2019高三英语写作训练专题感谢信1语文

1、高三英语写作训练专题一一感谢信学习目标：1,通过分析高考真题写作部分，熟悉并掌握感谢信的写作特点与要求；2,通过自主限时写作练习，写出符合写作要求的感谢信。写作案例：假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的 Mr.Brown的资助，可以重 返校园。请你给Mr.Brown写一封信，内容如下：1 .收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；2 .在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；3 .决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；4,盼望见到Mr.Brown ,希望他寄来一张照片。注意：1 .书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2 .词数100左右；文章开头和结

2、尾已给出，不计入总词数。习作评阅高一自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Brown,I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. could not return to school if you hadn't helped me.Thank you so much.I have been work hard since I went back to school.I have made great progress in my studies under the help

3、 of my teachers.They often praise me and encourage me.I made up my mind to study harder and makeD great progress.How are you getting on with your life and work?I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so.（您目行奇给张自己的照片吗？）Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes

4、!1 .避免词汇搭配错误处under改为with处 great改为 greater2 .杜绝语法错误处 could not return 改为 could not have returned 处 work改为 working 处made改为have made3 .要点 aE/、要遗漏补上处要点：Would you please send me a photo of yourself?Yours sincerely,Li Hua自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Mr.Brown,I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money a

5、nd books you sent me.I could not have returned to school) if you hadn't helped me.Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back to schoo® My teachers often praise me and encourage n®.I have made1 .高级词汇处改为“ without+名词”形式：without your help2 .高级句型用“介词+关系代great progress in m

6、y studies with the help of them.I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.词”连接、句:How are you getting on with your life and work ? I would liketo meet you in person but I have no opportunity to doso.Would you please send me a photo of yourselfThank you again for your generous h

7、elp and best wishe sYours sincerely,Li HuaMy teachers often praise me andencourage me withthe help of whom I have made greatprogress in my studies.必备知识回顾一.概述1 .感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的专 业书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。2 .感谢信的写作格式主要分以下三个部分：(1)开头部分要明确对对方提供的帮助或赠送的礼物表示谢意；(2)主体部分则需列举对方提供的帮助，说明该帮助所起的作用，或表达对所收礼

8、物的喜 爱以及以后如何使用及收藏等；(3)结尾部分需再次表达诚挚的谢意并问候对方。二.必备句型1. I' m writing to thank you for 2. I' m writing to express my thanks to you for your great efforts to 3. I' m writing to show my gratitude for your help with my 4. I' m grateful to you for your encouragement -5. Thanks to your help, I o

9、vercame the difficulty-6. If it were not for your help, I would not have succeeded in 7. You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks .8. Thank you very much for9. I sincerely hope that 10. Please accept my sincere appreciation fo r11. I am truly grateful to you for 12. I

10、t was really kind of you to 13. I sincerely appreciate-14. I wish to express my appreciation for15. On behalf of my whole family, I would like to 16. Without your help, I wouldn' t17. with one' s help / with the help of sb.18. thanks to/due to/because of your encouragement/selfless dedicatio

11、n/devotion/contribution19. be patient with sb. / have much patience with sb.20. tolerant and generous三.常用过渡词表示歹U举和顺序的： firstly, secondly, thirdly, besides, then, for one thing, for another thing, etc. 表示时间过渡的： now, suddenly, later, meanwhile, in the meanwhile, etc.表示概括总结的：in a word, in conclusion, i

12、n short, to sum up, etc.四.文章模板1 . Dear , I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for（感谢的原因）.If it had not been for your assistance in（对方给予的具体帮助）,I fear that I would have been（没有对方帮助时的后果）.Every one agrees that it was you who（给出细节）.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept

13、 my gratitude.Yours sincerely, Li Ming2 .Dear,I am now writing these lines to express my sincere thanks for .I'd like you to know how much you meant to me.You have a positive genius for .I not only enjoyed , but also .I shall ever remember as one of the most in my life.I .I repeat my thanks agai

14、n for your.Please give my kind regards to your.Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 实战演练（一）假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学（South China Normal University）大一新生你高三时 在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：1 .梦想成真，考上理想大学。2 .因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。3 .对老师表小祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你 写好。Dear Mr. Wang,Sincerely yours,Li

15、Hua实战演练（二）假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生（exchange student去美国学习，得到布朗一家的照顾, 回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下：1 .感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。2 .感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大。3 .欢迎到中国做客。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你 写好。Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,Sincerely yours,Li Hua感谢信参考范文：（一）Dear Mr. Wang,I am writing to express my thanks for helping me impro

16、ve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improve

17、d because of your encouragement.Without your help, I wouldn ' t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!Sincerely yours,Li Hua 邀请信参考范文：（二） Dear Mr

18、. and Mrs. Brown,How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America! That was such a hard time for me, but your kindness and warm heart did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you tutored me in my spoken Engli