒保计算了，取些银子算还，多的都赏了酒保。And tossed the pen on the table. He intoned the verses to himself, then downed a few more cups of wine. He was very dunk. Song-Jiang asked for the bill, paid, and told the waiter to keep the change.（沙博里

6、译水浒传浔阳楼宋江吟反诗）目前，水浒传最好的英译本要数沙博里先生的本子了。沙博里出生在美国，青年时来到中国，一住就是半个多世纪。为了译好水浒传，据说他潜心研究了山东的地方志和旧时方言，可谓精诚所致，译著既“达”又“雅”。然而历史告诉我们，中国古人没有用过钢笔，宋时用的还是毛笔，故the pen 应改为the writing-brush。白洋淀的导游牌上，“红菱”被硬硬地翻译成Red Ling。菱角有对应词的，应改为Red Water Chestnut。这里常常有外国人参观，如此翻译，令人汗颜！下面的几段译文就较好地照顾到了西方人的思维和理解习惯。老者道：“西方却去不得。那山离此有六十里远，正是

7、西方必由之路。却有八百里火焰，周围寸草不生，若过此山，就是铜脑盖，铁身躯，也要化成汁哩。”“Its impossible to get to the west,” the old man replied, “The mountains are about twenty miles from here. You have to cross them to get to the west, but theyre over 250 miles of flame. Not a blade of grass can grow anywhere around. Even if you had a skul

8、l of bronze and a body of iron, you would melt trying to cross them.”（詹纳尔译西游记孙悟空一调芭蕉扇）美国把贸易和人权扯在一起，只会损害两国的经济利益。The US policy of linking trade with human rights can only bring harm to the economic interests of the two countries.关起门来搞建设是不成的，中国的发展离不开世界。China cant develop in isolation from the rest of t

9、he world.四、戒主语暗淡主语是句子的灵魂， 定住译文的主语的是关键的一步棋。主语定偏了，整个句子将显得松散乏力，甚至会误导读者。如果这个问题不解决，势必影响两国的利益。Failure to settle this issue is bound impair the relations between the two countries seriously.If the problem is not solved , it is sure to affect the interests between the two countries在以上两种译文中，显然第一种译文主语选得好，句子流畅

10、。共同的利益把我们两个伟大的国家连接在一起。What holds our two great nations together is the cement of common interests.此句主语部分处理得颇为干练。操吴戈兮披犀甲，车错毂兮短兵接。We grasp huge shields, clad in Rhinoceros Hide;the Chariots clash, the Daggers gashing wide.（杨宪益译屈原国殇）屈原一开篇就“操吴戈兮披犀甲，车错毂兮短兵接”，显然需要补充应有的主语。在国殇诗中，后面还有“身既死兮神以灵，子魂魄兮为鬼雄”的句子，可见屈

11、原是以“局外人”的视角来写为国捐躯的将士的，而非把自己混为军中一员。译文中的主语应改为“They”较妥。厨房里少了一条鱼，主人发誓要一查到底，揪出偷鱼的贼。Finding a fish in kitchen was lost, the host swore to find out the thief who stole the fish.尽管汉语中似乎有“厨房”“主人”两个主语，译者果断地选定了the host作主语。打点清晰，增强了句子的内聚力。夏威夷的沙滩上，椰影婆娑，海风习习，一妙龄女郎正躺在白色的塑料椅上养神。On the Hawaiian sandy beach, the cocon

12、ut palms are whirling, the congenial sea breeze is blowing, and a young lady is lying in the white plastics chair resting to restore energy.因为是轻松读本，又是描述性的文字，使用三个主语the coconut palms、the congenial sea breeze、a young lady仍是可取的。五、戒结构单调，组合生硬 “拉郎配”由于汉英结构不同，表达方式迥异，“硬性翻译”不仅读起来别扭，而且会闹出笑话。这就要求译者在翻译时灵活使用整合的技巧，

13、将句子整合，凸显汉语中所隐含的层次，补充所缺失的成分。有时要将简单句译成并列句，有时将并列句译成主从句。在纪念大学毕业20周年聚会时，我忽然问起原来的班主任：“我个子又不矮，怎么把我安排在了第一排呢？”At the reunion party for 20 anniversary of graduation from university, I suddenly asked my former teacher in charge of our class then:“ Since I am not of short stature, how did you arrange me at the

14、first row?”一个高度近视的女博士去擦鞋店擦高统靴，秃头老板亲自蹲下来给她效劳。When a woman doctor who suffers a severe myopic went to shoes-polishing shop for her buskins，the bald boss squatted down to serve her personally.黑体字部分，正是契合了英语的表达习惯。六、戒“愚忠”，不谙增减之道我们耳熟能详的东西外国人可能会感到一头雾水，译者需要增加必要的说明和补充或者减译。否则，外国人会不知所云。毕竟，汉译英最终是给外国人看的。例如：风水feng

15、shuithe location of a house or tomb, supposed to have an influence on the fortune of a family.例如：（美国对台）“三不政策”会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。One day I shall climbClear to the summit,See how small surroundingMountain tops appear as they lie below me（新西兰人路易艾黎译杜甫望岳）I cant open my eyes to watch you jumping into the fiery p

16、it, for I will shut my eyes at the time.我不会眼睁睁看着你往火坑里跳，到时候我会闭上的。七、戒语句重复汉语多重复，以强化语气；英语则要尽量避免重复。先生曰：“狼负我，狼负我！”狼曰：“吾非固欲负汝。天生汝辈，固需吾辈食也。”“You are an ungrateful beast,” complained the man.“Not at all,” retorted the wolf, “it is not that Im ungrateful, but you men were created for us to devour.”（颜惠庆译马中锡中山狼

17、传）王曰：“此鸟不飞则已，一飞冲天；不鸣则已，一鸣惊人。”“The bird may not have flown yet”，replied the King,“Once it does, it will soar to the sky. I may not have cried out yet, but once it does, it will startle everyone.”（杨宪益译史记滑稽列传又斗争，又团结，以斗争的手段，达团结之目的。Unity, struggle, unity through struggle.中国人也好，外国人也好，死人也好，活人也好，对的就是对的，不对的就

18、是不对的。What is right is right and what is wrong is wrong, no matter what it concerns, the Chinese or foreigners, the dead or the living.八、戒另起炉灶，走失精气神，沦为法国作家梅纳日所批评的 “不忠的美人”即语言优美但不忠于原文。译文要力求其“信”，尽可能契合汉语原来句子的气势、情绪和结构。例如，元朝人王实甫写下了西厢记，张雪静改编后并作了翻译：掏出张生那封信，回头环视见梳妆台上的梳妆盒，眼睛一转，心里说有了，将信放了进去，合上盖时故意压了一角露在外面。Rose took out Zhangs letter, she thought, “It would be better to put it in her make-up case, and letter find it herself.” So she put the letter in th