2021年合肥市中考英语作文万能模板及写作技巧

1、中考英语作文万能模板及写作技巧中考英语作文万能模板及英语写作技巧写好作文五要素：要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点1 .要点：缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点要做到全，围绕中心。2 .结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式“观点一一要点一一总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单 明了，开门见山，不超过2句话 第二段：可以分析原因。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。 但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。3 .逻辑：通过使用逻辑词体现文章的思路。4 .语法：语法是硬性的。如单词的使用，时态等要注意。5 .亮点：高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以一般词

2、汇要限量用。英语写作检查的原则：1内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档2语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。3变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化英语高分作文必备杀手铜一三段四步法中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：1）结构2）内容要点3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档， 看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。1 “三段”（三个段落）一针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类 文。中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国

3、的“高考”SAT 考试，（SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考）。我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing（汉堡写作）第一段 记叙文 议论文：开篇背景介绍（时间、地点、人物、事件）发表观点第二段：故事发展论据、论点支撑第三段：结局总结观点2“四步”有了框架就相当于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。步骤一：审题审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面：一审主题（写什么），二审 体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态（时态中考两个扣一分，三个降一档），四审人称（别犯 低级错误），五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出

4、，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）步骤二：打草稿中考一定要打草稿，两大优势1中考不准在试卷更改，涂改带、橡皮、胶条（冏）、小刀（我小时候想都没想过），而中考时落笔错误 是难免的，涂改就会后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。2正式写作是对草稿的在梳理，语言的在锤炼。步骤三：正文写作做到两点，一要凝练，而要变化。文章80-100字为宜，一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词 组搭配。步骤四：检查：很多学生考试都会检查，但总是不能找到自己的错误。原因很简单，方法不对：中考英语满分作文必背句型1 .重点句型1) . Its adj for sb to do做对某人来说.too . to do太而不能

5、2) . . so . that.如此.以至于 such . that.如此.以至于3) . not.until.直到.才.例：I didn't go to bed until my mother came back.4) .The reason why +句子is that +句子 的原因是The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.(他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)5) . That is why +句子 那是的原因6) . That is because +句子那是因为7) . It is said that +句

6、子 据说 It is reported that +句子 据报道8) . There is no doubt that + 句子 亳无疑问9) . It goes without saying that +句子不言而喻，亳无疑问10) . There is no need to do 没必要做11) . There is no point in doing 做某事亳无意义2 .提建议had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing 怎么样？I think you should do 我认为你应该I suggest that you s

7、hould do 我建议你做If I were you, I would do我要是你的话，我会做It,s best to do 最好做.Whynot do / why don't you do.?为什么不3 .表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜欢做. prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做 A 也不愿做 Bbe interested in doing = show/ take great interest in doing 感兴趣4努力做try to do努力做try one

8、's best to do= do one's best to do 竭尽全力做make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做 do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做spare no effort to do不遗余力的做be going to do打算/计划做determine to do 决定做make up one's muid to do F 定决心做.5 打算做/计划做 intend / plan to do 打算做 decide to do决定做 be determined to do 决

9、定做 6.表示想/希望want to do = would like to do 想做 hope to do 希望做.expect to do期待着做wish to do 希望做 consider doing考虑做中考必背的30个作文经典词句必背知识常用的名言警句常用的名言警句1. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩2. A friend in need is a friend indeed,患难朋友才是真朋友3. A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半 Well begun is half done.4.

10、Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成5. All roads lead to Rome.条条大道通罗马6. Easier said than done.说起来容易，做起来难7. Easy come, easy go.来得快，去得快8. Every man has his weak side.人人都有缺点9. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母10. Look before you leap.三思而后行11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set

11、your mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人.12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun.人若无友，就如同生命中没有太阳.13. All things are difficult before they are easy.万事开头难.14. Always prepare for a rainy day.未雨绸缪.15. As you sow, so shall you reap,种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆1.1 1 might say that success is won by three things: first, effor

12、t; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功 要靠三件事才能赢得:努力，努力，再努力17. Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.有事莫推明天.18. Practice makes perfect,熟能生巧19. Bad news has wings.好事不出门，坏事传千里20. Honesty is the best policy.做人以诚信为本.21. You have to believe in yourself. That's the sec

13、ret of success.你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键.22. Don t judge a man by his looks.不可以貌取人.23. Lost time is never found again.岁月既往，一去不回。24. 熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.25,千里之行，始于足下。The longest journey begins with the first step.26. Lost years are worse than lost dollars. 一寸光阴一寸金，寸今难买寸光阴 常用过渡语23 .表起始的过渡语:first of all.

