高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信学习教案

1、会计学1高中英语作文写作高中英语作文写作如何写建议信如何写建议信第一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。，条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和语法多（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词第1页/共52页第二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对

2、这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2. 对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。第2页/共52页第三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。3. 基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)第3页/共52页第四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分

3、。4. 注意事项：注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因原因，建议的内容内容，提出建议的理由理由，提出的理由要入情入理理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌礼貌当先当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力；2）建议的角度要多样化角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议；3）符合英文信件的基本格式基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。一般现在时和一般将来时。第4页/共52页第五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1. After I re

4、ad your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of 5.I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.6.You have asked me for some advice with regard to a

5、nd I will try to make some conductive suggestions.7. You have asked me for my advice about/on 第5页/共52页第六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。B. 表达建议（表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that3. If I were you, I would4. Why not ?/ How (What) about doing 5. is

6、a good/great idea.6. You may consider doing 7. It would seem/seems to me that you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finally,

7、/Meanwhile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, 第6页/共52页第七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.3.I will be more than happy t

8、o see improvements in this regard.4.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.6.In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.第7页/共52页第八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校

9、门前交通拥挤现象，包长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：括以下要点：参考词汇参考词汇: 穿行穿行 thread ones way 天桥天桥 overpass 问题问题建议建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小, 家长接送。交通家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第8页/共52页第九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的

10、，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的体裁是什么？文章的体裁是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态) (when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时第9页/共52页第十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsSt

11、ep 2 Make sentences Step3. Form a passage and polish第10页/共52页第十一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。适当运用模适当运用模板板第11页/共52页第十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。模板二：模板二：Dear _(对象对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning _(问问题题). First and for the most, _(建议一建议一). In addition, _(建议二建议二). Whats more _(建议三建议三). I hope youll find thes

12、e proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming第12页/共52页第十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposal

13、s useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you / your _(祝愿祝愿). Yours sincerely Li Ming 第13页/共52页第十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is import

14、ant to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具有时根据需要具体到某一反面体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua第14页/共5

15、2页第十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小, 家长接家长接送。交通更拥挤；送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。 第15页/共52页第十六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。学校与一所小学毗邻学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTh

16、eres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推荐句型：推荐句型：There be+并列句并列句非谓语结构非谓语结构Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.第16页/共52页第十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分

17、。润色润色小建议小建议Next to a primary school将介词短语提前（全倒装）将介词短语提前（全倒装） stands/lies/is our school, faced with / facing a main street.可将可将stand next to替换为高级词汇替换为高级词汇/短语短语be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与与毗邻毗邻在在对面对面 be opposite to第17页/共52页第十八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 The traffic is bus

18、y during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road, 第18页/共52页第十九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。润色润色小建议小建议“高

19、峰期高峰期”可意译可意译:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙交通繁忙”可译为可译为:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被被堵塞堵塞/塞满塞满第19页/共52页第二十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 加之孩子小加之孩子小,家长接送家长接送,交通更拥挤交通更拥挤 sendto, fetch. , which 非谓语结构非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fe

20、tch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.第20页/共52页第二十一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ Whats worse, many parents coming to pick up th

21、eir children make the street more crowded.In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that chi

22、ldren have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.第21页/共52页第二十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为：可意译为： so. that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traf

23、fic heavier.making 可替换为：可替换为：causing, leading to, resulting in“sendfetch” 可替换为短语：可替换为短语：pick up润色润色小建议小建议第22页/共52页第二十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型固定句型It is +ad

24、j. for to do.第23页/共52页第二十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。1. Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.润色润色小建议小建议2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译： 适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词： it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger第

25、24页/共52页第二十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。My suggestion is that the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单句

26、简单句第25页/共52页第二十六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, 润色润色小建议小建议2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government shouldA. 适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 语义的意译语义的意译3. Seeing these matters, never will

27、I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词I strongly suggest, active/effective measures第26页/共52页第二十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第三步第三步. 连句成文连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性但要注意：篇章的连贯性Next to a primary school stands our scho

28、ol, facing a main street. _, its crammed with cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an over

29、pass.A. As a consequence B. According to the phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.第27页/共52页第二十八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第28页/共52页第二十九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第29页/共52页第三十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第30页/共52页第三十一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第31页/共52页第三十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第32页/共5

30、2页第三十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第33页/共52页第三十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第34页/共52页第三十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。优点：考生运用倒装句，优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语

31、言功底。和语言功底。第35页/共52页第三十六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。第36页/共52页第三十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第37页/共52页第三十八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第38页/共52页第三十九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第39页/共52页第四十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Congestion n. 阻塞阻塞, 拥挤拥挤, 充血充血第40页/共52页第四十一页，编辑于星期三：六点

32、 五十三分。第41页/共52页第四十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象象整体三部分整体三部分1. Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题第42页/共52页第四十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班； 看电视，报纸，杂志；看电视，报纸，杂志； 学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友；交中国朋友；第43页/共52页第四十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your l

33、etter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chines

34、e whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Ch

35、inese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua第44页/共52页第四十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1. 词数：120左右； 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster, Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.第45页/共52页第四十六页，编辑于

36、星期三：六点 五十三分。常见连接词常见连接词表时间关系：表时间关系： when / after / before / until / not until as soon as / later / afterwards / soon / lately / recently / since / eventually / from then on / in the meanwhile (meantime) / then / finally/ at last / all of a sudden / after a while / since then / immediately / instantly

37、 / every time / each time / the first time第46页/共52页第四十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点：罗列观点： Firstly / First of all / To begin with / Above all / In the first place / On one hand For one thing, Secondly / Besides / Apart from / Whats more, / In addition， / Furthermore, / Moreover，/ Worse still, / To make matters worse, / as well / On the