题型6书面表达

1、今天今天是父亲节。假定你是李华是父亲节。假定你是李华, 请给你的美国笔友请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件写一封电子邮件, 谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。别的日子。要点如下要点如下: 1. 表述你与父亲间的情感表述你与父亲间的情感;2. 为父亲制作一张卡片为父亲制作一张卡片;3. 帮助父亲做点事帮助父亲做点事;4. 陪父亲散步等。陪父亲散步等。注意注意:1. 词数词数80100;2. 请不要逐句翻译请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥可适当发挥;3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。不计入总词数。一、中考热身一、中考

2、热身Dear John, Its Fathers Day today. I ts a special day, isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are god friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, w

3、ith my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, Ill take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. Im sure hell be very happy. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im loo

4、king forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua书面书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力进行表达的能力; 同时同时, 还考查学生英文书写的规范性、还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。美观性等。(一一) 常见的书面表达题型常见的书面表达题型1. 根据根据文体归类文体归类: 日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺贺 卡卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。 然而然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融许多

5、试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为为 一体一体, 形成复合型的写作形成复合型的写作。二、解题技法二、解题技法2. 根据所提供的材料形式归类根据所提供的材料形式归类: 图画作文、图表作文图画作文、图表作文、 提纲提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的的 控制性控制性, 又有一定的开放性又有一定的开放性, 为考生展示其写作能力为考生展示其写作能力提提 供供了发挥的空间了发挥的空间。(二二) 如何写出优美的文章如何写出优美的文章1. 选准词语选准词语1) 语言语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语语,

6、 切忌使用生僻的词汇。切忌使用生僻的词汇。2) 选词要达意选词要达意, 英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短短 语语, 切忌混淆用法。切忌混淆用法。3) 用词要简明扼要用词要简明扼要, 在不确定的情况下在不确定的情况下, 宁可用常用词宁可用常用词简简 单单明了地表达信息明了地表达信息。2. 写好句子写好句子1) 运用运用所学词汇、短语所学词汇、短语, 结合一定的语法知识结合一定的语法知识, 按照按照句句子子 的的结构特点结构特点, 直接用英语写出相应句子。直接用英语写出相应句子。2) 运用固定句式表达信息运用固定句式表达信息, 把比较复杂的句子分成两把比较复杂的句

7、子分成两个个 或或两个以上的简单句子两个以上的简单句子, 减少写错句的几率。减少写错句的几率。3) 把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出出 来来, 这样可提高文章的可读性这样可提高文章的可读性, 但在没有把握的情况但在没有把握的情况下下 慎慎用。用。4) 遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时, 可以在保持原意的可以在保持原意的基础基础 上上, 用不同的表达方式写出来用不同的表达方式写出来。3. 设计段落设计段落 一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确正确 运用运用连接词使语言衔接

8、自然、行文流畅。连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。4. 书写规范、卷面整洁。书写规范、卷面整洁。(三三) 如何提升写作如何提升写作1. 熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。2. 收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。3. 坚持常规练习。即坚持常规练习。即: 词词词组词组句子句子段落段落 篇章。切记篇章。切记: 简单句是主菜简单句是主菜, 要做到运用自如要做到运用自如; 复杂复杂 句句是佐料是佐料, 有之增色有之增色, 缺之乏味缺之乏味, 但不可舍本逐末但不可舍本逐末, 以免以免 弄巧成拙弄巧成拙。4

9、. 仔细审题仔细审题, 要点齐全要点齐全, 人称及时态运用正确人称及时态运用正确。例例1: 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以 “拥抱大自然拥抱大自然” 为为主题的户外拓展夏令营主题的户外拓展夏令营, 其中包括小组自由活动其中包括小组自由活动。 请请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。提示词语提示词语: climb mountains; go fishing; pick fruits; have a campfire (篝火晚会篝火晚会)要求要求:1. 写明你们组计划要做的具体活动写明你们组计划要做的具体活动, 并给出理由并给出理由;2. 提示

10、词语仅供参考提示词语仅供参考, 可增减内容可增减内容;3. 词数词数80100。开头已给出。开头已给出, 不计入总词数不计入总词数;4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。 We are going for a camp this summer. Im glad to make a plan for our group. _ 解析解析: 第一步第一步: 认真仔细地阅读提示认真仔细地阅读提示, 思考所提供的信息思考所提供的信息, 计划计划 文章文章大致内容大致内容;第二步第二步: 根据信息要求遣词造句根据信息要求遣词造句, 连句成文连句成文;第三步第三步:

11、通读全文通读全文, 纠正错误纠正错误, 书写整洁。书写整洁。写作要点写作要点: 1. 具体的活动要丰富多彩具体的活动要丰富多彩;2. 写出安排这些活动的理由。写出安排这些活动的理由。注意注意: 此文是计划打算此文是计划打算, 应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。参考范文参考范文 We are going for a camp this summer. Im glad to make a plan for our group. First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can en

