写作指导 (2)

1、如何介绍一个城市【写作任务】假设你是李华，今年暑假你跟随某国际旅行社游历了欧洲十国。罗马这个充满神奇色彩的城市给你留下了深刻的印象。请根据以下提示，在英语课上用英语向你的同学们介绍罗马。地理位置意大利中部面积人口约260万历史欧洲文明的发祥地之一，2500余年的历史使其成为“永恒之城（the Eternal City）”。地位意大利政治、经济和文化中心；景点有万神殿（Pantheon）与古罗马斗兽场（Colosseum）等。注意:1.词数100左右； 2.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】1. 审题定调:介绍城市属于说明文范畴。一般要介绍城市的地理位置、面积、人口、历史、

2、经济、文化及重要景观等。写作时要突出城市特色，不要面面俱到。另外要注意合理安排说明的顺序，使短文错落有致。2. 确定主体内容:根据提示要点，可分为三部分:第一部分:交代罗马的地理位置、面积、人口等情况。第二部分:重点描写罗马的特色，如城市的历史、地位、景点等。第三部分:简单评论并总结全文。3. 确定人称、时态:短文以第三人称、一般现在时为主。介绍历史时常用过去时态。4. 核定表达:所处位置(location). lies / is located / situated near / behind / in front of / by the side of / between / among

3、/ . is in / on / to the east / west / north / south of .Surrounded by mountains on three sides, . faces . on the east.人口(population)、面积(area). has a population of . covers an area of . is . metres long and . metres wide.历史(history)、名胜(places of interest). has a history of over . years.There are many

4、 places of interests, such as .【范文展示】RomeRome, the capital of Italy, 1. _ (位于意大利中部). It covers an area of about 1,500 square kilometres and  2. _ (有约260万人口). Rome was one of the birthplaces of European civilisation. 3. _ (它有2500余年的历史), which is why it is known as the Eternal City.4. _ (罗马是意大利的政

5、治、经济和文化中心). The city 5. _ (拥有如此多的世界闻名的旅游景点) such as Pantheon and Colosseum that tourists wont leave it.Rome is really a great and attractive city.  答案1. is located in the middle of Italy 2. has a population of about 2.6 million3. It has a history of over 2,500 years4. Rome now serves as Italys politi