九年级英语全册Unit6Whenwasitinvented同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版

1、写作写作题目：题目： Computer age Learning aim Talk about the usage of computers and your ideas on them.Have you seen these inventions? When talk about the most important invention of the world, what comes to your mind first?lTelephones _in 1876.lThey_ call people. (用途用途)were inventedare used toOur life has b

2、ecome_ (convenient) since cars were invented. _, cars cause a lot of air pollution for us.more and more convenientHoweveradvantagesdisadvantagesu Our life _ (已经大大改已经大大改变变_ 因为因为 the inventions of computers.uWe can_ (上网上网on computers. We can_(购物购物)on the Internet and so on.uBut if we spend _(太多时间太多时间o

3、n computers, it will be bad for our study.go shoppingbecause oftoo much timehas greatly changedget on the Internet 电脑问世以来，大大改变了人们的生活。请围绕下面的提示，写一篇电脑问世以来，大大改变了人们的生活。请围绕下面的提示，写一篇8080词词左右的英语短文谈谈电脑对我们生活的影响。建议同学们恰当使用电脑。左右的英语短文谈谈电脑对我们生活的影响。建议同学们恰当使用电脑。提示：提示：创造时间：创造时间：19761976年年 最有用的创造之一最有用的创造之一 ，如玩游戏、写文章、听

4、音乐，如玩游戏、写文章、听音乐利用电脑上网，购物，聊天利用电脑上网，购物，聊天长时间使用电脑对视力及学习有害长时间使用电脑对视力及学习有害参考词汇：参考词汇：get on the Internetget on the Internet上网，上网，eyesight eyesight 视力视力 in the right way in the right way恰当的方式恰当的方式审审-列列-加加-连连-美美 Think审题审题 体裁：体裁：_ 人称人称:_时态时态: _ List用简单句列出文章的要点用简单句列出文章的要点The usage of computersAdvantagesDisadv

5、antages说明文说明文第三、一人称第三、一人称一般现在时一般现在时Add加开头，结尾使文章完整加开头，结尾使文章完整Connect(使用关联词，从句，过渡词使用关联词，从句，过渡词Beautify(使用好词好句美化文章使用好词好句美化文章Add介绍产品用介绍产品用途途 Computers are used in/for Computers can helpdo 点明主题点明主题Computers are one of the most useful inventions in the world. 结尾结尾I think 连词:as (everyone knows), before, af

6、ter, when, if, because 过渡词：however, besides, also, whats more 表示列举的词：for example, such as, 总结性的短语，句子：in my opinion, in a word , in short, in general, I think审审-列列-加加-连连-美美The most useful inventioncomputer In the past few years, more and more inventions have come into our life. I think computers are

7、one of the most useful inventions. We live in the “computer age. Computers are used in many fields. They are very important because they can work faster and make nearly no mistakes. Computers can help people do a lot of work. Writers use them to write. Teachers use them to help teaching. They are al

8、so used for studying by students. Whats more, we can use a computer to search for information. Computers are very useful and helpful in our life. They have changed our life and improved the quality of peoples life. They are our friends. I think everyone wants to have one.Sample 1开声朗读自己的文章，并开声朗读自己的文章

9、，并从构造、人称、时态、字从构造、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进展自我修正。符号等方面进展自我修正。Task 1自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏角度：欣赏角度： 写作根本要求写作根本要求:人称人称, 时态；时态； 2. 要点齐全；要点齐全； 3. 构造构造: 开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾； 4. 好词好句。好词好句。Task 2欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句 , 并运用改错符号找出缺乏，进展适当修改。并运用改错符号找出缺乏，进展适当修改。评分评分以总分值以总

10、分值15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到缺乏的修正篇章构造由亮点欣赏到缺乏的修正篇章构造 分析分析-细细 节点评节点评) 集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3 Computers have greatly changed our life since they were invented in 1976.They are one of the most useful inventions in the world. They are used to do many things, such as playing computer game

11、s, writing articles and listening to music. Besides, we can use them to get on the Internet. Then we can do shopping and chat with friends online.Sample 2 However, computers also have disadvantages. If we spend too much time on computers, it is bad for our eyes. Whats more, spending too much time ge

12、tting on the Internet will affect our study. In my opinion, we should use the computers in the right way.HomeworkRewrite your article and hand it in. 本单元我们主要学习了被动语态，学本单元我们主要学习了被动语态，学会利用被动语态谈论创造的历史、描述会利用被动语态谈论创造的历史、描述物体的用途。此类文体属于说明文，说物体的用途。此类文体属于说明文，说明文常用一般现在时。写此类文章应明明文常用一般现在时。写此类文章应明确说明的先后顺序，描述产品的特点

13、和确说明的先后顺序，描述产品的特点和用途，最后结合创造给人们生活带来的用途，最后结合创造给人们生活带来的便利谈谈自己的感受。便利谈谈自己的感受。习作指导习作指导习作资料习作资料单词单词invention useful use important helpful change improve quality短语短语in the past few years, more and more, make no mistakes, be use for, help sb do sth句子句子I think computer is one of Computers are used for/inComputer can help. do. They have changed our life and improved常