12、joy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. After that, well have a fruit picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better. Whats more, there will be a campfire. We can enjoy ourselves by singing, dancing and telling stories. Wont it be fantastic to share the rela

13、xing moment with friends? We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school, and I believe well have a wonderful time together.精彩再现精彩再现:1. 文章内容完整文章内容完整, 叙述清楚叙述清楚, 要点一目了然要点一目了然;2. 使用了使用了first of all, after that, whats more 表顺序的表顺序的副副 词词来使文章条理更清晰来使文章条理更清晰, 更流畅更流畅;

14、3. 经典句型经典句型:1) we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.2) Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?3) I believe well have a wonderful time together.What to doWhat not to doturn off the lightnot use oneoff chopsticks(一

15、次性一次性筷子筷子)save as much paper aspossiblenot spend money buyingunnecessary things.例例2: 近年来近年来, “光盘行动光盘行动(Clean Plate Campaign)” 悄然流悄然流 行行, 提倡提倡 “节约型社会节约型社会 (economized society)” 已成已成 共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息, 用英语为某英用英语为某英 语报社写一篇短文语报社写一篇短文, 谈谈作为一名中学生谈谈作为一名中学生, 在日常生在日常生 活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费活中应该如何勤俭节约、反

16、对浪费, 并作简要评论。并作简要评论。注意注意:1) 短文须包括上述要点短文须包括上述要点, 应适当增加细节应适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯以使行文连贯; 2) 词数词数: 80词左右词左右, 短文的标题和开头已给短文的标题和开头已给出出 (不计入不计入总总 词数词数)。Lets Start with the Things Around Us! Recently, the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an econo

17、mized society.As a middle school student, I think _解析解析: 第一步第一步: 认真阅读题目要求认真阅读题目要求, 仔细观察表格中的内容仔细观察表格中的内容;第二步第二步: 根据提示内容根据提示内容, 把握好文章的中心把握好文章的中心, 适度发挥适度发挥。 选用选用合适的副词使文章条理清晰合适的副词使文章条理清晰;第三步第三步: 通读全文通读全文, 检查要点是否遗漏检查要点是否遗漏, 纠正错误纠正错误, 书写书写要要 整洁整洁;注意注意: 不仅要写出生活中不仅要写出生活中 “勤俭节约勤俭节约, 反对浪费反对浪费” 的实例的实例, 更更重要的是重

18、要的是 “作作简要评价简要评价”, 这才是文章的点睛这才是文章的点睛之之 笔笔。参考范文参考范文Lets Start with the Things Around Us! Recently, the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society. As a middle school student, I think we should join in the campaign. We c

19、an start with the things around us. Firstly, make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly, we can save as much paper as possible. Thirdly, it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. Whats more, we must not spend

20、money buying unnecessary things. When we eat, wed better not use oneoff chopsticks and we mustnt waste food. In a word, saving energy is very important. Lets work together from now on!精彩再现精彩再现: 1. 整篇文章结构完整整篇文章结构完整, 内容详尽内容详尽, 要点清晰要点清晰;2. 层次清晰。先表明自己观点层次清晰。先表明自己观点, 后用后用firstly, secondly, thirdly, whats

21、 more表顺序的副词把作者观点一一表顺序的副词把作者观点一一陈陈 列列, 清楚明了清楚明了, 条理分明。后又用条理分明。后又用in a word作出总结作出总结;3. 经典句型经典句型:1) We can save as much paper as possible.2) Its important for us to .3) saving energy is very important.三、实战强化三、实战强化A 你你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以 “My special _” 为题用英语写一篇短文为题用英语写一篇短文, 描述你家庭的

22、描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。要求要求: 1. 在在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象题目空格处填入你要描述的对象, 如如grandma, teacher 或或friend等等;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 80词左右词左右。My Special Grandma My grandma is special to me because were like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secret

23、s between us. When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing shes best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her

24、 as well.B阅读阅读使人明智使人明智, 阅读使人充实阅读使人充实, 某英文报为了了解中学某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况生的课外阅读情况, 向广大中学生做调查。请根据下面向广大中学生做调查。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文图表信息写一篇短文, 介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及阅读计划。阅读情况及阅读计划。提示提示: 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息短文应包括图表中的全部信息, 条理清楚条理清楚, 行文连贯行文连贯; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3. 词数不少于词数不少于80, 开头已给出开头已给出, 不计入总词

25、数。不计入总词数。Reading Outside Class As we all know, reading has a lot of benefit. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about whats going on around the world. I

26、 also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read ebooks because theyre bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night. Summer vacation is comi