14、 to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far. as far as 等？24 .表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end. finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally 等？25 .表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the rig

15、ht/left of, on one side of. on the otlier side of., at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of. next to, far from, in front of 等？26 .表因果的过渡语:fbr、because of one reason is that. another reason is that., so, as a result (of)等？27 .表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, instead of, al

16、though, otherwise, in spite of28 .表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, that is. like, as follows, in other words, and so on 等？29 .表推进的过渡语：what's more, on one hand. on the other hand. in addition to、as well, still, also, in other words, not only.but also., besides, Rirthennore, moreover 等？30 .表总结的过渡语:in

17、 short, in a word, in general, in all 等？第一部分写作技巧、话题一：写人记事例文：初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Never Forget”的作文。 内容包括：1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长：2.列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得 进步的；3.感谢老师，祝愿老师。The Teacher I Never ForgetHow time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very

18、good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr. Zhang, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago. Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offeicd me many su

19、ggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in Ihc future!例文：假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情 让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。要点：L

20、 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴：2,你给老人让座，老人的孙子却 坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边：3.孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4.你认为孩子应 该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。On my wa home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy s schoolbag and a violm. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat d

21、own first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.When I saw this, I a very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.话题二：环保污染例文：节约资源，保

22、护环境.从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活工提示:（1）每天步行上学;（2）离开教室时， 关灯、电扇、电视等：（3）不用水时，记住关水龙头，循环使用水：（4）充分使用纸张：（5）不使用塑料袋。Mv Low-carbon LifeIt's our duty to protect the unvironment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to prcncnl peop

23、le from polluting （he environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans. TV sets and lights in time when we don't need tliein. What's more, water shoul

24、d be reused by us. Third. it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these thingsLower car

25、bon, happier lifb. Let's take actions.例文：目前，我们的家乡正在实施“城乡清洁工程” （cleaningproject）.请你根据以下信息，给某英文报写一篇 短文，就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方而谈谈你的看法和建议。状况：1.垃圾到处可见，污染空气、土地和 水源。2.摆卖不安全食品，危害人们的健康。建议:1.城乡统一堆放垃圾。2.禁止生产不合格食物，不卖不 买有害食品。Presently, a cleaning project is carried out in our hometown. It is necessary for us to clean

26、 our living environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The nir. the soil and thr water are all polluted. Some kinds of unsafe food which is hamiful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.I think we must stophe pollution and Ihe harm. People must throw the waste i

27、nto （he rubbish bins. Don't allow anyone to produce and sell any unsafe food. Pay attention t。the food before eating, sure it is safe. If we can do that all, our hometown will soon be cleaner and more beautiful话题三：体育健康例文：每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体映.良好的生活习惯有 哪些呢？例如：每天按时起床和睡觉：饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不

28、吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼：不 乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰：不要再马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。How to Develop Good Living HabitsEveryone has diffsrenl living habits. Good habits can make us kcop healthy. As leenaers, what should we do?In my opinion, everyone should .et up and sleep on lime every day. Don't play or watch TV all niglit. That is

29、 bad for our health and affect our work. We should eat more vegetables and fruit, and eal less meal. I advise everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit. Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No

30、 jaywalking.In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.例文：请以I Love Sports为题写一篇英语短文。L你喜欢的体育活动有哪些？ 2.进行体育活动有哪些好 处？ 3.你最喜欢的体育活动是什么？I love sportsI love swimming, running, ball games in my spare time. I think it is good for us lo do some sports. Sports help to bui

31、ld up our body and make us strength. It can also keep illness away. By doing sports, Fm becoinuig stronger and more confident(有信心的)than before. My favorite sport is swimming. I like swimming because I like playing with water. Also I think swimming is more popular than other sports and it's easie

32、r to learn. I feel relaxed when I swim. I love sports! I think everyone should spend some time on sports every day because health is more importam Ihan other things in modern life.话题四：语言学习例文：假设你校要举办一期英语增报,交流学习英语的感受，请你按下而表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为 “Find your own way to learn English” ,介绍你学习英语的体会。1.最初的情况：学习困难。如：

33、拼写听力差、语法出错、阅读速度慢。2.现在的情况：学习方法。如：记 单元词汇表(vocabulary list)多听磁带借书阅读3.学习体会:学好英语的关键。如：专心致志、自有方 法。Find your own way to leam EnglishThere are many ways to leam English, but everyone should have his or her own way.At first. I had many difficulties in Lcaming English. For example, I couldn't spell some E

