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1、中考英语满分作文写作技巧(初中生必看)中考作文是对同学们的知识掌握和应用能力的综合性考查。在考题中所占比重很大, 但是对于很多同学来说, 得高分并不是 一件很容易的事。分析主要原因,一个是同学们在平时的学习中没重视 。 通常认为作文只要写了, 老师多少都能给分, 考前背点范文就行。 其实,这是远远不够的; 另一个原因,则是自身的能力所限。01 如何写好中考作 那么,如何写好中考作文?阅卷老师喜欢什么样的作文呢? 结合近几年的中考作文的评分标准以及阅卷经验, 给同学们总结 了作文拿高分的技巧,供大家参考。一、结构要清晰结构清晰这点真的很重要, 我们都知道, 阅卷老师们要在规定的 时间内批阅上千份

2、作文, 而清晰的结构, 会让阅卷老师一目了然, 自然就会喜欢你的作文。什么结构好呢?那就是三段式。 第一段要开门见山,直接拿出主题。 给大家 举个 例子 ,比如 ,写 我的 妈妈, 第一 段直 接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。第二段是为什么她为什么是一个好妈妈。 1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in tro

3、uble.详细说出妈妈的优点。第三段得出结论。 大家可以发表自己的观点,也可以提出建议和希望。如, I love my mother. I love my family二、时态要准确 英语作文除了结构, 还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的, 那就是时态, 这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。 要明确文章的时态、 同时人称要一致、 数要一致、 首尾要呼应。 再根据内容要求,确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生, 比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时; 写经常发生的事或对人物的描 写,要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的 事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成 时。一定不能乱用乱配。

4、三、短语运用要灵活 同学们在写作文的时候, 要尽量使用有把握的词, 避免不必要的 失分。 当然,定语从句、宾语从句等句型,在关键的时候用上一两个, 会增添你文章的文采。 在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思 的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。还有对关联词的使用,如 first of all , secondly , finally , last ,so that ,in order that, not.but ,not only.butalso 等。还可以使用高级点的如, in a word , all in all(表示总结的), but ,yet ,however (表示转折)

5、等。 经验的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词, 因为这些词体现了整个 文章的思路。四、写全要点近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多, 也就是说写作内容几乎 都有要点提示, 确切地说就是给出写作提纲, 通常都是 3-5 个提 示点。 这种作文, 同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译,但是提示点必 须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好, 如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。 所以要点也就是文 章的第二段内容, 同学们要把提示点写全, 然后围绕提示点充分 发挥,丰富自己所写的内容。五、书写要认真 这一点同学们必须高度重视,作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁, 同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有 2 到 5 分 的差距。给阅

6、卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写,最简单的得分点 就是我们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心 情,在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。大家切记不要涂改, 在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿。 避免不 必要的丢分。漂亮的字体是可以练出来的, 只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写, 都会写得很好。02作文评分标准 中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分 ( 总分 20 分) :(一)内容满分 8 分 7-8 分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整 5-6 分:内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚、但不够 完整 2-4 分:内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚、有

7、些离 题。0-1 分:文不对题,表达不清。(二)语言满分 8 分 词数:每少 5 个单词扣 0.5 分,以此类推。只写出个别单词、词 不成句不给分。拼写:每处错误扣 0.5 分,同一错误不重复计数。语法:每处错误扣 0.5 分,同一语法错误不重复扣分。标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣 0.5 分,但扣分总和不超过 1 分。(三)组织结构满分 4 分 内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词 汇和句型句式运用恰当, 多见好句型和习惯表达用语者, 可给 34 分。内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或 少见语法错误; 词汇和句型句式运用恰当, 多见好句型和习惯表 达

8、用语者,可给 2 分。一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在 15 分以上者(含),方可 得到 1-2 分组织结构分。内容和语言在 15 分以下者,如文中有 值得肯定的好的句型和表达, 可酌情考虑给 1 分组织结构分。 通 篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给 组织结构分。03分类作文提纲一、活动介绍类首段:(1)I 'm pleased to know that you're greatly interestedin . ,so I 'd like to share a piece of good news that there will be a .