27、ng. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. Im sure reading can make a difference to my life.C在日常生活中在日常生活中, 你看到身边有哪些不良现象你看到身边有哪些不良现象? 请列举一请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。提示提示: speak loudly, cut in line (插队插队), waste food

28、, unfriendly (冷漠的冷漠的), offer no help .要求要求:1. 参考提示语参考提示语, 可适当发挥可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺语句通顺, 意思连贯意思连贯, 书写工整书写工整;3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;4. 词数词数: 不少于不少于80词。词。(开头和结尾已给出开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入但不计入总总 词数词数) In our daily life, I usually see some bad behavior around us. For example, I often hear people speak and laugh l

29、oudly in public. It is too noisy. Some people cut in line while others are waiting. It makes me unhappy. And in our school dining hall, I often see students waste food. At times, people seem unfriendly and offer no help when others are in trouble. For me, my parents are strict with me. They often te

30、ll me to behave well. So I never drop litter about. And I never draw on the desk or on the wall. I am polite to old people. I think if everyone can think more of others, well have a better living environment.D 不久前不久前, 全国有部分省市出台一项新政策全国有部分省市出台一项新政策: 高考英语将高考英语将由由150分降为分降为100分分, 此事在国内引起极大争议。有的人此事在国内引起极大

31、争议。有的人认为此举很好认为此举很好, 有的人则认为不妥。作为一名中学生有的人则认为不妥。作为一名中学生, 你你的看法是什么的看法是什么? 请分析其原因。请分析其原因。注意注意:1. 词数词数80词左右词左右; 开头已给出开头已给出, 但不计入总词数但不计入总词数;2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相相 关关信息信息, 否则不予评分否则不予评分;3. 参考词汇参考词汇: reform 改革改革; master 掌握掌握; advanced 先进的先进的 Not long before, a new policy aroused a h

32、eated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100. As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We shou

33、ld master it to better know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. Whats more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English. In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should lear

34、n it well.E我们的生活中处处充满着爱我们的生活中处处充满着爱, 有父母的爱有父母的爱, 有老师的爱有老师的爱, 有同学的爱有同学的爱, 有朋友的爱有朋友的爱. 请以请以 “Love Around Me (我我身边的爱身边的爱)” 为题为题, 写一篇短文写一篇短文, 内容要点如下内容要点如下:爱你的人爱你的人 爱的体现爱的体现父母父母为你做早餐为你做早餐; 送你上学送你上学.老师老师传授知识传授知识; 照顾你照顾你.同学同学一起学习一起学习; 和睦相处和睦相处.朋友朋友在网上交流在网上交流; 分享快乐与烦恼分享快乐与烦恼.参考词汇参考词汇: 1. receive love; 2. co

35、ok; 3. teach knowledge; 4. get on . with; 5. chat online, share; 6. thank要求要求:1. 题目开头已给出题目开头已给出, 不计入总词数内不计入总词数内;2. 包括所有内容要点包括所有内容要点, 不要逐句翻译不要逐句翻译, 可以适当发挥可以适当发挥。 (参考词汇仅供参考参考词汇仅供参考);3. 语句通顺语句通顺, 语法正确语法正确, 80个词左右个词左右; 4. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名名 称称。Love Around Me There is lots of

36、love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots

37、 of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great prog

38、ress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”F 放学放学回家的公交车上回家的公交车上, 你看见一位老爷爷和他十岁左你看见一位老爷爷和他十岁左右的孙子上了车右的孙子上了车, 老人拿着书包老人拿着书包, 你给老人让座你给老人让座, 老人的老人的孙子却坐了下来孙子却坐了下来, 还大声喊着向老人要水喝还大声喊着向老人要水喝, 并在窗户上并在窗户上乱写乱画乱写乱画, 对此请写一篇短文对此请写一篇短文, 谈谈你对这件事的看法。谈谈你对这件事的看法。参考词汇参考词汇: grandson, shout to, respect

39、(尊重尊重) On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boys schoolbag. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water, then drew so

40、mething on the window of the bus. When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.G 假如假如你校将举行以你校将举行以 “中学生自我保护中学生自我保护” 为主题的英语为主题的英语征文活动征文活动, 请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。提示提示:1. 不带管制刀具不带管制刀具 (restricted knives)

41、 到校到校;2. 上下楼梯不要拥挤上下楼梯不要拥挤;3. 注意饮食安全注意饮食安全;4. 注意交通安全注意交通安全, 遇到紧急遇到紧急情况情况 (emergency) 要报警。要报警。要求要求:1. 短文应包括所提示的内容短文应包括所提示的内容, 可以适当发挥可以适当发挥;2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露个人身短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露个人身份的信息份的信息;3. 词数词数: 80词左右。开头已给出词左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。不计入总词数。How To Protect Ourselves How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students. Firstly, dont take restricted knives to school. They might hurt our classmates or ourselves. Secondly, there are