34、nglish words, and couldn't understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in n】y mind. I listen to English tapes every da

35、y and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.The most iniportam thing to leam English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.例文：假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封

36、回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。要点：1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志； 3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇；4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。Dear Dave,Fm glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to leam Chinese well. Here is my advice.First. As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity grog Ihc most importa

37、nl thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.Second. if you want to improve your listening ability. you'd butter read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs. Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends c

38、an teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.In a word, I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.、话题五：旅游及交通安全例文：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸， 给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？内容包含：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行 道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。With more

39、 and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example ,we must walk on walk side .when

40、we cross zebra -crossing .stop and look righ【and left .then go across fast. Don't play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when ever

41、ybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on walk side.例文：目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建 议。要点：一、不重视课外阅读的原因：1.作业太多2.没有读书习惯3.时间花在电脑或网络上。二、 课外阅读的好处1.更多地了解世界2.学会如何思考3.生活更加丰富多彩。三、对学校或同学的建议（至 少一点）At present only a few students do some

42、reading after class. Here are several reasons.First of all, quite a lot of students arc burdened with loo much homework. Still others haven't formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can Ic

43、am more about ihn world. Besides, it can help us think better. Lasl but not least, reading can make our life more colorful.Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to reduce the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it's a good idea to fo

44、rm readmg clubs and learn Horn each other.话区六:提出解决问题J例文：保持健康的体魂，拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。请以How to keep fit为题， 从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇文章。How to keep fitAs we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life. How lo keep fit?Here is some advice for you.First, we should eat he

45、althy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on. Ne mustn't eat junk food, winch is bad for our health. Second.it is necessary for us to do sports. It is a 我ood idea to run and play ball games. Last, it is useful for us to have a good living habit. We should go to bed early and get up early. We

46、 must wash our hands before meals. What's more, we should brush our teeth twice a day.Let s keep healtliy togetlier.例文：你的笔友Tom上周来信想你倾诉了他在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你 寻求帮助。请根据提示给他写回信，给他以帮助。写作要点提示：1）简述Tom的烦恼：2）针对他的烦恼提出几点建议；3）表达你对他的鼓励与祝愿 Dear Tom,I 例 your letter last week. I hear that you do very wel

47、l in all the subjects. Congratulations! But you have few friends. You feel lonely. You don't know what you should do. I give some advice:First, you should help the students who arc in trouble, both in study and in life. They think you can gel on well with thcmTheiL join them. You can play and si

48、ng with them. Doing that can make you a member of them. Last, after class you can talk with them. Share （he sadness and happiness with （hem.I hope you can make more friends and become happy.Yours,Lisa例文 Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it. and it smiles at you, too.请你以"Lean】 to Smile”为题

49、，根据下表 所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离，Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is "Just a simle and the ram is gone." Do you like smiling? I th

50、ink you should learn to smile.First, we should learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don't be sad. Just smile al yourself. Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. Sometimes the one who bea

51、ts you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, it is important for you to learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes you happy as well.In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes lov

52、e and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be shiny.例文：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy计划今年暑假来江西度假，她向你了解江西城市.生活和农村生 活的情况，以便选择度假地点，给她写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说 说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。Dear Lucy,I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to

53、spend your summer holiday. There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life. Both in Ihe city and in ihc country, people's life is getting better and better. They pay more and more atlention lo keeping fit. However, there arc some differences. In the city people go

54、to supermarkets to buy what they need. They eat at home or in restaurants. They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus. After work, they go to cinemas, clubs or parks to relax themselves. In the country, people grow vegetables and rice by themselves. They live in houses and ride motorbik

55、es or bicycles to go around. In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home. As for mn. I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself. I often go to libraries, bookstores and science museums, where I can leam much about the world.I am lo

56、oking forward to meeting you! Bes! wishes!作文训练一、英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了 2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动.请你用英语写 一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：1 .表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；2 .你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母：3 .词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。提示词 (可选用)：learn from, respect, care for. do some housework, study hardMonday, June 30 SunnyThis monimg, our English

57、 teacher told us some stories aboutmost beautiful filial piety youth in 2015【答案】Monday, June 30SunnyThis morning, our English teacher told us some stories about "the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring fo

58、r parents.I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.(88 words)【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为树立 榜样：used to do sth过去常常做某事：take care of照顾：try one s best to do sth尽力做某事：强调句式It is adj for sb tod。sth,做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学