9、.Now,let me offer you some useful information.(2) It ' s my great honor to invite you to enter a . .Now,let me offer you some useful information aboutit.(3) It ' s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there isa/an.prepared forus.Now,let me offer you some informatio

10、n about it.主体段:1. 时间 &地点: The . will be held in Classroom 302 at 3o' clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.2. 内容:(1) 主题句:There will be various meaningful activities included init.(2) 要点:First of all , You will be invited to ./Youwill begiven a chance to . .which will .After that,It will be

11、 more than interesting for you to ./It will impress you a lot to .so that .At last,doing sth. will play an important part in . .So .尾段:That ' s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,youwill . .That ' s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and sharethe happiness/fun with us.二、写人叙事类 首段

12、:(1) 朋友: A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.(2) 父母: If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my . . Let me introduce him to you .(3) 老师: In both my life and st

13、udy,my .teacher isspecial to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character. 主体段:1. 外貌: . is very beautiful but a little fat with longhair and big eyes.2. 性格: .is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ . is very

14、kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others thatwe all like to make friends with him.3. 爱好: She is especially good at cooking and often cooksdifferent delicious foods for me.4. 事例: (1) Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, shewill always be there. When I fail my tes

15、t, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.(2) My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a s

16、erious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others ' homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.(3) Last term, Ifailed my exam. I was so that that Icried sadly in my

17、 room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.尾段:As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn

18、from./I will treasure the friendship forever.Now I understand my father' s love to me. I will neverforget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.三、咨询建议类 首段:I ' m sorry to hear that you have difficulty

19、in doing . .Don' t worry about it!Here are some usefulsuggestions I d like to share with you.主体段:1. 主题句:Actually, if you are careful, you' ll find various simpleways to help you solve the problem.2. 要点:First and foremost,It' s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do . .Sothat.In addition,you are suppos

20、ed to do .,which can notonly . but also .What' s more,you had better (not) do . ,because .Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do . ,from which,you ' re able to do .尾段:With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe youwill improve . a lot.I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be

21、 of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.四、观点看法类首段:With thedevelopmentofthe science andtechnology/society,.isbecoming more and moreserious./theproblem about .is under a heateddiscussion/ . has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.主体段:On the one hand,

22、some people hold the idea that . .The reasons are as follows.First, . .Second, . .Last, . .On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that . .Because . .More importantly, . .尾段:As far as I ' m concerned,every coin has two sides,and .9 / 16is not a n exception.As long as we treat . properly,i

23、twill be of great help.04中考作文经典词句一、常用的名言警句1. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难朋友才是真朋友。3. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。4. All roads lead to Rome.条条大道通罗马。5. Every man has his weak side.人人都有缺点?6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?7.

24、 Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun.人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。9. All things are difficult before they are easy.万事开头难。10. Always prepare for a rainy day.未雨绸缪。11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。11 / 1612. Bad news has wings.好

25、事不出门,坏事传千里s the secret13. You have to believe in yourself. That of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键不可以貌取人。14. Don ' t judge a man by his looks.二、常用过渡语1. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。2. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since th

26、en, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。3. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side ofon the other side of, at the foot/top/end of, inthe middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等 .4. 表因果的过渡语:for, since,as,because of, thu

27、s, so, as a result (of)等 .5. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of 等。# / 166. 表列举的过渡语: for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on 等。in addition to, as but also , ' s more, moreover7. 表推进的过渡语: on

28、one hand on the other hand well, still, also, in other words, not only besides, in addition,furthermore, what 等.8. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all,above all等 .三、常用句型1. 重点句型(1) It ' s adj for sb to do(2) so that 如此 太 而不能 such that(3) not until 直到才做对某人来说以至于 to

29、o to do 如此 以至于例: I didn ' t go to bed until my mother came back.(4) The reason why +句子 is that +句子 的原因是The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。 )(6) That is because + 句子(7) It is said that +句子那是因为据说 It is reported(8) There is no doubt that +句子 毫无疑问(9) It goes with

30、out saying that + 毫无疑问(10) There is no need to do(11) There is no point in doing2. 提建议句子 不言而喻,没必要做做某事毫无意义that + 句子 据报道15 / 16had better (not) do最好 ( 不 ) 做It 's +adj./n. of/for sb. to doI suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做be supposed to do 应该做If I were you, I would do我要是你的话,我会做Don' t forget to do=Remember to do.怎么样 ?Why not do / why don ' t you do ? 为什么不How about / what about doing3. 表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love

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