英语书面表达

1、怎样做好高考书面表达Made by 陈正举英语书面表达训练连贯与句式的运用1.连贯连贯是指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密的衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。In order to make your essays coherent ,Ill give you three tips.1.恰当的使用关联词；如 when ,so ,if ,because,so that 等2.巧妙的使用意思有联系的词或词组或短语。如 first second ,third ,soon,whats more,as a result 等。3.适当使用过渡性的语句。 The reason are as follows. Ever

2、y coin has two sides. On the one hand ,on the other hand. On the contrary.高考英语书面表达训练：连接词和句型的选择1.递进关系。e.g. He enjoys watching TV very much .Whats more,he can watch it the whole morning.肯定；besides ,whats more ,also ,in addition ,furthermore否定：whats more ,even worse ,wore still ,to make matters worse.2

3、.时间一 就 the moment / on doing / as soon as/ immediately directly Immediately the class is over ,Ill go to the office for a rest.不久：It was not long before ,after a while ,soon .然后：after that ,then ,so ,next.同时：at the same time ,meanwhile 3.转折：however ,but ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,yet4.顺序：f

4、irst ,second ,third ,last ,next ,then5.条件：if ,unless ,as long as ,so long as ,on that condition6.强调：it is that/who ,so she did ,I do hope she did help me /it really hard .7.其他： 不得不做某事：have to do sth. ,have no choice but to do sth. have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：there is no need(for sb.) to do

5、sth. it is necessary for sb.to do sth. 最好做某事：Youd better do sth. , it is better to do sth.做某事没有困难：have no difficulty in doing sth. have no trouble in doing sth.感谢某人：thank sb. ,be thankful to sb. Express ones thanks to sb. Be grateful to sb. Thanks to 求助某人：turn to sb.for help., ask sb.for help , with

6、 the help of , with ones help惊奇: to ones surprise , in surprise ,surprisingly原因如下: the reasons are as follows , there are many reasons for it 浪费金钱: its a waste of time /money结果: as a result , therefore ,thus ,so 总结: in a word , in short ,above all,after all(to summarize)表达观点:in my opinion,I think,I

7、believe,Im sure,I guess(to express your views)Step 4.Fill in the blanks with proper words or phrases. Task1 请在下列句子中(间)填上恰当的关联词或意思有 连系的短语1. Xiaoming was walking in the street ( ) he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car ( ) I could travel around in the west.3. It was not long ( )

8、the police came.whenSo thatbefore4. ( ) he heard the cry for help ,he jumped into the water to save the girl .5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ( ),do write to me soon.6.We can go downtown and do some shopping .( ),we can visit to some places of interest.7.I shared the cost of the gas with my fr

9、iends.( ),I saved $80.8.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth.( ),it may make us fatAs soon asIf notBesidesAs a resultBesidesStep5. Sentence patternWe have learned some linking words and phrases, And we have manyWays to express the same meaning so that we can make our essayswonderful句式的运用:利用不同的句型来表达同一个意

10、思,能增加文章的文采.基本句型:1.感叹句e.g. how happy I was when I received your letter.What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was!2.强调句 e.g. it was this your boy that helped the old granny.3.倒装句e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car.Hardly had they got to the station when the

11、y met the young man.4.省略句e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus .(这能使你的文章更地道)(simple and native) 5.with 短语e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.(非谓语动词短语)6.定语从句e.g. In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information

12、.7.各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do.(主/宾/表/同位)8.各种状语从句e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it.(时间/地点/比较/原因/目的/结果/让步等)Task 2 按要求改写下列句子，使其更具文采。1. Tom saved the drowning girl .(强调)2. I hope I can pay a visit to you next year. (强调)3. Tom was puzzled .(感叹)4. It is great fun to climb the hill.(感叹)7.

13、Soon the firefighters came.(表时间句型)Step 7. Task 3 Writing Practice请你给写一篇稿件,谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法.原因:1.家庭贫穷,供不起儿童上学,他们不得不在家赚钱养家.2.部分家长认为女孩上学无用,不愿让他们上学.3.部分儿童对功课不感兴趣,不愿上学.看法:1.每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会.2.全社会都应重视儿童教育,他们对国家的未来起到重要作用.1.不要逐字逐句翻译. 2.语句要连贯通顺. 3.字数100个左右.Now in the country areas,there are many children

14、out of school.Most families are poor and cant afford their education. They haveto stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughtersneednt go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school. All the children including girls should be educated.The

15、whole society should pay attention to it. Theyll play an important part in the future of our country. Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.( )most families are too poor to send their children( )they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. ( ) some parents think t

16、here is no need for their daughters to go school,( ) they dont let them go to school.( ) some children are not interested in their studies,( ) some wouldnt like to go to school. ( ), all the children including girls should be educated.( )the whole society should pay attention to it,( )theyll play an

17、 important part in the future of our country. 每两个句子之间使用关联词和过渡句There are three reasons for it. First, so Second,orThird,thereforeIn my opinionBesides because 下列图画描述的是两位少先队员上星期日去少年宫的途中经历的事情.请据此写一篇短文.Last Sunday,two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace when they saw a box fall off a

18、 passing truck.Without delay, they shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.However,it was too late because the driver drove so fast that he didnt notice it. As a result,they had no choice but to carry the box onto the roadside.Luckily/Fortunately,the boy remembered the plate number of

19、 the truck. So he asked the girl to go to the nearest telephone box to turn to the traffic police for help. So she did. Meanwhile,the boy stayed with the box,waiting for the driver. It was not long before the driver drove back .First ,he was veryGrateful to the Young Pioneers. Second,he carried the

20、box onto his truck. At last, he said goodbye and drove away. 目前，许多学校存在部分学生抄袭作业的现象。现在就这个问题大家谈谈自己的看法。标题是“My opinion on copying others homework”内容要点如下：1.主要原因：A：作业量偏大、偏难 B：对功课不感兴趣、懒惰 C：完成任务、取悦老师2.各人看法：A：抄袭不对、违反效规 B：要诚实、勤奋学习 C：有困难可请教同学和老师注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥 2.短文标题与开头已为你写好，不记入总词数 3.词数：100左右。 My opinion on copying others homework It is kno